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It was an amazing story with a system and the progression was nice few time skips but no biggie, sadly the author dropped it i wonder if anyone or the author will rewrite it, and finish the novel it was just getting the the good part of *spoiler#*#. Forming his own security army..
Very Nice Novel. Truly Recommended for those who want to read some slice of life but with action and fantasy touch. Well, everything in this novel is really realistic except the MC tho
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I won't say that this novel is an absolute masterpiece but to say it is just another piece of webnovel original trash would not be true. The concept of a modern empire is imo a severly underdeveloped genre and there is a lot of potential to be mined In it. And at the very least I think the author has done the genre justice even if it is somewhat lacking in most areas. However, it was enjoyable and the novel certainly doesn't lack for any potential. But if the author can make the most out of the potential present that remains to be seen.
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I really like this novel, it’s hard to find bibles like these. Plus with the realism of the novel is a great addition to it. Hope the author continues this novel because it’s really great.
I really like and appreciate this novel. That's why I'm hoping for a graceful return and more exciting chapters.
Such an awesome story. Please continue this story. The main character and the world building is so good. Such an awesome story. Please continue this story. The main character and the world building is so good.
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An awesome novel and it has all that i was looking for in these types of novels, really hope the author continues this book to the end Love and domination 😁✌🏼
Well its an awesome story i just hope its not dropped and the author is just rewriting or else we, fellow readers, will have to search for him, find him and have him write mor chaps Peaceout ** author: please dont drop i really like the story
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This novel is awesome. For me the plot is good and easy to read.I quite heartbroken when is see you posting that this novel is gonna drop. Although rewriting is also good. Just please author-san,release soon the rewrite of this novel. Thank you! God bless!
ORAORAORAROAROAROAROAAORAOARO PLEASE UPDATE THIS NOVEL. IAM VERY LIKE THISE NOVELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL. PLEASE WRITER. THIS NOVEL VERY AWESOME. I HOPE FASTER UPDATE
Why are you still dead. Whyyyyyyyyyyy.... . . . I guess there's no point in keeping it in my library anymore. But i really loved this so here goes 5 stars
Ini adalah novel yg baik, dari segi system, karakter, dan alur cerita yg cukup menarik mirip dengan novel tetangga, tapi perkembangan ceritanya cukup menarik, tapi sayang jarang update jadi membuat saya lelah menunggu dan menanti
The plot is amazing as well the story. The system and mc are both op. It's amazing how the mc just conquers all.
It's a basically a story with a kind and peace loving Mc, who is a good guy. So don't expect any kind of ruthless Mc just because there is a tag. Also I would not recommend this story because Mc is a wimp basically, can't even stand for himself when the time comes, second thing after which I really couldn't read it was when he visited orphanage, yeah he paid the dept that's still acceptable, but when that priest disagreeed to tell information about his parents, he just said OK and walked away,even though he has skills and power to get that information easily, basically he's afraid of using his abilities to help him, because yeah he's a puss.y. So yeah, I would not recommend reading this, unless of course you like wimpy puss.y Mc.
Tempest i will always be willing to support your descion i may not always agree with it but you can always count on me to be their supporting your decisions
Very awesome novel, good plot, the mc builds everything step by step and really shows the in depth planning. I don't understand why the author decided to drop the novel. The only flaw is no present female lead
Good story so far! I recommend it KKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK
I had some high hopes for this novel starting out, but less than halfway through I was disappointed with where the story went. It seemed like this was going to be a business building story, where the MC focuses on creating a company/companies and gather wealth to create his own business empire. I was wrong. He is using his companies to build some empire with his mystical abilities. I'm not sure what his final goal is...might create his own country or something. The MC is very inconsistent with his emotions and how he handles problems. Later in the story this problem is somewhat fixed and he's more hardened when it comes to decisions, so that's a plus I guess. Some of the situations he is involved in come out of no where and do nothing to help with the plot. The school shooting is one of those, he races a guy in Vegas just so he can face smack him, and steals food from buffets...for some reason. Some people may like the mystical modern day system thing, but it's a no for me. If from the beginning it was taking the mystical route, I probably would've been fine, but to start in one direction and then change up like 20 chapters in is a turn off for me. I mean....he can fly....like come on.... This also would've been rated higher by me, but this seems to be dropped? For that reason I had to give it a 2 on stability of updates.
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Good novel but the decision of re writing this novel is up to you and not us but i prefer a re write if your not gonna continue this novel....
Please consider your decision l. Your story is also already perfect. I love it cuz it's no harem. Please finish this novel first More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more chapter s
Good novel but sadly not updated for 3 months. Is this hiatus or dropped 😢😢😢. 140 character 140 character 140 character 140 character 140 character 140 character 140 character 140 character 140 character
I like this novel very much because all the characters that I have come across are described properly and every section of people can read and understand easily without any difficulty and I also like fantasy and adventurous novel very much...
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Interesting story. The pace is very rapid but it seems well researched and ignoring the obvious system fantasy theme, believable. I especially enjoy the no nonsense conveying of a story line rather than trying to add as many words as possible just to have more chapters.
It was an amazing story with a system and the progression was nice few time skips but no biggie, sadly the author dropped it i wonder if anyone or the author will rewrite it, and finish the novel it was just getting the the good part of *spoiler#*#. Forming his own security army..
