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what's the point of giving the mc ( where i stepped reading) 10 times of intelligence (80 pts) as compared with normal human (8 pts ) when he is as dumb as a rock 😑
the story is great I have noticed some minor problems that can make the story slightly confusing but nothing worth mentioning also I want more chapters.
Checking for the updates on this book everyday cause it’ a gem and a breath of fresh air for cultivation novels and their copy and paste mcs. I’ this one the mc feels so naturally different , try it and you’ll love it!!! I just need more mayn😭😭
Incredibly frustrating to read...the MC has the self awareness and IQ of a goldfish and does one dumb thing after another and has no redeeming qualities whatsoever. He has a very powerful System and is in a dangerous cultivation world but claims he wants to be "normal " by earth standards, wanting his father to protect him forever. If the point or this novel is to frustrate readers and kill neurons then this is a great novel.
it's very good for those who hate bete mc the Mc has no trouble bit$h slapping a girl and he does not let them do what they want land get away with it
hey dude I hope your still writing k like this novel a lot, so I and man more would love it if you can continue It plz if not for your self for us
love it very well done the characters feel alive and have actually emotions little funny sometimes a little dark all in all great read......
I live it very much especially the main character he is asoume . . .? . . . . . . . . ... . . . ?.. ..... F. Fjdjeoebriehrurhjrjdjejejrjr
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
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Great job kind author I’m really enjoying this 👍🏾 this book caught me off guard I thought it would be sub par and it kinda started that way but it’s started to pick up and become very enjoyable
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VERY GOOOD EU SOU BRASILEIROEscreva um comentário Reading Status: C12 Qualidade de escrita Estabilidade das atualizações Desenvolvimento da história Design de personagem Fundo Mundial A pontuação total 3.8 VERY GOOOD EU SOU BRASILEIRO P
BOA HISTORIA O FICAMOS PUTO POR O PROTAGONISTA N QUERER PODER POREM TENHO UM RUMO PRA HISTORIA Q SERIA BOM ELE CRIAR NOVAS ESPECIES (PROCRIANDO AS JA EXISTENTES OU CRIAR DO NADA) SERIAM COMPLETAMENTE ELEIAS A ELE OQ AJUDARIA NA MISSSAO DE MUDAR A ORDEM MUNDIAL
Shameless author review I just started let me know how I'm doing also power stones are much appreciated. Also I'll be posting 1 chapter a day so don't worry about that .
Ples can you do more like this but thay have divine bloodline system please
what's the point of giving the mc ( where i stepped reading) 10 times of intelligence (80 pts) as compared with normal human (8 pts ) when he is as dumb as a rock 😑
the story is great I have noticed some minor problems that can make the story slightly confusing but nothing worth mentioning also I want more chapters.
Checking for the updates on this book everyday cause it’ a gem and a breath of fresh air for cultivation novels and their copy and paste mcs. I’ this one the mc feels so naturally different , try it and you’ll love it!!! I just need more mayn😭😭
Incredibly frustrating to read...the MC has the self awareness and IQ of a goldfish and does one dumb thing after another and has no redeeming qualities whatsoever. He has a very powerful System and is in a dangerous cultivation world but claims he wants to be "normal " by earth standards, wanting his father to protect him forever. If the point or this novel is to frustrate readers and kill neurons then this is a great novel.
it's very good for those who hate bete mc the Mc has no trouble bit$h slapping a girl and he does not let them do what they want land get away with it
hey dude I hope your still writing k like this novel a lot, so I and man more would love it if you can continue It plz if not for your self for us
love it very well done the characters feel alive and have actually emotions little funny sometimes a little dark all in all great read......
I live it very much especially the main character he is asoume . . .? . . . . . . . . ... . . . ?.. ..... F. Fjdjeoebriehrurhjrjdjejejrjr
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Great job kind author I’m really enjoying this 👍🏾 this book caught me off guard I thought it would be sub par and it kinda started that way but it’s started to pick up and become very enjoyable
........... . . .. .. . . . .c . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . .. . .. . . .. .. . . . . . . . . . B . . . . . .. .. . . . . .. e. . . . .s. . . . T. . . .
VERY GOOOD EU SOU BRASILEIROEscreva um comentário Reading Status: C12 Qualidade de escrita Estabilidade das atualizações Desenvolvimento da história Design de personagem Fundo Mundial A pontuação total 3.8 VERY GOOOD EU SOU BRASILEIRO P
BOA HISTORIA O FICAMOS PUTO POR O PROTAGONISTA N QUERER PODER POREM TENHO UM RUMO PRA HISTORIA Q SERIA BOM ELE CRIAR NOVAS ESPECIES (PROCRIANDO AS JA EXISTENTES OU CRIAR DO NADA) SERIAM COMPLETAMENTE ELEIAS A ELE OQ AJUDARIA NA MISSSAO DE MUDAR A ORDEM MUNDIAL
Shameless author review I just started let me know how I'm doing also power stones are much appreciated. Also I'll be posting 1 chapter a day so don't worry about that .
Ples can you do more like this but thay have divine bloodline system please