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THIS NOVEL IS STRAIGHT UP PLAGIARISM. I was trying to ignore it this whole time, but it's just impossible at this point (chapter 41). This novel is a relatively new work and is supposed to be original, but it's an exact parallel to the Korean written and translated work "The Novel's Extra". It's the exact same book, just with a different title and character names. The flow of this book is a carbon copy of that book, sequence by sequence. I know plagiarism is common in the publishing industry, but for it to be so blatant is just disgusting. Taking some ideas or tropes to get a novel started is fine, as tropes and ideas are simply similar and just the skeleton. But if the basis of your novel is just straight up theft that you're proud of, you have a serious problem. Not only do you take the skeleton, but you also grab the muscles, fat, and blood...not leaving a single drop behind for the original author. I'll still read, because I want to see just how much of the book was carbon copied, or if the author actually makes an effort to bring something original. Honestly, when lesser known novels are simply stolen and rebranded on a bigger platform, I wonder just how helpless the original author and translator must feel if and when they come across their blood, sweat, and tears under someone else's name...
I didn't see what all the hype was for when the beginning was riddled with grammar mistakes and constant reminders that all the girls ate jade beauties but it gets better after the first 200 chapters. Also has a satisfying ending. Overall a good read. I just wish Melissa could die 😭
this novel is too long-winded and excessively verbose, making me feel sleepy while reading it. I suspect that readers are simply skimming through the chapters.
The story was simple but had many suspense . The power system was flawed and also ending execution of the demon king was not great .But i truly enjoyed ,thanks
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well, what do you want me to say? It was a fantastic read, and as to why it was fantastic, I think my other reading buddies have already said everything there is to know.
I found this novel to be excellent in most areas but the romance didn't felt heartful connected as I was unable to connect to the mc's romantic partner named Amanda cause of her personality and how boring she was ,I felt she was one of the most uninteresting character in the novel even mellisa was more interesting than her sadly author choose her even when female characters like angelina von droix and donna longbern were present still I hope and I humbly request that in his upcoming novel he make some change . Though thank you for the such beautiful novel my dear ❤️ author , I hope and pray to God that you will become very successful in future and achieve you dreams 🥰 .
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Ah man, what a ride. The beginning was tough, i cant lie. Then at some point author had a favorite word "thereafter" and used it a LOOOOT but once that ends, its great. I wish there was more after the end, more ineractions between the characters but oh well. The last 100 chapters seemed a bit rushed but great nontheless. Im glad that author found a writing style he became comfortable with after a few chapter (quite a lot actually) story picks up after 40 chapters and the writing solidifies in the 100s.Spoiler ahead: Tbh, i was disappointed everyone had a happy ending. I really wished for everyone to realize there are actual consequences to war and their actions. Donna is the best, so i wished for a happy ending for her but she was forgotten. All in all, i recommend it
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I thought I found something good, but the story got worse as I went on. Lots of info dumps in the story, many of which aren't even necessary. I don't need several paragraphs on why someone's VR systems are secure. Or how a credit card is foolproof. Strap in lads, because the MC is easily the worst part of the story. The main character is wildly inconsistent and continually flip-flops back and forth. At times he displays decent intelligence, other times however, he repeatedly makes the same mistakes, the ones that he keeps telling himself not to make. And constantly surprised that quote-unquote "This didn't happen in the novel" despite happening to him several times. It's actually impressive, that rather than getting character development, he somehow seems to go through character REGRESSION and become worse. As he was significantly more cautious and low-key at the start of the story. Even at the beginning of the story, he isn't consistent. Being a depressed and unmotivated "failure" who was so overweight from lack of self-care, he died from a heart attack. Yet the very next day after reincarnating, his willpower is so strong he can go over 4 days straight of intense physical and psychological strain in a test of worthiness. Another example is the VR test, showing himself to be competent and mentally strong. But later on in his first dungeon, the MC suddenly becomes brain-dead. Finding an entire party wiped out in incredibly unusual and possibly deadly circumstances. He throws caution to the wind, runs over to save them, gives them most of his limited food, and nearly forgets to ask WHY they were nearly killed. The party suddenly dies, and the MC has an emotional outburst over the complete strangers he just met. This is despite his 4-day perseverance of mental strength, and the fact he had no qualms basically torturing two students in the VR test. Cutting off their legs and having a casual conversation with them while the two are in so much pain they can't speak properly. Turns out there's a deadly demon in the dungeon he wants to avoid and now he's trapped. So what does he do? Why he obviously goes and explores an evil-looking black castle that suddenly appears in the dungeon of course, what else? I understand this might be the author's first work, but from what I've heard, they've rewritten the earlier chapters already, and it's still this bad?
