Reviews of System Nemesis by LaPlume - Webnovel

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LaPlume

Well, it's been a while! After having been on hiatus for a long year, I've come back to continue this novel. It's been a long journey, and one where its chapters have gone through countless iterations where I've tried to fix any plot holes I've left behind. Being a writer isn't always easy, and I'm well aware that not everyone will like my work, which is perfectly fine! However, I hope you'll give it a chance :) Happy reading!

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Tyler_2079

It had potential and then the main character got really r***-y and it just felt unnatural and weird

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Necrotic_lord

Day 1 of waiting until author releases a new chapter :) 🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼 🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼🤝🏼👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹

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LordNephilim

I have really enjoyed this novel thus far and have fallen in love with the characters and the power scaling thus far. I know there have been people who don't like the way some things were portrayed or how story was progress in certain ways, but as an author myself who was struggling and trying to advance my writing ability I really like what has bee done so far. Personally I can't wait for the new version of this book. Author please take your time to love what you write and that it's true to what you wanted. I promise you that in the end you won't regret it and people will love your book as much as I fo if not more.

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CharlotteH

Be able to write a novel like this, great work author! I’d love to see more. Do you have a discord for readers to join or any other social media I can follow?

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Jayvee_Magno

Good story, MC is OP but lacks knowledge and decision making, doesnt always thinks steps ahead before doing something. Also what is the purpose of those 100 death knight is his not ever gonna use it?

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_Crimson_

please post more chapters brother, don't drop it I really need more chapters.😢😢 I am impressed by everything in this story, sometimes i do have problems but those are just minor issues. Also even if there are bad reviews don't let them affect you and please continue writing.

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ocean_man112

I cant stress how much i love this book. and ive been really disapointed by the three month wait period the story is geat and the mc is a antihero beautiful

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SafetySecured

I think its not bad but it gets Lots of hate ..... no story is perfect But this is by no means a bad read and i had to Complain about Anything it would be the lack of good character discription

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ocean_man112

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Donnie_Kyle_Ward

I really love the way this book is coming along! Its super refreshing and a good read! Ive always had a thing for the necromancer area and them being a proper MC that isnt just outright evil but is caculatiing and had a plan. I really do enjoy the book!

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ocean_man112

This book is just all around fantastic but I would really like if the author released a new chapter, but all and all the book is great the world is huge and interesting, the characters are actually intelligent most of the time and you can tell this book was thought out

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Awesome_Fish

This novel is quite awesome with all the ways that he is growing stronger and how the system is updating with him. It has a ton of unique ideas and its a good read.

Wonderful story... I'm impressed... please hurry up and write more chapters.... can't wait...the author has a great potential to be a renown writer...kudos...keep it up

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Harem_police

Hello! shameless person here to tell you I have a book that's just starting out, it has 4 chapters and I need criteria and inspiration, please oh please, tell me my flaws

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Will_Caruso

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Hey,this is liaison, an editor from Stary.ltd. I just read your book of System Nemesis.I love it so much，and I'd like to know if you are interested in releasing or distributing your books on our platform. We'll pay you an advance payment as well as royalty if you'd like to work with us.It's only because I really admire your talent and love your book that I made it through the websites to send you this message.If you are interested ,do let me know and feel free to ask me anytime you like if you have any questions via this email: liaison-@outlook.com or yxli94@foxmail.com..i am looking forward to your message.

Hi, This is Tynan, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on adventurous Genre Fictions. After reading your “System Nemesis”, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via geekyteddyyo@gmail.com, then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail. It was a great pleasure to meet your story. Sincerely Tynan

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Men_of_culture

the only thing that's straight face mask 😂🤠😉😜🙂 ty for the past few days and then telling you about it later but I don't think it's a good time to come

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Vhynn

Don't bother negatif review about the mc is bla bla bla... tbh i like this type mc is not typical shounen isekai hero that is naive... MORE PLEASE, DONT DROP IT

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SeoLeon

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Sorsa_Lala

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Keith_Brice

it is fun and creative. I like the aspect that a necromancer could be a good guy. Of course he has a dark side but it seems to be out of necessity he does everything for revenge though

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laZybaka

More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

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LowLife6969

This book is so good that the first day i read to chapter 42. I love it keep up the good work! there is some parts that Have bad grammer like one part Said had had and it was confuse but then learn that it was a type o