3.88
Share your thoughts with others
Write a reviewbit.ly/3LyRF1N ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
the book is just ok. .......................................................................................................................................
Π»ΡΠ»ΡΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΡΠΊΡΠΊΡΡΠΊΡΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠΎΠΏΠΎΠΎΠ°Π°Π»Π°Π»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»Π²Π»Π»Π°Π²Π»Π²Π»ΡΠ»ΡΠ»ΡΠ»Π²Π»Π²Π»Π²Π»Π²Π»Π»Π²Π»Π²Π»Π²Π»Π°Π»Π°Π»Π°Π»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»Π»ΠΊΠΊΠ»Π»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»Π»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊ Π»ΡΠ»ΡΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΡΠΊΡΠΊΡΡΠΊΡΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠΎΠΏΠΎΠΎΠ°Π°Π»Π°Π»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»Π²Π»Π»Π°Π²Π»Π²Π»ΡΠ»ΡΠ»ΡΠ»Π²Π»Π²Π»Π²Π»Π²Π»Π»Π²Π»Π²Π»Π²Π»Π°Π»Π°Π»Π°Π»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»Π»ΠΊΠΊΠ»Π»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»Π»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊ
Check out my naruto fanfic . the Mc is from a hidden Clan and creates his own Village . . . . . . . . . . . .
..................................................................................................................................................
πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
.......................................................................................................................................................
ΠΠ°ΡΠ΅ΠΌ Π΄Π΅Π»Π°ΡΡ ΡΠ΅ΠΈΠ½ΠΊΠ°ΡΠ½Π°ΡΠΈΡ Π΅ΡΠ»ΠΈ Π²ΠΎΡΠΏΠΎΠΌΠΈΠ½Π°Π½ΠΈΡ Π·Π°ΠΏΠ΅ΡΠ°ΡΠ°Π»ΠΈ ΡΡΠΎ Π±ΡΠ΅Π΄ ππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏ
First and foremost donβt tell us all this nonsense at the start just discover them as he goes along. second donβt give something to take it away. if you have to take it away donβt give it in the first place. Third learn how nature and bloodline releases work. Fourth donβt give your character 100 abilIties or talents give him one that makes him special as the MC then the rest is just character progression. Finally, and this was the final straw for why I stopped reading. If youβre going to pick a different village actually come up with plot and relevent stories that make us attached to the character. Donβt skip his friendships and connections and then get confused when no one cares that they die. The entire bell test is pointless because the whole time all i can think about is how stupid this contexually is. It took me 30 seconds to think of a test where he had them search through the village and track him like tag in a certain timeframe. Even if youβre lazy anything is better than a copy paste of storywise content that does not fit.
I like it. More update please. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
A nice naruto ff , please don't make the mc too op too early , that's my only wish as i really love the story t'il now
πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππNiceπππππππππππππππππππππππ
Just read it πππ ............ . ..... .............. ............ . ..... .............. ............ . ..... .............. ............
.......................................................................................................................................................
Nice ................................................................. ................................................................. .................................................................
I forgot to give my review still story is interesting and author is nice what more do I need. I am little strict with reviews so 4.4 just because of little favouritism I don't need to give any criticism because I already typed a lot in comment section. just keep writing don't drop see it to the end
FightI don't have ah phone number isnot youcan you please send me the address and I will send you a picture of the same time I don't have ah phone number is not working and
EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP Don't like the author's name. Seems narcissistic and arrogant. Who tf would call themselves that.
...................................................................................................................................................
Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp
Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp
Yes please author san Stay in the naruto universe please if u do that u are a god πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
nice fanfic keep up ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
very good history don't stop writing.............................................................................................................................
thankssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
................................................ ...........................................................................................
bit.ly/3LyRF1N ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
the book is just ok. .......................................................................................................................................
Π»ΡΠ»ΡΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΡΠΊΡΠΊΡΡΠΊΡΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠΎΠΏΠΎΠΎΠ°Π°Π»Π°Π»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»Π²Π»Π»Π°Π²Π»Π²Π»ΡΠ»ΡΠ»ΡΠ»Π²Π»Π²Π»Π²Π»Π²Π»Π»Π²Π»Π²Π»Π²Π»Π°Π»Π°Π»Π°Π»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»Π»ΠΊΠΊΠ»Π»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»Π»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊ Π»ΡΠ»ΡΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΡΠΊΡΠΊΡΡΠΊΡΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠΎΠΏΠΎΠΎΠ°Π°Π»Π°Π»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»Π²Π»Π»Π°Π²Π»Π²Π»ΡΠ»ΡΠ»ΡΠ»Π²Π»Π²Π»Π²Π»Π²Π»Π»Π²Π»Π²Π»Π²Π»Π°Π»Π°Π»Π°Π»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»Π»ΠΊΠΊΠ»Π»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»Π»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊΠ»ΠΊ
Check out my naruto fanfic . the Mc is from a hidden Clan and creates his own Village . . . . . . . . . . . .
..................................................................................................................................................
πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
.......................................................................................................................................................
ΠΠ°ΡΠ΅ΠΌ Π΄Π΅Π»Π°ΡΡ ΡΠ΅ΠΈΠ½ΠΊΠ°ΡΠ½Π°ΡΠΈΡ Π΅ΡΠ»ΠΈ Π²ΠΎΡΠΏΠΎΠΌΠΈΠ½Π°Π½ΠΈΡ Π·Π°ΠΏΠ΅ΡΠ°ΡΠ°Π»ΠΈ ΡΡΠΎ Π±ΡΠ΅Π΄ ππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏππΏ
First and foremost donβt tell us all this nonsense at the start just discover them as he goes along. second donβt give something to take it away. if you have to take it away donβt give it in the first place. Third learn how nature and bloodline releases work. Fourth donβt give your character 100 abilIties or talents give him one that makes him special as the MC then the rest is just character progression. Finally, and this was the final straw for why I stopped reading. If youβre going to pick a different village actually come up with plot and relevent stories that make us attached to the character. Donβt skip his friendships and connections and then get confused when no one cares that they die. The entire bell test is pointless because the whole time all i can think about is how stupid this contexually is. It took me 30 seconds to think of a test where he had them search through the village and track him like tag in a certain timeframe. Even if youβre lazy anything is better than a copy paste of storywise content that does not fit.
I like it. More update please. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
A nice naruto ff , please don't make the mc too op too early , that's my only wish as i really love the story t'il now
πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππNiceπππππππππππππππππππππππ
Just read it πππ ............ . ..... .............. ............ . ..... .............. ............ . ..... .............. ............
.......................................................................................................................................................
Nice ................................................................. ................................................................. .................................................................
I forgot to give my review still story is interesting and author is nice what more do I need. I am little strict with reviews so 4.4 just because of little favouritism I don't need to give any criticism because I already typed a lot in comment section. just keep writing don't drop see it to the end
FightI don't have ah phone number isnot youcan you please send me the address and I will send you a picture of the same time I don't have ah phone number is not working and
EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP Don't like the author's name. Seems narcissistic and arrogant. Who tf would call themselves that.
...................................................................................................................................................
Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp
Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp
Yes please author san Stay in the naruto universe please if u do that u are a god πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
nice fanfic keep up ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
very good history don't stop writing.............................................................................................................................
thankssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
................................................ ...........................................................................................
PAKURA FOR ROMANCE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!