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The amount of pages per chapter was quite a delight after reading chapters in other books with only 8-17 pages. With this novel we are getting ranges 17-43 pages which is a much needed change. The characters are consistent and believable with the story impacting them and changing characters views and positions.(I hope the author introduces more political struggles into the story revolving around meta-human and there rights). The plot is very good with a constant need for more even with only 18 chapters it has done more than some novels do with 100 chapters. I hope that we get a more in depth look into the world as a whole first and then move on into the cosmic aspect. (Space in my opion should be left for later in the story). This novel has a really good premise and a great execution can't wait for more!
Tags: Fanfic, Marvel Universe, mature readers, action, scifi, magic. This is a fanfic set primarily in the MArvel universe (mainly MCU, with buts if Earth 616 for those areas that the MCU doesn’t cover). This is my first experience readig this type of fanfic. At first I was ready to be annoyed at the author for committing sacrilege by interacting with various Marvel characters, but by the 3rd chapter I was hooked by the author’s writing style, plot and characters. It’s clear that the author loves the Marvel universe, and as a fellow fan, I can relate to that feeling. He has written this with a lot of respect for each of the Marvel characters and makes them really come to life just as they would in their comics. The great thing of course, is that they’re not constrained by licencing issues (X men meet Spiderman and other characters quite early). All of the MC’s actions are logical and there isnt too much of “I win because I’m thr MC”. And he does make some mistakes, which is refreshing to see amid all the perfect MC’s. Spoilers: There are several things to note. Not bad things, just things to be aware of. First, this is a harem fanfic. The MC gathers a lot of hot heroines (given thisbis Marvel, most if not all the heroines are Hot 🔥), although this is done in a natural way that mostly makes sense and is character driven. I enjoyed following the characters as they developed relationships and if those relationships happened to develop into a harem, then it felt natural and not forced in the novel. This was very well done in the first parts of this novel although this slipped towards end. Emma Frost wasnt as well developed as Ororo, to cite one example. 2nd thing to note is that there is some quite graphic soft core sex scenes, but again these are written as part of a natural progression to the relationship and not inserted gratuitously, which is nice. I didnt mind it myself, but just be warned if it’s not your cup of tea. The fight scenes are well written, with different powers used logicaly rather than characters being hit by the Artificial Stupidity bug just to advance the plot. Although the MC never even gets near losing a fight, so there isn’t any actual feeling of threat to the fights. The lat thing to note is that the update speed is one chapter per 2 weeks, although each chapter is mega long compared to the chapters of typical novels on this site. So be prepared to wait a loooong time for this novel to finish. Having said all that, let me make it clear that I’m really enjoying this novel. At this time the story has progressed to the start of the MCU and it looks like it’ll probably take a year before it gets up to the end of the current MCU. I’ve enjoyed the story so far and look forward to enjoying the rest as it comes out. Well done Big Tofu 👍
The concept for the story is fantastic, I like how he gets his power and that he is as fast as he is while using his super speed. The problem first started with his interaction with Storm and Mystique, I won’t go into detail of how he acts but he is in a relationship and doesn’t really act mature enough especially considering this is his second life, the way he acts during his meeting with them isn’t the worst, with two incredibly beautiful women in front of him, I’m sure there’re worse conversations in different stories, but it is the start of a heavy decline as he acts more and more like a 10 year old, unable to control himself and stop fanboying, repeating the same thing just worded differently. I was unable to read past chapter 4, so I can’t comment on any of the claims of cheating, but from what I read, it seems to be a sort of polyamorous relationship with the first girlfriend getting with other girls without the MC. The story might get better later on, but I can’t read anymore and am dropping, power to any who enjoys it or pushes through to see if it gets better. If you’re looking for a fanfic and aren’t too bothered about if the MC acts a bit childish and some ambiguous relationship with the female leads, then I would recommend you try reading and I hope it is something you will enjoy.
It was a good book in the beginning but overtime the Mc started to become something else instead of what he started as
I'm not used to writing reviews but this was too much!! too much irrelevant content, a supposedly intelligent mc yet so stupid in short the story had good latent potential but the author introduced too much of his personal fantasy to the detriment of logic.
Where is the harem tag tho? Its clearly harem. Where is the harem tag tho? Its clearly harem. Where is the harem tag tho? Its clearly harem.
honestly it's meh... I don't like the MC though.. The story just makes the MC get involved in almost anything marvel just cause he's got "plans" I mean come on being a speedster and one with the speedforce can cover pretty much anything. It does not have originality the MC is dumb and blames hormones
Review should be more than 40 characters - but this isn’t really worth the effort. Could have been great but the characters kill the story here.