really enjoyed chapters1-560ish apart from the weird cringe chess thing, after that i started losing interest mainly cause a plank of wood has more personality than the love interest among other things. ngl i would have loved to have seen the Mc end up with Melissa just cause i really enjoyed seeing their interactions.
I loved every part of the story. As i have read a lot novel I can confidently say that this novel takes the top spot. It's a MASTERPIECE!!!!!
Amazing novel, it is a must read!! The multiple time skips were handled amazingly good.
Well, all I can say is, it was good read. If you are fascinated with good romance, but that would not be whole point of the story; cunning MC; good friendship; so many twists and turns; good action with a modern setting, then this novel is for you.
I made fan art for TAPOV (mainly Ren and Caïssa characters)! . Should I have finished the book before starting to draw fanart? Yes. Did I do that? No.
Peak, ONE OF THE BEST. The author doesn't seem serious abt the story at first but then it went 📈. The ending is dogfight. 😂 Writing quality 5/5, Story Development 5/5, Character Design 4/5, World Background 5/5.
I guess author just transported to his own novel after completing this masterpiece. 🫠 Its's been months and he hasn't created another book yet. I'm worried. 🧐
I love this novel, I tried writing a review once but I was writing too much, that's how much I like this. Read this novel, you'll feel your heart beat.It will sound cringe, but don't cry because the novel ended, smile because it happened!
Thanks author for providing this novel i dropped it in between but still manage to finish it and i am glad i did. thanks for this amazing story hope you write another novel
Thank youit was an exciting journey. After completing it I just feel Empty haha.It was a very good read for me ,thank you for your hardwork❤️
Not even gonna lie, I straight up pirated this because I'm not spending hundreds of dollars on one book. Mb lil bro. My main gripes are the character descriptions of the women and mostly teenage girls in the first few hundred chapters. Constant reminders of how they have pale white skin and are jade beauties and how it's justifiable for someone who is 30+ in age to be attracted to teenage girls. Hundreds of years in the future and yet somehow everyone has white skin... Realistically, Chinese, Indians, and Africans would be mixed in the gene pool so how is everyone white except like 3 black background characters who are mentioned once and never again and Han Yufei who is the only asian in the school with the other asian being the dead master of Ren. Next, Ren constantly makes stupid decisions and they are always justified in the plot as it being the machinations of the other Ren causing him to act stupid either immediately after or hundreds of chapters later. Lastly, and I don't think I'm alone in this but I loathe Melissa so much. Her whole schtick is she is a rich smart girl with daddy issues so she constantly acts b1t€h¥ yet somehow Kevin, Emma and the others consider her a friend? I don't think youve ever met someone like her in real life if you think her behaviour is cute or understandable or tolerable. She acts so haughty she refused to remember the names of her classmates and dissappeared the families and students thag slightly annoyed her using the power of her daddy that she hates. Her mistreating Ren was never once funny and she shouldve died several times during the plot as she is severely weaker than the other main cast. She genuinely deserves no happiness. I hate her that much 😤. Other than that it's a good read I guess lol
Reveal Spoiler THIS NOVEL IS STRAIGHT UP PLAGIARISM. I was trying to ignore it this whole time, but it's just impossible at this point (chapter 41). This novel is a relatively new work and is supposed to be original, but it's an exact parallel to the Korean written and translated work "The Novel's Extra". It's the exact same book, just with a different title and character names. The flow of this book is a carbon copy of that book, sequence by sequence. I know plagiarism is common in the publishing industry, but for it to be so blatant is just disgusting. Taking some ideas or tropes to get a novel started is fine, as tropes and ideas are simply similar and just the skeleton. But if the basis of your novel is just straight up theft that you're proud of, you have a serious problem. Not only do you take the skeleton, but you also grab the muscles, fat, and blood...not leaving a single drop behind for the original author. I'll still read, because I want to see just how much of the book was carbon copied, or if the author actually makes an effort to bring something original. Honestly, when lesser known novels are simply stolen and rebranded on a bigger platform, I wonder just how helpless the original author and translator must feel if and when they come across their blood, sweat, and tears under someone else's name...
