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An ordinary carefree boy with a strong personality is drawn into the supernatural after finding out that he is the incarnate of a Spirit Lord Monarch and the sword that has been in their shrine for centuries is one of his destined sword, he struggles to go back to a normal life, trying to live up the expectation of his previous predecessor. He get helps from great entities and embarks get ready to claim glory as he sets to be a man standing at the martial peak.
am a newbie author. and this is my second story. comment if there's a problem with the story, for a better story
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I love how the first chapter turned out, the writing quality is good, the world background is impressive and the main character is well made. It's just a bit long for paragraphs, I advise you to limit your paragraphs by 3 sentences each, you have spelling issues but you can just edit it out. I already pointed out your flaws, that's all, and good job fellow novelist!
After noticing that action and cultivation stories are usually the best, I decided to publish this second story. As always, comment if you don't like it. Am a newbie after all and need to experience both success and failures. I wanna be that carp that leaps over the Dragon gate hehehe.
Not a bad story. Nice imaginative writing, although some errors were seen, its an impressive work of art. Am impressed. Honestly i am. The fact that Xiao Yan is not the only actor, and his classmates are also included is also an wonderful choice. Although, i would have loved it if it was a harem