Very Nice Novel. Truly Recommended for those who want to read some slice of life but with action and fantasy touch. Well, everything in this novel is really realistic except the MC tho
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
I won't say that this novel is an absolute masterpiece but to say it is just another piece of webnovel original trash would not be true. The concept of a modern empire is imo a severly underdeveloped genre and there is a lot of potential to be mined In it. And at the very least I think the author has done the genre justice even if it is somewhat lacking in most areas. However, it was enjoyable and the novel certainly doesn't lack for any potential. But if the author can make the most out of the potential present that remains to be seen.
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I really like this novel, it’s hard to find bibles like these. Plus with the realism of the novel is a great addition to it. Hope the author continues this novel because it’s really great.
I really like and appreciate this novel. That's why I'm hoping for a graceful return and more exciting chapters.
Such an awesome story. Please continue this story. The main character and the world building is so good. Such an awesome story. Please continue this story. The main character and the world building is so good.
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An awesome novel and it has all that i was looking for in these types of novels, really hope the author continues this book to the end Love and domination 😁✌🏼
Well its an awesome story i just hope its not dropped and the author is just rewriting or else we, fellow readers, will have to search for him, find him and have him write mor chaps Peaceout ** author: please dont drop i really like the story
Wheres the rewrite of this novel? Wheres the rewrite of this novel? Wheres the rewrite of this novWheres the rewrite of this novel? el? Wheres the rewrite of this novel? Wheres the rewrite of this novel? Wheres the rewrite of this novel? Wheres the rewrite of this novWheres the rewrite of this novel? el? Wheres the rewrite of this novel?
This novel is awesome. For me the plot is good and easy to read.I quite heartbroken when is see you posting that this novel is gonna drop. Although rewriting is also good. Just please author-san,release soon the rewrite of this novel. Thank you! God bless!
ORAORAORAROAROAROAROAAORAOARO PLEASE UPDATE THIS NOVEL. IAM VERY LIKE THISE NOVELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL. PLEASE WRITER. THIS NOVEL VERY AWESOME. I HOPE FASTER UPDATE
Why are you still dead. Whyyyyyyyyyyy.... . . . I guess there's no point in keeping it in my library anymore. But i really loved this so here goes 5 stars
Ini adalah novel yg baik, dari segi system, karakter, dan alur cerita yg cukup menarik mirip dengan novel tetangga, tapi perkembangan ceritanya cukup menarik, tapi sayang jarang update jadi membuat saya lelah menunggu dan menanti
The plot is amazing as well the story. The system and mc are both op. It's amazing how the mc just conquers all.
It's a basically a story with a kind and peace loving Mc, who is a good guy. So don't expect any kind of ruthless Mc just because there is a tag. Also I would not recommend this story because Mc is a wimp basically, can't even stand for himself when the time comes, second thing after which I really couldn't read it was when he visited orphanage, yeah he paid the dept that's still acceptable, but when that priest disagreeed to tell information about his parents, he just said OK and walked away,even though he has skills and power to get that information easily, basically he's afraid of using his abilities to help him, because yeah he's a puss.y. So yeah, I would not recommend reading this, unless of course you like wimpy puss.y Mc.
Tempest i will always be willing to support your descion i may not always agree with it but you can always count on me to be their supporting your decisions
Very awesome novel, good plot, the mc builds everything step by step and really shows the in depth planning. I don't understand why the author decided to drop the novel. The only flaw is no present female lead
Good story so far! I recommend it KKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK
I had some high hopes for this novel starting out, but less than halfway through I was disappointed with where the story went. It seemed like this was going to be a business building story, where the MC focuses on creating a company/companies and gather wealth to create his own business empire. I was wrong. He is using his companies to build some empire with his mystical abilities. I'm not sure what his final goal is...might create his own country or something. The MC is very inconsistent with his emotions and how he handles problems. Later in the story this problem is somewhat fixed and he's more hardened when it comes to decisions, so that's a plus I guess. Some of the situations he is involved in come out of no where and do nothing to help with the plot. The school shooting is one of those, he races a guy in Vegas just so he can face smack him, and steals food from buffets...for some reason. Some people may like the mystical modern day system thing, but it's a no for me. If from the beginning it was taking the mystical route, I probably would've been fine, but to start in one direction and then change up like 20 chapters in is a turn off for me. I mean....he can fly....like come on.... This also would've been rated higher by me, but this seems to be dropped? For that reason I had to give it a 2 on stability of updates.
Reveal Spoiler Good novel but the decision of re writing this novel is up to you and not us but i prefer a re write if your not gonna continue this novel....
Please consider your decision l. Your story is also already perfect. I love it cuz it's no harem. Please finish this novel first More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more chapter s
Good novel but sadly not updated for 3 months. Is this hiatus or dropped 😢😢😢. 140 character 140 character 140 character 140 character 140 character 140 character 140 character 140 character 140 character
I like this novel very much because all the characters that I have come across are described properly and every section of people can read and understand easily without any difficulty and I also like fantasy and adventurous novel very much...
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Interesting story. The pace is very rapid but it seems well researched and ignoring the obvious system fantasy theme, believable. I especially enjoy the no nonsense conveying of a story line rather than trying to add as many words as possible just to have more chapters.
Good