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the only negative thing about this novel is not having more chapters to read. truly one of my favorites.......................................
Splendid story. I hope to see the continuation of this hidden gem. Was instantly hooked from the first chapter. Itβd be a shame to stop. Donβt let your fans down.
This dude got us hooked on this like a drug then he stopped updating on it letin us wait patiently or not maybe dropped idk.... Tho overall grate read and other autors should learn from this story writing for future its an amazin novel or this 13 chapters with nice story and amazing pace... So im rating 5 stars even if it might be dropped cheers guys and see you if autor ever decides to update this one :)
OK i give up waiting for next chapter and i am wasting my spirit stone ffor you...................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I dont coment often but gentelmen this is a gem this novel if autor wishes will be a gem for any cultivation freak type novel outh there...
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hello is novel dropped when your going to release? please release ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This action novel is off to a great start!! The starting of the novel is original and thatβs just one out of the many things I love about this novel!!! Keep it up!
Honestly love the novel so much, The progression especially the relations ships are slow and so far im legit coming back every day to check for a new chapter, hope the author comes back to update it because im IN LOVE!!!!!!!!
The story is really good and it has a lot of potential to be one of the best novels that I have ever read. Hopefully the author start releasing more chapters.
Is a good novel Man. I hope hoy Sony drop it Pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls
chapter update so lateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Nice story and over powered characters , looks we can look forward for so much story plot with action. Good Mix and Great work Author, Loved it
espero que se pueda actualizar mas seguido , es una novela muy buena !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I must the first chapter is an original way to start out the novel. However, I must say it really picks up later. So, I must say that both his sister and mother better be in the harem. Heh, I especially love the cute scenes between the MC and the sister. Good oleβ booty spanking for punishment. Heheheee. I also hope that she is his first time to be honest. I also wish that the girls actually stay relevant throughout the story and not a vase. Like, make them useful for the MC if you get what Iβm saying. Anyways, I do hope the author finishes this novel since I get the feeling that this novel will quite good if the author keeps up with the good work so far. (Only on chapter 6 so far) Go team Xiao Che and Xiao Tan!!!! Also, I think the harem should be around 10 girls give or take. Heh, whatever is fine to be honest. Just make the girls stay relevant. Anyways, keep up the good work author!
i love it when she says babay babay , theres nothin in this world i wouldnt doo. i like it like that oh windows down chillin with radio on. baby baby baby oooohh. our love is like habituallll yeah. fresh prince of dick butt ehhh. candypaint with the white on top . randy dandy i love this novel got me singing some dumb****. really this is good real good.
Nice story, please add more teasing in erotic ways with harem characters . Loved the novel very much and i hope the harem wont be so big without characters development
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Reveal SpoilerLiked it very much :) Your novel was the first one that made me to join as a member of this novel site. Very good story narration and well done
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I noticed that you didn't have a star rating so I wanted to review it to help towards that, it's really good. Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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the only negative thing about this novel is not having more chapters to read. truly one of my favorites.......................................
Splendid story. I hope to see the continuation of this hidden gem. Was instantly hooked from the first chapter. Itβd be a shame to stop. Donβt let your fans down.
This dude got us hooked on this like a drug then he stopped updating on it letin us wait patiently or not maybe dropped idk.... Tho overall grate read and other autors should learn from this story writing for future its an amazin novel or this 13 chapters with nice story and amazing pace... So im rating 5 stars even if it might be dropped cheers guys and see you if autor ever decides to update this one :)
OK i give up waiting for next chapter and i am wasting my spirit stone ffor you...................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I dont coment often but gentelmen this is a gem this novel if autor wishes will be a gem for any cultivation freak type novel outh there...
plz update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update
hello is novel dropped when your going to release? please release ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This action novel is off to a great start!! The starting of the novel is original and thatβs just one out of the many things I love about this novel!!! Keep it up!
Honestly love the novel so much, The progression especially the relations ships are slow and so far im legit coming back every day to check for a new chapter, hope the author comes back to update it because im IN LOVE!!!!!!!!
The story is really good and it has a lot of potential to be one of the best novels that I have ever read. Hopefully the author start releasing more chapters.
Is a good novel Man. I hope hoy Sony drop it Pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls
chapter update so lateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Nice story and over powered characters , looks we can look forward for so much story plot with action. Good Mix and Great work Author, Loved it
espero que se pueda actualizar mas seguido , es una novela muy buena !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I must the first chapter is an original way to start out the novel. However, I must say it really picks up later. So, I must say that both his sister and mother better be in the harem. Heh, I especially love the cute scenes between the MC and the sister. Good oleβ booty spanking for punishment. Heheheee. I also hope that she is his first time to be honest. I also wish that the girls actually stay relevant throughout the story and not a vase. Like, make them useful for the MC if you get what Iβm saying. Anyways, I do hope the author finishes this novel since I get the feeling that this novel will quite good if the author keeps up with the good work so far. (Only on chapter 6 so far) Go team Xiao Che and Xiao Tan!!!! Also, I think the harem should be around 10 girls give or take. Heh, whatever is fine to be honest. Just make the girls stay relevant. Anyways, keep up the good work author!
i love it when she says babay babay , theres nothin in this world i wouldnt doo. i like it like that oh windows down chillin with radio on. baby baby baby oooohh. our love is like habituallll yeah. fresh prince of dick butt ehhh. candypaint with the white on top . randy dandy i love this novel got me singing some dumb****. really this is good real good.
Nice story, please add more teasing in erotic ways with harem characters . Loved the novel very much and i hope the harem wont be so big without characters development
Loved itΒ‘!!!!!!Β‘!,.....................................πππ₯π₯π₯π₯π₯ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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Reveal SpoilerLiked it very much :) Your novel was the first one that made me to join as a member of this novel site. Very good story narration and well done
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I noticed that you didn't have a star rating so I wanted to review it to help towards that, it's really good. Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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Autor Here. I hope You give my story a chance if you like op protaginist and big harem and enjoy it. 5-star review because I'm a shameless author