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Write a reviewits a very creative piece of writing quite different from the normal. Its unique and very interesting indeed
Reveal Spoilerwell, am upto date on the chapters so far. what's killing is slow updates. like this time, 2 chapters were updated, and then nothing for 2 weeks. now the page says 0 chapters per week. is this story abandoned? 1. regular updates keeps story flow 2. irregular updates means reader has to go back to read a few chapters before coming to the current one 3. irregular updates means readers lose interest, author loses loyal readers 4. plots become choppy with irregular updates. 5. chapters are also so short that it doesn't give any essence for the wait.
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after 226 chapters - this is a well thought out story. for the first time it has India as part of the story. We don't see dusky girls or Indian in WN. Added to this the storyline is quite nice. I am looking for further updates.
The story could be better written. thereβs a lot of grammatical errors. Character development is a bit slow. The plot of the story is good. Should the the story be better written, it would definitely be interesting enough to keep you interested until the end
The grammatical reference to Bhomni as man gets me confused. Maya too should follow her heart. So far so good. Kailk should love Maya unconditionally knowing that she is his uncompleted soul.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
overall a fairly good book. lots of grammatical errors that make it hard to understand. find myself trying to make it read better as I go on through the book.
Updates are very slow but its a good story. Author, your story and writing style all are good, can't you please update faster. People will give up, if this continues.
Why it take a long time before updates come... can it be faster please? Iβm ready to give up, waiting is so difficult just to finish a story.
Reveal SpoilerVou comentar em portuguΓͺs mesmo prq cansei de escrever em inglΓͺs. A construção do capΓtulo Γ© boa e a histΓ³ria prende o leitor de uma forma especial.
This is taking so long to add chapters it is very frustrating. Is there a way you can hurry up and be done with the updates? I love the story but so slow.
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It is difficult to write a long feedback all we readers want is faster development of the story...more chapters. Why 140? Ridiculous but anyway, good story.
Reveal SpoilerI just wanna was the day I wanna was a good night I love yβall and Iβm so proud to have you a day and I love you this is the best app I wanna I have like app I
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I just wanna know that the app was a great app but I wanna was the way I wanna was the day we had to give up on our school day and then we took the time to get it
I would just like to thank the writer for giving us a novel worth reading and spending some time from our days imagining a life we cannot live. Please keep the chapters coming.
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Slow updates but good story. Hope the author will go faster with updates. Been a while since Iβve been reading this novel. Taking so line to finish.
Reveal SpoilerThe updates are far apart... canβt it go a little faster? Itβs been 3 days since the last update? Wish there were more...the story is progressing slowly.
Reveal SpoilerGood story line but very slow progress...read a novel in this website it was a thousand + pages the releases were not 2 chapters at a time. Finished the novel fast.
Reveal SpoilerIs a good story, I love it so much, I can't wait for more I'm not gonna I just can't stop thinking about it, it's so good yep ππ I like the author who made this
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Reveal Spoiler101 how not to behave when you rise from commoner to royal i strongly recomend not reading this. stupidity of FL is unexplainable save yourself some time
Awesome plot. The more I read more I am surprised. The FL is strong, determined and she is keeping it that way till now ( chap 91). Still not clear who is the first ML. So, the suspense is still there and I like it that way. Most importantly it is a clean story ,it is romantic but not in a physical kind of way that is very rarely found nowadays. Only complain is the story is in dire need of editing. Otherwise its flawless.
This plot is nice...... but dear author please update more chapters......we all readers are eagerly waiting for them........ other than this.....why don't you reveal something about the relationship between cursed soul.... I really want to know the background of both of maya and Xander.
This novel keeps me wanting more to read as the days pass by. It's a lovely story. The author has done a great job with the way the story goes forward. ππππππ
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its a very creative piece of writing quite different from the normal. Its unique and very interesting indeed
Reveal Spoilerwell, am upto date on the chapters so far. what's killing is slow updates. like this time, 2 chapters were updated, and then nothing for 2 weeks. now the page says 0 chapters per week. is this story abandoned? 1. regular updates keeps story flow 2. irregular updates means reader has to go back to read a few chapters before coming to the current one 3. irregular updates means readers lose interest, author loses loyal readers 4. plots become choppy with irregular updates. 5. chapters are also so short that it doesn't give any essence for the wait.
ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
after 226 chapters - this is a well thought out story. for the first time it has India as part of the story. We don't see dusky girls or Indian in WN. Added to this the storyline is quite nice. I am looking for further updates.
The story could be better written. thereβs a lot of grammatical errors. Character development is a bit slow. The plot of the story is good. Should the the story be better written, it would definitely be interesting enough to keep you interested until the end
The grammatical reference to Bhomni as man gets me confused. Maya too should follow her heart. So far so good. Kailk should love Maya unconditionally knowing that she is his uncompleted soul.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
overall a fairly good book. lots of grammatical errors that make it hard to understand. find myself trying to make it read better as I go on through the book.
Updates are very slow but its a good story. Author, your story and writing style all are good, can't you please update faster. People will give up, if this continues.
Why it take a long time before updates come... can it be faster please? Iβm ready to give up, waiting is so difficult just to finish a story.
Reveal SpoilerVou comentar em portuguΓͺs mesmo prq cansei de escrever em inglΓͺs. A construção do capΓtulo Γ© boa e a histΓ³ria prende o leitor de uma forma especial.
This is taking so long to add chapters it is very frustrating. Is there a way you can hurry up and be done with the updates? I love the story but so slow.
β¨πΊπΊβ¨πΊπΊβ¨ πΊπΊπΊπΊπΊπΊπΊ πΊπΊπΊπΊπΊπΊπΊ β¨πΊπΊπΊπΊπΊβ¨ β¨β¨πΊπΊπΊβ¨β¨ β¨β¨β¨πΊβ¨β¨β¨ β¨πΈπΈβ¨πΈπΈβ¨ πΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈ πΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈπΈ β¨πΈπΈπΈπΈπΈβ¨ β¨β¨πΈπΈπΈβ¨β¨ β¨β¨β¨πΈβ¨β¨β¨
It is difficult to write a long feedback all we readers want is faster development of the story...more chapters. Why 140? Ridiculous but anyway, good story.
Reveal SpoilerI just wanna was the day I wanna was a good night I love yβall and Iβm so proud to have you a day and I love you this is the best app I wanna I have like app I
9nxfashion customer care 9nxfashion customer care number83899458119nxfashion customer care number83899458119nxfashion customer care number8389945811
I just wanna know that the app was a great app but I wanna was the way I wanna was the day we had to give up on our school day and then we took the time to get it
I would just like to thank the writer for giving us a novel worth reading and spending some time from our days imagining a life we cannot live. Please keep the chapters coming.
ππ₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°πi love itπ₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°
Slow updates but good story. Hope the author will go faster with updates. Been a while since Iβve been reading this novel. Taking so line to finish.
Reveal SpoilerThe updates are far apart... canβt it go a little faster? Itβs been 3 days since the last update? Wish there were more...the story is progressing slowly.
Reveal SpoilerGood story line but very slow progress...read a novel in this website it was a thousand + pages the releases were not 2 chapters at a time. Finished the novel fast.
Reveal SpoilerIs a good story, I love it so much, I can't wait for more I'm not gonna I just can't stop thinking about it, it's so good yep ππ I like the author who made this
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Reveal Spoiler101 how not to behave when you rise from commoner to royal i strongly recomend not reading this. stupidity of FL is unexplainable save yourself some time
Awesome plot. The more I read more I am surprised. The FL is strong, determined and she is keeping it that way till now ( chap 91). Still not clear who is the first ML. So, the suspense is still there and I like it that way. Most importantly it is a clean story ,it is romantic but not in a physical kind of way that is very rarely found nowadays. Only complain is the story is in dire need of editing. Otherwise its flawless.
This plot is nice...... but dear author please update more chapters......we all readers are eagerly waiting for them........ other than this.....why don't you reveal something about the relationship between cursed soul.... I really want to know the background of both of maya and Xander.
This novel keeps me wanting more to read as the days pass by. It's a lovely story. The author has done a great job with the way the story goes forward. ππππππ
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The story is very good but no updates are available.