I didn't see what all the hype was for when the beginning was riddled with grammar mistakes and constant reminders that all the girls ate jade beauties but it gets better after the first 200 chapters. Also has a satisfying ending. Overall a good read. I just wish Melissa could die 😭
this novel is too long-winded and excessively verbose, making me feel sleepy while reading it. I suspect that readers are simply skimming through the chapters.
The story was simple but had many suspense . The power system was flawed and also ending execution of the demon king was not great .But i truly enjoyed ,thanks
Reveal Spoiler well, what do you want me to say? It was a fantastic read, and as to why it was fantastic, I think my other reading buddies have already said everything there is to know.
I found this novel to be excellent in most areas but the romance didn't felt heartful connected as I was unable to connect to the mc's romantic partner named Amanda cause of her personality and how boring she was ,I felt she was one of the most uninteresting character in the novel even mellisa was more interesting than her sadly author choose her even when female characters like angelina von droix and donna longbern were present still I hope and I humbly request that in his upcoming novel he make some change . Though thank you for the such beautiful novel my dear ❤️ author , I hope and pray to God that you will become very successful in future and achieve you dreams 🥰 .
Reveal Spoiler Ah man, what a ride. The beginning was tough, i cant lie. Then at some point author had a favorite word "thereafter" and used it a LOOOOT but once that ends, its great. I wish there was more after the end, more ineractions between the characters but oh well. The last 100 chapters seemed a bit rushed but great nontheless. Im glad that author found a writing style he became comfortable with after a few chapter (quite a lot actually) story picks up after 40 chapters and the writing solidifies in the 100s.Spoiler ahead: Tbh, i was disappointed everyone had a happy ending. I really wished for everyone to realize there are actual consequences to war and their actions. Donna is the best, so i wished for a happy ending for her but she was forgotten. All in all, i recommend it
Reveal Spoiler I thought I found something good, but the story got worse as I went on. Lots of info dumps in the story, many of which aren't even necessary. I don't need several paragraphs on why someone's VR systems are secure. Or how a credit card is foolproof. Strap in lads, because the MC is easily the worst part of the story. The main character is wildly inconsistent and continually flip-flops back and forth. At times he displays decent intelligence, other times however, he repeatedly makes the same mistakes, the ones that he keeps telling himself not to make. And constantly surprised that quote-unquote "This didn't happen in the novel" despite happening to him several times. It's actually impressive, that rather than getting character development, he somehow seems to go through character REGRESSION and become worse. As he was significantly more cautious and low-key at the start of the story. Even at the beginning of the story, he isn't consistent. Being a depressed and unmotivated "failure" who was so overweight from lack of self-care, he died from a heart attack. Yet the very next day after reincarnating, his willpower is so strong he can go over 4 days straight of intense physical and psychological strain in a test of worthiness. Another example is the VR test, showing himself to be competent and mentally strong. But later on in his first dungeon, the MC suddenly becomes brain-dead. Finding an entire party wiped out in incredibly unusual and possibly deadly circumstances. He throws caution to the wind, runs over to save them, gives them most of his limited food, and nearly forgets to ask WHY they were nearly killed. The party suddenly dies, and the MC has an emotional outburst over the complete strangers he just met. This is despite his 4-day perseverance of mental strength, and the fact he had no qualms basically torturing two students in the VR test. Cutting off their legs and having a casual conversation with them while the two are in so much pain they can't speak properly. Turns out there's a deadly demon in the dungeon he wants to avoid and now he's trapped. So what does he do? Why he obviously goes and explores an evil-looking black castle that suddenly appears in the dungeon of course, what else? I understand this might be the author's first work, but from what I've heard, they've rewritten the earlier chapters already, and it's still this bad?
