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This is actually a nice story. I can see that it is worth to read and a lot of intriguing factors is already present in the first chapter. Good job!
The plot is unique and would really drive the story. At first glance, I know it would be promising. The title itself drives my curiousity. I loved the details, they open up my imagination. Good job!
This is a nice one. I'm not that intrigued yet, but I can see where the story is going. I guess what I'm trying to say is, don't stop writing. This has still a lot of improvement. If you hone it well, it will be a masterpiece.
This is actually a nice story. I can see that it is worth to read and a lot of intriguing factors is already present in the first chapter. Good job!
The plot is unique and would really drive the story. At first glance, I know it would be promising. The title itself drives my curiousity. I loved the details, they open up my imagination. Good job!
This is a nice one. I'm not that intrigued yet, but I can see where the story is going. I guess what I'm trying to say is, don't stop writing. This has still a lot of improvement. If you hone it well, it will be a masterpiece.