Try imagining writing a book we’re the main character is in marvel [Comics] with all of dc’s powers ( I mean all the powers ,people, magic he can assimilate all of them into himself) all of dc into on man into marvel comic’s
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it was good but suddenly novel became full KingdomBuilding. 0 action, actually 0 KingdomBuilding =D. AT just make it seem like it is but nope... My advice read 20+ chapters, then drop
One of the best books I've read. This is so entertaining and thought out. The only reason it has a 4.5 is everybody's going crazy for the next chaptersAnd can't wait so the frustration built up to give it a 4.5 when it really deserves a 5.0. But seriously this guy writes so good that he gives you that itch that won't go away until the next chapter.
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Man this novel is hidden gem.. Don't look the lower rating. And man those people are nuts to give this 2star. This story deserve 4.7~5.0 = Btw @author change the cover please.. I skimmed this novel like 8 times already becuse the cover. LOL. =
I Read quite a lot of chapters and it feel like Captain Marvel movie as a tenage guy with very worse control on hormones but then again it's wish fulfillment story not by some strating writer so don't expect much if he disrespect one of your favourite character
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Started of great, the convo flow seems pleasant with a couple of jokes here and there but then throws it off with the fantasizing of X-genes. The MC supposedly has the knowledge of "The flash" yet throws shallow knowledge of "The flash". The thing is if flash had shown his capabilities earlier in the story like phasing, time travel, mach punch and so on the story would've been more entertaining. Another thing is that the idea of adding the flash along with the X-men seems rather redundant. Why? well, the X-men already has Quicksilver! why add another speedster in it. It wouldve been more exciting if you placed the setting in avengers and the story of avengers from the invasion to end game.
best marvel fanfic ever written from my side of view. A great story with proper grammar the writing quality is amazing the kingdom building is very good totally a very satisfying fiction hope you can publish chapters more often
In first 12 chp its not good, but then MC become emperor, and its go amazing, well written backgroung, so if u read first 15 chp and think that this is not good, reed a few more and u like it
just horrible, boring and dumb protagonist..............................................................................................................................
That's what happen when you hand over the great power to immature person ,i just dropped on 1 chapter as he shared his future knowledge,and about his reincarnation to his girl 😑😑😑😑😑😑
Don't read if you hate Beta Male mc,Ntr,Simp mc,An Mc that doesn't even try to defend himself even when he is in the right especially when he is arguing with his "lovers",And An Mc with parents that would rather dozens of people die and rather their child be safe even tho the mc can defend himself.
Well, what can i say... the story is not baaaad, but it's not good. The story has 0 development for secondary characters, i know it's a FF but you at least have to make some effort so it makes sense for the secondary act at a certain way with the protagonist, feels like you have a stair, and then you jumped straight to the top of her, jumping all the way. The protagonist is too inconsistent, sometimes he is confident and cold, sometimes he acts like a teenage like when he meet Raven for the first time, that was really cringe. The dialog is really bad, but this is the author's first novel so i can see he getting better. Author spend to much time explaining Flash power and how it works, we already know that dude, no need to make an entire chapter just to explain it, there's always a google. As i said, the story started really rushed, like the athor didn't wanted to start Mc's romance from the beginning. When the story started the Mc already had everything he would need to have power, and them 'boof' he is an omega level just like, that was too easy, but that was my personal opnion since i would enjoy more to see the protagonist own what he got. The good thing is that the chapters are really big.
At least i hope he get as fAst as Waly West ….…,.,,,,,,,.,,?,???;;(?)!5;,$&!;35$!::?)$;:/4)))5;()&$;;,)&(;;());;6&!;45!?;:3
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This fanfiction is one of the best I have read that is based on the marvel universe. The story is unlike other fanfiction and explores various ideas that is not seen in other stories. I hope that the author continues the story and doesn't drop it.
It is a really good story with quality writing and good character development and since the mc is an ultra-fan of the people inside the story it has a really enjoyable flow seeing how the mc character understands that the people idolized also people and it real life where you can get hurt and die not just a comic story where you magically always survive and it seems the mc character also very good at using his comic book knowledge to scheme and ambush the villains.So highly recommend you to read it.
