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I really wanna know how the story will play out...this story left me hanging..[img=update][img=update][img=update] i cant get enough of this..i really hope the author is doing ok and will be able to give us an update...
I'll redo the rating if the updates start again .. for a non native English speaker their are minimal errors but I see alot of potential in the world and characters that are being built and look forward to it
Last chapter was posted August 20, 2020, what took the writer so long to update? I'm looking forward to read the next chapters.... please update soon.
Writer has stated english notbfirst language. Thats cool. It makes sense Why the grammatical errors and word cominations are odd. Storyline is good and its a fun read so far. I like the character development. Thanks!
My favorite omegaverse Webnovel thus far! Everything from environmental setting, plot, characters, and descriptive detail is superb! Even the character dialogue is executed perfectly, which a lot of authors struggle with that. Keep up the excellent work, excited to read more!
Great characters in a well developed world, the story has a nice pace to it and doesn't slow down even when delivering important background stories. It's every descriptive and full of emotions, which draw you to the main character and give you that strong bond that you can't help but start rooting for him and cursing the villain. Hoping for the best outcome for this conflicted abused underdog omega in this twisted ABO WORLD.
Author-san should be really proud of his work. The only nitpick is the switching pronouns. The main character is referred to as “he”(male pronoun) and “she”(female pronoun). It would make the story easier to follow if it was constant
Like the story so far... im still new to reading this type of genre and im enjoying it. Hope i get to read more of this story [img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I really wanna know how the story will play out...this story left me hanging..[img=update][img=update][img=update] i cant get enough of this..i really hope the author is doing ok and will be able to give us an update...
I'll redo the rating if the updates start again .. for a non native English speaker their are minimal errors but I see alot of potential in the world and characters that are being built and look forward to it
Last chapter was posted August 20, 2020, what took the writer so long to update? I'm looking forward to read the next chapters.... please update soon.
Writer has stated english notbfirst language. Thats cool. It makes sense Why the grammatical errors and word cominations are odd. Storyline is good and its a fun read so far. I like the character development. Thanks!
My favorite omegaverse Webnovel thus far! Everything from environmental setting, plot, characters, and descriptive detail is superb! Even the character dialogue is executed perfectly, which a lot of authors struggle with that. Keep up the excellent work, excited to read more!
Great characters in a well developed world, the story has a nice pace to it and doesn't slow down even when delivering important background stories. It's every descriptive and full of emotions, which draw you to the main character and give you that strong bond that you can't help but start rooting for him and cursing the villain. Hoping for the best outcome for this conflicted abused underdog omega in this twisted ABO WORLD.
Author-san should be really proud of his work. The only nitpick is the switching pronouns. The main character is referred to as “he”(male pronoun) and “she”(female pronoun). It would make the story easier to follow if it was constant
Like the story so far... im still new to reading this type of genre and im enjoying it. Hope i get to read more of this story [img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]