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Just trying for this last time for this novel here. If not, don't worry i will continue the chapters here and also I will self publish in future. Hope u can support me if u like my story.
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Hello Dear author! I have read your book till the very ongoing chapter and I truly say it's one of the best I've read so far🥹 the writing style the world building all characters are just soo soo amazing that I could actually picture all in my head like some movie . At first story starts a bit sad more like bittersweet with Strong hearted MC the phase I liked soo much is the rebirth one all that is written soo well that I totally love it! Even the MC's growth this daily lifewhich author has brought into light soo well. even in the later phase the action and thrilling suspense is just engrossing ! I really don't have words to express myself how much I like it!✨️ Dear author please keep on updating 😣 I know it takes longer to jot down the further story but readers like me actually can't wait to read what's next ! to the next readers who'll be here to I Strongly recommend this book it's worth reading! specially because the way author makes us feel the world while reading is total heavens. even the plot. Keep going Author san! your work is going amazing!!! And please update the next chapter I can't wait to read more!😅🥲[img=Feeling it][img=Loving it]
Great writing overall with intriguing world building, characters and dialogue. My only feedback is that the introduction can be bit dense and heavy without a particularly 'exciting' hook. My personal advice would be to tone it down on the descriptiveness/exposition and let the reader assume/imagine a bit more, this also allows the dialogue to have more weight as it stands out instead of being slightly drowned by the auxiliary descriptions. Look forward to where it goes!
Great book I loved the plot and the way the story was written. Story development is also good.
Honestly, the first 5 chap. were really nice, I love the character styles, setting description and dialogue, as well as the pacing. But if you could add a little more depth and do a little layering, then it could be better. But overall its nice. Keep up the good work.
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Sad beginning, but it doesn't affect how good the book is, haven't read everything yet though, the few I've read tells me a lot. Hope for more chapters, and steady update.
It's a surprising read. It's perfect for those who enjoy fantasy and exploring new worlds. The story is rich in detail, blending reincarnation and magical powers, and the plot keeps the reader guessing with each chapter to learn more about what will happen to Elarion, the main character.
Really love the book. it's great and captivating. A nice start also a nice book
The first chapter got me hooked and depressed as well, since there are only a few chapters, I'll just let it marinate until it has more but a great book.
“I really hope you keep writing, because your style is exactly what I’ve been looking for. It feels vivid and alive, pulling me into the story. Not many authors can do that, so I admire your work. Wishing you all the best—keep it up, you’re doing great!”
Love your writing style but at times, it does feel cramped with words.. probably my ADHD talking but! your world building and plot progression is nice!
Read up to chapter 26 the latest at time of this review ✨ Amazing writing style well crafted plotlines and great insight into deeper human motivations make for a gripping and thrilling reading experience 🔥 I would want to see more about Lin Kai’s past and how he uses his previous life’s knowledge to do extraordinary things - he is a good guy but so far his strategy and mind is not matching with his mastery of swordsmanship… ✨ I enjoy reading about smart though not OP protagonist but well let’s see ✨ Give it a try and it may inspire you 🔥✨
Hello, this is shameless Author!! I hope my dear readers try it when they come for first time. Don't underestimate a newbie story, it can also make u hook up. If genuinely interested then read it and give a chance. Comment freely also