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Write a reviewTwo things i notice authors on this website struggle to execute in their novels are Systems and Harems. So i find out that mc had a system, i had doubts about the this novel, cuz usually systems can either break or make a novel. I love how the system makes the mc work for everything and doesn't explain everything, leaving him to figuring it himself in a satisfying way. The author really excel in action scenes, it's trilling to read those chapters. I also like how there's a little slice of life chapters in the novel, if that makes sense. This novel is the few reasons why i regularly come back to this website.
it hooked me from the start i even read more 400+ chap in 3 days that was even my busiest week i had to find more time in my schedule to read it now im regretting reading it quickly
please update the chapters more frequently so we can enjoy one of the best present out there in web novel
Oh god, seriously more than 600 chapters and the protagonist is barely going for his first Champions League? What a disappointment and shame for someone who has the help of a system... At this rate, Russia 2018 will be until the 2000 chapters...
Having read up to chapter 604 I felt that I should write a review. The most important part of sports novels is the world, there can be super unrealistic powers and abilities but if they are used in a world where it makes sense and it helps the reader feel like there is more than just the MC out there it really helps with immersion. This novel excels at making the reader feel like a part of the world, and it does not feel like we are at the centre of it, rather it feels like real life when you follow a player's journey to the top. It feels rewarding when Zachary performs well, and at times I feel the same feelings I feel when watching the Premier League, Bundesliga or any other league. Minor gripes with the characters are that some of them feel a bit like they are there to help the story move along, keep in mind that it is very minor and not noticeable most of the time, but it is still there. the MC Zachary also feels a bit too perfect in that no real person could have so much singular focus on football to such an extent, I see the author trying to use other characters to show the consequence of such a mindset (I won't say but if you have read then you know), but it's still not enough sometimes and Zachary still feels a bit robotic, however, I believe the author may rectify this as Zacahry is still young and he has time in his career. So I hope to see some character development for Zachary. I want to write more but this is already long enough so I will quickly say a few points. The buildup of his career was exciting to read and at times I felt like I was in the stands watching him> I usually read Sports manga so this novel was a very welcome change for me and I had no problems understanding what was going on. The store is a tad slow to start up but it is well-paced after Zachary's career takes off. I might have rated this a tad bit high but that's a reflection of my hope that this novel reaches even greater heights. Thanks for reading my rambly review I hope I didn't waste too much of your time.
Best sports novel ever if you like sports novels and havenβt read this your lifeβs not complete
Experience the awe-inspiring tale penned by an exceptional author. Are you seeking a captivating trailer video that befits your remarkable book? Connect with me on FB at "TRANMAXX PRO" for more info
Good sports novel one of my favorites but it would be nice if author informs about time delay in author notes
Wonderful story, really splendid. But even at that, I recommend you read The Greatest of All Time: Tales of the Floater by Krystal George.
I should this the best sports based novel I've ever had fun reading , it's realistically satisfactory
Best football novel for me with the right amount of system uses which makes sure to just push the Mc rather then directly control his future aspects.
I loved it, specially because it has players from real time. The way the author has made research to put many of the correct players in the teams at the specific time makes the novel 10 times better.
I thought it was a translation from Chinese to English because in places it looks like this. The quality of the text, small chapters and the meaning of the text sometimes misleads me, as it happens when reading Google translations of short stories from Chinese. I searched a little on the Internet for this novel and did not find it in Chinese. But suspicions still remained. Someone calm my suspicions please)))
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gooooooooodddgooooooooodddgooooooooodddgooooooooodddgooooooooodddI enjoyed it.that's all I can say100 words.
It is the best sports novel I have read, very well written, with enthusiastic chapters. I liked the hero, his fighting spirit, his competitiveness, and his lack of preoccupation with romance, which the writer has now abandoned in the last chapters and is waiting for his match against Real Madrid.
Reveal SpoilerThe story is very well written, it is so far the best sports story I have read and it represents very well what sport is and all of them have characters with a lot of personality and the players are wonderfully represented. So far he's doing very well and now the question: which Premier League team will Zachary play for after his time at Juventus? Personally I would like to see him at Liverpool because let's be honest everyone likes JΓΌrgen Klopp
my first novel ever and i loved it i really wish author start's uploading new chapter's can't wait to read more
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This is a beautiful story, although my knowledge is incomplete since I'm trying to find the funds to read past chapter 40. (Pray for me.) It really has depicted the life of a footballer so well, especially the rise from DR congo into the rosenborg academy. Even then the MC's life was shown so transparently and his growth was steady rather than being at messi's level from the beginning. Lovely I recommend
the author done a very good job with football details and stuff. but, he seems to forget that the mc is actually a person but not Robot. common man, his girlfriend has Miscarriage but mc seems not even remember about it the next day, and he goes to play game. the guy got second life after dying alone, but only thinks about football and nothing else, I mean I know it a sport novel, but common, at least let him live some good moments of life other than training and stuff. overall it's Hard for me to pick after authors recent hitus, author should improve on charectar designing and building, because there is no way a person who died and came back to life will behave like the mc you're currently writing.
