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i know u have a lot of novels so u most likely dont have much time but could we get a time for this final reboot i dont want u to rush and lower the quality but r u even still planing to continue this novel any time soon?
i still love this series and sometimes read it back, i know that forcing urself to write will make bad content so i am happy to hear this (final) reboot u r working on will take us to endgame and i regards to his absorbing powers maybe create a prototype-like (from the game) symbiote and connect it to knull god of the symbiotes. + more H scenes :)
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By the way if you reboot it like this .... then please consider to skip the part which you need to update like which harem the mc want to fill in because for me i want your idea and realistic on this novel you only update those Q and A when you stablized the story which is ... when the mc enter the part seems to be interested thats when you give Q and A if the potential harem should be enter the relationship with mc ..... and the part of reason you reboot this story because on xavier arc with mc .... cuz even if the mc saving the universe it cannot deny he's harem would be threatened ... what i want to say is .... don't make this novel too dark make it balance .... by balance you could write it without stress yourself and your reader .... think a head of time .... your story kinda interesting but the twist and plot make me kinda loss ....thats why by balance you could make try to cover those error .... i remove your novel from my library atm .... when you cover those error then i add it back .... we are fellow fanfic but you step ahead try to become author so take it as your experience to make your imigination wider good luck my brethrean XD
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I really loved the past version,and will most likely love this version also. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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This book is awesome and so is the old one but I like how he’s going back to fix things which most authors don’t do and he reads his comments and makes fix for what people have asked for which makes him one of my most favorite authors ever on this app so keep making it happen and thank you for the amazing content
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Can you please not make him an arrogant asshole. I mean as soon as it started he started talking **** yo everyone like he is the ****. Stole money from batman and many other things. Dont get me wrong I like the story just calm his ass down a little because he really needs it.
thank god this is back i loved the past version i hope you can bring the merging of dc and marvel to a higher level and make his powers more related to dc and marvel etc cosmic power, phenoix force, the speed force. also more H scenes with longer and more details ;)
Make him Bron as Harry ......with wonderful harem ......................................................?...........................................................................................
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I liked the previous version of this novel, but I’m looking forward to this reboot. However if possible can you try not to have mc interrupted mid R-18 scene like before as much as possible? I say this because it’s like getting your hopes up when you see R-18 but have to wait 10+ chapters for it to actually happen because of others or something interrupting mc mid scene. Other than that I’m loving the novel llllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll.
If i am correct this is the reboot. I liked the former novel too but nouw with the rebppt i have high hopes fore this novel. Zo author keep it up the great work
where does your reboot of the spiderman fanfic fit in as u said u were restarting that and it isn't on your list!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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i know u have a lot of novels so u most likely dont have much time but could we get a time for this final reboot i dont want u to rush and lower the quality but r u even still planing to continue this novel any time soon?
i still love this series and sometimes read it back, i know that forcing urself to write will make bad content so i am happy to hear this (final) reboot u r working on will take us to endgame and i regards to his absorbing powers maybe create a prototype-like (from the game) symbiote and connect it to knull god of the symbiotes. + more H scenes :)
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By the way if you reboot it like this .... then please consider to skip the part which you need to update like which harem the mc want to fill in because for me i want your idea and realistic on this novel you only update those Q and A when you stablized the story which is ... when the mc enter the part seems to be interested thats when you give Q and A if the potential harem should be enter the relationship with mc ..... and the part of reason you reboot this story because on xavier arc with mc .... cuz even if the mc saving the universe it cannot deny he's harem would be threatened ... what i want to say is .... don't make this novel too dark make it balance .... by balance you could write it without stress yourself and your reader .... think a head of time .... your story kinda interesting but the twist and plot make me kinda loss ....thats why by balance you could make try to cover those error .... i remove your novel from my library atm .... when you cover those error then i add it back .... we are fellow fanfic but you step ahead try to become author so take it as your experience to make your imigination wider good luck my brethrean XD
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Reveal Spoiler I really loved the past version,and will most likely love this version also. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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This book is awesome and so is the old one but I like how he’s going back to fix things which most authors don’t do and he reads his comments and makes fix for what people have asked for which makes him one of my most favorite authors ever on this app so keep making it happen and thank you for the amazing content
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Can you please not make him an arrogant asshole. I mean as soon as it started he started talking **** yo everyone like he is the ****. Stole money from batman and many other things. Dont get me wrong I like the story just calm his ass down a little because he really needs it.
thank god this is back i loved the past version i hope you can bring the merging of dc and marvel to a higher level and make his powers more related to dc and marvel etc cosmic power, phenoix force, the speed force. also more H scenes with longer and more details ;)
Make him Bron as Harry ......with wonderful harem ......................................................?...........................................................................................
Reveal Spoiler I liked the previous version of this novel, but I’m looking forward to this reboot. However if possible can you try not to have mc interrupted mid R-18 scene like before as much as possible? I say this because it’s like getting your hopes up when you see R-18 but have to wait 10+ chapters for it to actually happen because of others or something interrupting mc mid scene. Other than that I’m loving the novel llllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll.
If i am correct this is the reboot. I liked the former novel too but nouw with the rebppt i have high hopes fore this novel. Zo author keep it up the great work
where does your reboot of the spiderman fanfic fit in as u said u were restarting that and it isn't on your list!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!