The amount of pages per chapter was quite a delight after reading chapters in other books with only 8-17 pages. With this novel we are getting ranges 17-43 pages which is a much needed change. The characters are consistent and believable with the story impacting them and changing characters views and positions.(I hope the author introduces more political struggles into the story revolving around meta-human and there rights). The plot is very good with a constant need for more even with only 18 chapters it has done more than some novels do with 100 chapters. I hope that we get a more in depth look into the world as a whole first and then move on into the cosmic aspect. (Space in my opion should be left for later in the story). This novel has a really good premise and a great execution can't wait for more!
Tags: Fanfic, Marvel Universe, mature readers, action, scifi, magic. This is a fanfic set primarily in the MArvel universe (mainly MCU, with buts if Earth 616 for those areas that the MCU doesn’t cover). This is my first experience readig this type of fanfic. At first I was ready to be annoyed at the author for committing sacrilege by interacting with various Marvel characters, but by the 3rd chapter I was hooked by the author’s writing style, plot and characters. It’s clear that the author loves the Marvel universe, and as a fellow fan, I can relate to that feeling. He has written this with a lot of respect for each of the Marvel characters and makes them really come to life just as they would in their comics. The great thing of course, is that they’re not constrained by licencing issues (X men meet Spiderman and other characters quite early). All of the MC’s actions are logical and there isnt too much of “I win because I’m thr MC”. And he does make some mistakes, which is refreshing to see amid all the perfect MC’s. Spoilers: There are several things to note. Not bad things, just things to be aware of. First, this is a harem fanfic. The MC gathers a lot of hot heroines (given thisbis Marvel, most if not all the heroines are Hot 🔥), although this is done in a natural way that mostly makes sense and is character driven. I enjoyed following the characters as they developed relationships and if those relationships happened to develop into a harem, then it felt natural and not forced in the novel. This was very well done in the first parts of this novel although this slipped towards end. Emma Frost wasnt as well developed as Ororo, to cite one example. 2nd thing to note is that there is some quite graphic soft core sex scenes, but again these are written as part of a natural progression to the relationship and not inserted gratuitously, which is nice. I didnt mind it myself, but just be warned if it’s not your cup of tea. The fight scenes are well written, with different powers used logicaly rather than characters being hit by the Artificial Stupidity bug just to advance the plot. Although the MC never even gets near losing a fight, so there isn’t any actual feeling of threat to the fights. The lat thing to note is that the update speed is one chapter per 2 weeks, although each chapter is mega long compared to the chapters of typical novels on this site. So be prepared to wait a loooong time for this novel to finish. Having said all that, let me make it clear that I’m really enjoying this novel. At this time the story has progressed to the start of the MCU and it looks like it’ll probably take a year before it gets up to the end of the current MCU. I’ve enjoyed the story so far and look forward to enjoying the rest as it comes out. Well done Big Tofu 👍
The concept for the story is fantastic, I like how he gets his power and that he is as fast as he is while using his super speed. The problem first started with his interaction with Storm and Mystique, I won’t go into detail of how he acts but he is in a relationship and doesn’t really act mature enough especially considering this is his second life, the way he acts during his meeting with them isn’t the worst, with two incredibly beautiful women in front of him, I’m sure there’re worse conversations in different stories, but it is the start of a heavy decline as he acts more and more like a 10 year old, unable to control himself and stop fanboying, repeating the same thing just worded differently. I was unable to read past chapter 4, so I can’t comment on any of the claims of cheating, but from what I read, it seems to be a sort of polyamorous relationship with the first girlfriend getting with other girls without the MC. The story might get better later on, but I can’t read anymore and am dropping, power to any who enjoys it or pushes through to see if it gets better. If you’re looking for a fanfic and aren’t too bothered about if the MC acts a bit childish and some ambiguous relationship with the female leads, then I would recommend you try reading and I hope it is something you will enjoy.
It was a good book in the beginning but overtime the Mc started to become something else instead of what he started as
I'm not used to writing reviews but this was too much!! too much irrelevant content, a supposedly intelligent mc yet so stupid in short the story had good latent potential but the author introduced too much of his personal fantasy to the detriment of logic.
Where is the harem tag tho? Its clearly harem. Where is the harem tag tho? Its clearly harem. Where is the harem tag tho? Its clearly harem.
honestly it's meh... I don't like the MC though.. The story just makes the MC get involved in almost anything marvel just cause he's got "plans" I mean come on being a speedster and one with the speedforce can cover pretty much anything. It does not have originality the MC is dumb and blames hormones
Review should be more than 40 characters - but this isn’t really worth the effort. Could have been great but the characters kill the story here.
