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Chapter 44: Revised Story!?

I was thinking if I should do a revised version of this story, it would take me a few days, maybe a little longer to revise all the chapters.

I started this story off for fun but I can fix lots of the inconsistencies and truly make it one of the best Tensura fanfics.

I would probably try to hint at his background in more detail, and he would obtain his powers in a way that made more sense.

I've also noticed my story seems more wish-fulfillment then actually realistic which is something I wanna change.

I wouldn't change anything major, just add more detail and simplify things.

If you guys have ideas in ways my story could improve, I would love to hear the readers input.

Let me know y'all thoughts!


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