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[An original mature and dark fan-novel inspired from Mobile Legends.]
Born in the family of the oldest and most powerful line of Onmyouji, Kagura's older brother was forced to become one regardless of his inability to control the Yin and Yang.
On an expedition to exorcise an unknown race of demons, he was faced by a terrifying experience that lead him to become cursed.
As the curse started slowly consuming him, he promised his younger sister that he will sought out to find the cure and return home. But little does he know he delved himself into something far more sinister.
Dancing with the devil, will he find what he is looking for, or fall into the abyss?
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This is a review of the first three chapters. The story is a fan fiction based on a game. You do not need to know the game to understand the story. The main character is an new exorcist who’s greatest problem is not the demons he fights, but the bad relationship he has with his perfect father. If you enjoy fantasy novels with realistic characters, you should give this story a try
Lucky I have the time to read your story. I really liked how you build up your Prologue because it is like a thriller movie which made it more catchy to the readers! Looking forward for the character that you originally created. The way how you play the adjectives was nice. Keep it up! Good luck to all of us
I don't know which rank this story is on because I only found out about it after stalking someone in WebNovel, and let me say, it's GREAT! Aside from the very few grammatical errors and the author's tendency to unintentionally switch from present tense, future tense and past tense, the flow of the story is truly remarkable. As for the minor mistakes, I'd like to point out one that you made in the first chapter. On the fourth paragraph—the short one, "But to his dismay, his inability to see will soon bring him to his end." I recommend that you pay attention to the tenses of your sentences, I saw how your story mostly went with present tense, so go with that. It should be "his inability would soon", not will. There are other mistakes, butI'm sure you'll figure them out on your own! I hope you rise in the leaderboards, the plot within the first three chapters is intriguing. I'll be adding this to my library soon. Keep it up!