Try imagining writing a book we’re the main character is in marvel [Comics] with all of dc’s powers ( I mean all the powers ,people, magic he can assimilate all of them into himself) all of dc into on man into marvel comic’s
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it was good but suddenly novel became full KingdomBuilding. 0 action, actually 0 KingdomBuilding =D. AT just make it seem like it is but nope... My advice read 20+ chapters, then drop
One of the best books I've read. This is so entertaining and thought out. The only reason it has a 4.5 is everybody's going crazy for the next chaptersAnd can't wait so the frustration built up to give it a 4.5 when it really deserves a 5.0. But seriously this guy writes so good that he gives you that itch that won't go away until the next chapter.
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Man this novel is hidden gem.. Don't look the lower rating. And man those people are nuts to give this 2star. This story deserve 4.7~5.0 = Btw @author change the cover please.. I skimmed this novel like 8 times already becuse the cover. LOL. =
I Read quite a lot of chapters and it feel like Captain Marvel movie as a tenage guy with very worse control on hormones but then again it's wish fulfillment story not by some strating writer so don't expect much if he disrespect one of your favourite character
bit.ly/3LyRF1N 💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗
nem tente ler isso cara, só vai lhe dar dor de cabeça..... ............................. ............................................
Started of great, the convo flow seems pleasant with a couple of jokes here and there but then throws it off with the fantasizing of X-genes. The MC supposedly has the knowledge of "The flash" yet throws shallow knowledge of "The flash". The thing is if flash had shown his capabilities earlier in the story like phasing, time travel, mach punch and so on the story would've been more entertaining. Another thing is that the idea of adding the flash along with the X-men seems rather redundant. Why? well, the X-men already has Quicksilver! why add another speedster in it. It wouldve been more exciting if you placed the setting in avengers and the story of avengers from the invasion to end game.
best marvel fanfic ever written from my side of view. A great story with proper grammar the writing quality is amazing the kingdom building is very good totally a very satisfying fiction hope you can publish chapters more often
In first 12 chp its not good, but then MC become emperor, and its go amazing, well written backgroung, so if u read first 15 chp and think that this is not good, reed a few more and u like it
just horrible, boring and dumb protagonist..............................................................................................................................
That's what happen when you hand over the great power to immature person ,i just dropped on 1 chapter as he shared his future knowledge,and about his reincarnation to his girl 😑😑😑😑😑😑
Don't read if you hate Beta Male mc,Ntr,Simp mc,An Mc that doesn't even try to defend himself even when he is in the right especially when he is arguing with his "lovers",And An Mc with parents that would rather dozens of people die and rather their child be safe even tho the mc can defend himself.
Well, what can i say... the story is not baaaad, but it's not good. The story has 0 development for secondary characters, i know it's a FF but you at least have to make some effort so it makes sense for the secondary act at a certain way with the protagonist, feels like you have a stair, and then you jumped straight to the top of her, jumping all the way. The protagonist is too inconsistent, sometimes he is confident and cold, sometimes he acts like a teenage like when he meet Raven for the first time, that was really cringe. The dialog is really bad, but this is the author's first novel so i can see he getting better. Author spend to much time explaining Flash power and how it works, we already know that dude, no need to make an entire chapter just to explain it, there's always a google. As i said, the story started really rushed, like the athor didn't wanted to start Mc's romance from the beginning. When the story started the Mc already had everything he would need to have power, and them 'boof' he is an omega level just like, that was too easy, but that was my personal opnion since i would enjoy more to see the protagonist own what he got. The good thing is that the chapters are really big.
At least i hope he get as fAst as Waly West ….…,.,,,,,,,.,,?,???;;(?)!5;,$&!;35$!::?)$;:/4)))5;()&$;;,)&(;;());;6&!;45!?;:3
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This fanfiction is one of the best I have read that is based on the marvel universe. The story is unlike other fanfiction and explores various ideas that is not seen in other stories. I hope that the author continues the story and doesn't drop it.
It is a really good story with quality writing and good character development and since the mc is an ultra-fan of the people inside the story it has a really enjoyable flow seeing how the mc character understands that the people idolized also people and it real life where you can get hurt and die not just a comic story where you magically always survive and it seems the mc character also very good at using his comic book knowledge to scheme and ambush the villains.So highly recommend you to read it.