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In the realm of immortal cultivation, Lu Changsheng traversed as a peasant youth, overlooked by a celestial sect. Yet, endowed with the Multitude Progeny System, he could earn rewards by propagating his lineage, nurturing offspring.
Thus, Lu Changsheng began his journey by marrying into a cultivation family, embarking on a path of intrigue, networking, and fostering descendants to expand his family's cultivation legacy.
As the cycles of time passed and epochs changed, countless supreme beings in the realms of immortality, formidable figures in the demonic path, revered saints among the demon races, and peerless beauties rose and fell, fading into the river of years.
Only Changsheng's family endured, immutable through the ages, perpetually existing, towering atop the path of immortality, sharing longevity with the heavens and earth, radiating brilliance akin to the sun and moon.
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Write a reviewIt’s not a bad novel. The pace of this story is very slow if you consider the advance in time related to his abilities. Only some of his wives so far have been described by the looks, saying very beautiful is not getting 5 stars for character design. There hasn’t been anything about the world description outside of his home, landmass wise. The grammar is very good, the best part so far. All 3 rewards are dumb at his current level. Talisman making is Op but he has to level up his cultivation to use it to the max. Which he has very slow cultivation it’ll take a decade at least to get there maybe 100 years. Beauty refinement technique, useless. The talisman is powerful but is also requires higher cultivation, yes it can be used but at 10% power.
Reveal SpoilerOverall the story is good and characters are decent but the translation annoys me because the third level of cultivation is core formation and fourth is nascent should and it keeps referencing core formation cultivators as nascent soul and it gets mixed up a ton in later chapters
Previously, a week ago, i contacted the online service to inform that the author/editor of the novel “Becoming a Son-in-Law to establish an Immortal Familly“ kept making translation error. He/She still confuse a Core Formation True Immortal to a Nascent Soul True Lord, they kept writting Nascent Soul True Immortal instead of Core Formation True Immortal. This mistake has been common ever since the introduction of Core Formation Taiyin True Immortal when she rap#d mc. Except for this translation error that now make the reading annoying the rest is quite good
Reveal Spoilerbook is quite good, it's just works. in this MC got cheat where by having children he can had sum of their potential (spirit root) and if they power up he can have that too, just a copy of it, not like snatching or something. and half of second generation, quarter of 3rd generation and so on. he mary many women. (two figures) it has name mistake in Level 3 Cultivator/Level 4 Cultivator, you had pay attention on it, other than that their isn't any major mistake, this mistake can also be distinguished by words they might look similar but are different for both level I enjoyed it 😁 I read 1410 chapter and I will return after chapter accumulated I am not few chapter read daily guy thanks
Excelente história pode parecer lento o avanço mas isso que torna especial. não é um avanço chato e corrido onde o personagem já fica op e não tem mais o que fazer. nessa historia ele leva a família dele junto com ele fazendo alguns membros da família bem forte. mostrando como realmente seria o crescimento de uma família forte igual nas novelas que estamos acostumados. vale muito a pena ler!
Overall, I like this story. Not fully 5/5 star because there are problem with sentence structures and name. Firstly, the sentence structure is somewhat separated due to line by line structure which is not a problem to other but to me, it is seems imcompleted due a whole sentence separated into different sentences. And secondly, the name has some problem on title and name structure. I saw some name like Lu daoist, Lu brother and other similar structures give me mind hemorrhoids. Please fix it into this format for english speaking audiences: title(daoist, elder, etc) then name.
I'm currently in 1781 and here's my review on it is very good for slice of life ,romance and family drama .u will find it very engaging. there may be some chapters (maining early chapters below 500 ) where translation is not very good and confusing but later ones won't give you any problem.. as the ur doubts on how the MC maybe ... rest assured...he is loving husband and parents to his wifes and childrens .
It is a masterful blend of intrigue and cultivation. Lu Changsheng’s journey from overlooked youth to an immortal patriarch is both compelling and immersive. The novel's rich world-building and unique Multitude Progeny System create a fresh take on the genre. As Lu Changsheng navigates family dynamics and cultivates his legacy, the story weaves an epic saga of resilience and ambition. Fans of "The Patriarch is Taking Concubine Again" will find this novel equally captivating, with its engaging plot and well-developed characters. Highly recommended for lovers of immortal cultivation tales!
I'm currently at chapter 670 of the MTL. The MC is basically Israel: He sends his children into forces from both the demonic and righteous paths and He marry important people in high position ( "his own people") in high positions within major sects. All of this to secure the MC's interest in living peaceful, prosperous life. And he stays hidden in the shadows.
Don't bother with reading. Full bot of comments. It is machine translation so utterly bad. Never pay any pennies for this sh*t. Horrendous translation.
Ah, Webnovel — the magical land where translators clock out the second a paywall shows up. Why bother with quality when the cash is already rolling in, right? And of course, let’s not forget the brilliant decision to hide the author’s note (chapter 69) behind a paywall. Because obviously, what readers really want is to pay for the privilege of hearing an author ramble about their personal life. Wow — how generous of you! I’m just drowning in money and looking for new ways to set it on fire. Thanks for the opportunity! Now, as for the novel itself… The structure is a mess. Dialogue is thrown at you before you even know who’s speaking or what’s happening. It’s like playing a guessing game every scene: “Who said that? Why? What’s going on?” To make it worse, every single chapter title ends with "_1" — like someone just bulk-uploaded the raw drafts and hit "publish" without even glancing at the result. And as a cherry on top, the writing sticks to third person narration almost religiously — and not in a good way. It just adds another layer of confusion.
Good, solid cultivation/system/lottery novel. HOWEVER, prepare to be perpetually confused about the cultivation realms and their order (at least maybe until MC catches up for definitive answer). Besides slight pronoun/gender translation errors the rest of the translation is pretty good. PS: yes, I'm aware in general wuxia/xianxia cultivation ranks are: qi refinement, foundation establishment, core formation/golden core, nascent soul, ect. But this translation has consistently preluded and mixed up everything to do with core formation and nascent soul so it's confusing whether this translation mistake was intended or this novel just has those two ranks swapped.
Reveal SpoilerPretty good for a cheat based clan development novel but a bit too slow and character hides his cultivation a bit too much to my liking. By chapter 500 he is still Foundation Establishment and just starts looking into getting his family their own territory.
Reveal SpoilerI loved this Novel , basically Mc starts off with a trash spirit root ,but joins a family as a son in law (nice way to say breeder) .He marries 2-3 mortal women and slowly gets rewards when his children born from the system he slowly rises his reputation by making talismens which was a gift given by the system .From here on in it's like a slice of life Mc doesn't bother anyone unless they come for him but by the time they come for Mc , Mc stronger than them lol . Yeah basically no humiliation type of shit here , But there are times where he gets looked down upon cause he literally breeds with wives all day (but this doesn't effect him the slightest and nobody causes too much trouble regarding this ). He gets stronger later on and builds his on family i won't tell much but it's a good novel compared to the many shitty ones out there with too much extra drama.
Nice slice of life, slow grind to immortality. Not the book to read if you are expecting a ton of action, I’m at chapter 73 and I believe there has only been two fights. One where he was ambushed and saved before he even entered qi refining and one where robbers attack him. He’s just a man seeking to spread his lineage and grow stronger as a result. Slow snow ball build. I just wish the chapters were longer or more each day as the slow pace of the story is made slower by the amount released. Hardly any translation errors, I think there have only been a few pronoun mix ups.