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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Lol I myself rated the book. I mean who doesn't want their book to get good reviews 😜. Anyway this is the first part of this story going. I am planning to make a cinematic universe through it. In the later parts there will be more action more dramaand also more protagonists.
The concept of the story is great. I like how the story takes turn where we get to know about the story of shakaras.i think it was well thought and well written. I am curiously waiting for the next part. The story really has very deep meaning.
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I liked the overall concept of the story. The plot is kept simple, that is, about our newly hired MC and the mystery behind the death of a certain character. But maybe it's just me still, I feel like the story is a bit rushed? I felt like I was pushed into the middle of the story and just when I thought I can pause and enjoy the flow, it suddenly changed... I hope that Author-san can pace the story well because it is otherwise a good story~ Keep up the good work~
semi-historical work with nicely written storyline. definitely 10/10, but a small issue occurred on this work is, it lacked the attention of detail. Historical genre should have strong attention of detail to made it looks real. Overall, it's a 9.5/10 book you should read! Looking forward to your future chapters author!
I am really enjoying reading this book. Characters are very likeable and the plot twists keep on making this book even more brilliant Amazing job🙌🏻
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A historical novel I really loved it as soon as I read the synopsis. The protagonist wants to make an identity of himself that's to be a great warrior. Your writing skills are amazing with good character and background development but the only thing you've to work up on is to give some gaps in while writing. Long passage generally don't preferred by many so just give some gaps in the passages. Overall the novel's concept is great. One will definitely enjoy reading this.
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i think there are some things that need more extrapolation here and there and there is truly a lot of room for improvement but overall it's nice!
Amazing story. I appreciate the unpredictability of the book unlike other books present on this platform. The storytelling is also somewhat great. I am having a great time reading it and can not wait for the next chapters
Quite interesting story, keeps you on the edge of your seat. Though there were some things which needed more elaboration. Otherwise it was an amazing book with likeable characters and cliffhanger story. I highly recommend it to anyone who is interested in crime fiction.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Lol I myself rated the book. I mean who doesn't want their book to get good reviews 😜. Anyway this is the first part of this story going. I am planning to make a cinematic universe through it. In the later parts there will be more action more dramaand also more protagonists.
The concept of the story is great. I like how the story takes turn where we get to know about the story of shakaras.i think it was well thought and well written. I am curiously waiting for the next part. The story really has very deep meaning.
Reveal Spoiler I liked the overall concept of the story. The plot is kept simple, that is, about our newly hired MC and the mystery behind the death of a certain character. But maybe it's just me still, I feel like the story is a bit rushed? I felt like I was pushed into the middle of the story and just when I thought I can pause and enjoy the flow, it suddenly changed... I hope that Author-san can pace the story well because it is otherwise a good story~ Keep up the good work~
semi-historical work with nicely written storyline. definitely 10/10, but a small issue occurred on this work is, it lacked the attention of detail. Historical genre should have strong attention of detail to made it looks real. Overall, it's a 9.5/10 book you should read! Looking forward to your future chapters author!
I am really enjoying reading this book. Characters are very likeable and the plot twists keep on making this book even more brilliant Amazing job🙌🏻
Reveal Spoiler A historical novel I really loved it as soon as I read the synopsis. The protagonist wants to make an identity of himself that's to be a great warrior. Your writing skills are amazing with good character and background development but the only thing you've to work up on is to give some gaps in while writing. Long passage generally don't preferred by many so just give some gaps in the passages. Overall the novel's concept is great. One will definitely enjoy reading this.
Reveal Spoiler i think there are some things that need more extrapolation here and there and there is truly a lot of room for improvement but overall it's nice!
Amazing story. I appreciate the unpredictability of the book unlike other books present on this platform. The storytelling is also somewhat great. I am having a great time reading it and can not wait for the next chapters
Quite interesting story, keeps you on the edge of your seat. Though there were some things which needed more elaboration. Otherwise it was an amazing book with likeable characters and cliffhanger story. I highly recommend it to anyone who is interested in crime fiction.