really enjoyed chapters1-560ish apart from the weird cringe chess thing, after that i started losing interest mainly cause a plank of wood has more personality than the love interest among other things. ngl i would have loved to have seen the Mc end up with Melissa just cause i really enjoyed seeing their interactions.
I loved every part of the story. As i have read a lot novel I can confidently say that this novel takes the top spot. It's a MASTERPIECE!!!!!
Amazing novel, it is a must read!! The multiple time skips were handled amazingly good.
Well, all I can say is, it was good read. If you are fascinated with good romance, but that would not be whole point of the story; cunning MC; good friendship; so many twists and turns; good action with a modern setting, then this novel is for you.
I made fan art for TAPOV (mainly Ren and Caïssa characters)! . Should I have finished the book before starting to draw fanart? Yes. Did I do that? No.
Peak, ONE OF THE BEST. The author doesn't seem serious abt the story at first but then it went 📈. The ending is dogfight. 😂 Writing quality 5/5, Story Development 5/5, Character Design 4/5, World Background 5/5.
I guess author just transported to his own novel after completing this masterpiece. 🫠 Its's been months and he hasn't created another book yet. I'm worried. 🧐
I love this novel, I tried writing a review once but I was writing too much, that's how much I like this. Read this novel, you'll feel your heart beat.It will sound cringe, but don't cry because the novel ended, smile because it happened!
Thanks author for providing this novel i dropped it in between but still manage to finish it and i am glad i did. thanks for this amazing story hope you write another novel
Thank youit was an exciting journey. After completing it I just feel Empty haha.It was a very good read for me ,thank you for your hardwork❤️
Not even gonna lie, I straight up pirated this because I'm not spending hundreds of dollars on one book. Mb lil bro. My main gripes are the character descriptions of the women and mostly teenage girls in the first few hundred chapters. Constant reminders of how they have pale white skin and are jade beauties and how it's justifiable for someone who is 30+ in age to be attracted to teenage girls. Hundreds of years in the future and yet somehow everyone has white skin... Realistically, Chinese, Indians, and Africans would be mixed in the gene pool so how is everyone white except like 3 black background characters who are mentioned once and never again and Han Yufei who is the only asian in the school with the other asian being the dead master of Ren. Next, Ren constantly makes stupid decisions and they are always justified in the plot as it being the machinations of the other Ren causing him to act stupid either immediately after or hundreds of chapters later. Lastly, and I don't think I'm alone in this but I loathe Melissa so much. Her whole schtick is she is a rich smart girl with daddy issues so she constantly acts b1t€h¥ yet somehow Kevin, Emma and the others consider her a friend? I don't think youve ever met someone like her in real life if you think her behaviour is cute or understandable or tolerable. She acts so haughty she refused to remember the names of her classmates and dissappeared the families and students thag slightly annoyed her using the power of her daddy that she hates. Her mistreating Ren was never once funny and she shouldve died several times during the plot as she is severely weaker than the other main cast. She genuinely deserves no happiness. I hate her that much 😤. Other than that it's a good read I guess lol
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