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Although thr Grammer is a sometimes a little off it isnt bad enough to really take away from the story, which itself is really addicting. I hope to see ot updated soon
I enjoy this story with all its twists and turns while still staying clear on the path that It started on. Interested to see how Finn and Dali end up.
I love the start of this storyline l. i want to know what will happen next. I liike the fact that the authir took time to develop Dali’s character i think she is sweet and im very curious about Finn More chapters please
A very interesting story that I can't wait to see how it will develop in both characters and story line. What would be great though would be to have a different viewpoint (like Finn's?) to flesh out some of the thoughts and events in the story. [img=update]
Although thr Grammer is a sometimes a little off it isnt bad enough to really take away from the story, which itself is really addicting. I hope to see ot updated soon
I enjoy this story with all its twists and turns while still staying clear on the path that It started on. Interested to see how Finn and Dali end up.
I love the start of this storyline l. i want to know what will happen next. I liike the fact that the authir took time to develop Dali’s character i think she is sweet and im very curious about Finn More chapters please
A very interesting story that I can't wait to see how it will develop in both characters and story line. What would be great though would be to have a different viewpoint (like Finn's?) to flesh out some of the thoughts and events in the story. [img=update]