Well written story aimed at sporting enthusiasts using the common trope of reliving a life marred by regrets with a system that rewards effort and achievement with the athletic improvement needed to become the Greatest of All Time. This story is notable more for the execution than the idea, but is no less entertaining for that.
Two things i notice authors on this website struggle to execute in their novels are Systems and Harems. So i find out that mc had a system, i had doubts about the this novel, cuz usually systems can either break or make a novel. I love how the system makes the mc work for everything and doesn't explain everything, leaving him to figuring it himself in a satisfying way. The author really excel in action scenes, it's trilling to read those chapters. I also like how there's a little slice of life chapters in the novel, if that makes sense. This novel is the few reasons why i regularly come back to this website.
it hooked me from the start i even read more 400+ chap in 3 days that was even my busiest week i had to find more time in my schedule to read it now im regretting reading it quickly
please update the chapters more frequently so we can enjoy one of the best present out there in web novel
Oh god, seriously more than 600 chapters and the protagonist is barely going for his first Champions League? What a disappointment and shame for someone who has the help of a system... At this rate, Russia 2018 will be until the 2000 chapters...
Having read up to chapter 604 I felt that I should write a review. The most important part of sports novels is the world, there can be super unrealistic powers and abilities but if they are used in a world where it makes sense and it helps the reader feel like there is more than just the MC out there it really helps with immersion. This novel excels at making the reader feel like a part of the world, and it does not feel like we are at the centre of it, rather it feels like real life when you follow a player's journey to the top. It feels rewarding when Zachary performs well, and at times I feel the same feelings I feel when watching the Premier League, Bundesliga or any other league. Minor gripes with the characters are that some of them feel a bit like they are there to help the story move along, keep in mind that it is very minor and not noticeable most of the time, but it is still there. the MC Zachary also feels a bit too perfect in that no real person could have so much singular focus on football to such an extent, I see the author trying to use other characters to show the consequence of such a mindset (I won't say but if you have read then you know), but it's still not enough sometimes and Zachary still feels a bit robotic, however, I believe the author may rectify this as Zacahry is still young and he has time in his career. So I hope to see some character development for Zachary. I want to write more but this is already long enough so I will quickly say a few points. The buildup of his career was exciting to read and at times I felt like I was in the stands watching him> I usually read Sports manga so this novel was a very welcome change for me and I had no problems understanding what was going on. The store is a tad slow to start up but it is well-paced after Zachary's career takes off. I might have rated this a tad bit high but that's a reflection of my hope that this novel reaches even greater heights. Thanks for reading my rambly review I hope I didn't waste too much of your time.
Best sports novel ever if you like sports novels and havenβt read this your lifeβs not complete
Experience the awe-inspiring tale penned by an exceptional author. Are you seeking a captivating trailer video that befits your remarkable book? Connect with me on FB at "TRANMAXX PRO" for more info
Good sports novel one of my favorites but it would be nice if author informs about time delay in author notes
Wonderful story, really splendid. But even at that, I recommend you read The Greatest of All Time: Tales of the Floater by Krystal George.
I should this the best sports based novel I've ever had fun reading , it's realistically satisfactory
Best football novel for me with the right amount of system uses which makes sure to just push the Mc rather then directly control his future aspects.
I loved it, specially because it has players from real time. The way the author has made research to put many of the correct players in the teams at the specific time makes the novel 10 times better.
I thought it was a translation from Chinese to English because in places it looks like this. The quality of the text, small chapters and the meaning of the text sometimes misleads me, as it happens when reading Google translations of short stories from Chinese. I searched a little on the Internet for this novel and did not find it in Chinese. But suspicions still remained. Someone calm my suspicions please)))
big upsπππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
gooooooooodddgooooooooodddgooooooooodddgooooooooodddgooooooooodddI enjoyed it.that's all I can say100 words.
It is the best sports novel I have read, very well written, with enthusiastic chapters. I liked the hero, his fighting spirit, his competitiveness, and his lack of preoccupation with romance, which the writer has now abandoned in the last chapters and is waiting for his match against Real Madrid.
Reveal SpoilerThe story is very well written, it is so far the best sports story I have read and it represents very well what sport is and all of them have characters with a lot of personality and the players are wonderfully represented. So far he's doing very well and now the question: which Premier League team will Zachary play for after his time at Juventus? Personally I would like to see him at Liverpool because let's be honest everyone likes JΓΌrgen Klopp
my first novel ever and i loved it i really wish author start's uploading new chapter's can't wait to read more
Yazar , romanΔ± bΔ±raktΔ±mΔ±? Djdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjfjdkdkdkdkdkskdkdkdkdkjdjdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkddkdkdkdkdkddkkdkdkdeudjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdkdkskkdkdkdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjd
This is a beautiful story, although my knowledge is incomplete since I'm trying to find the funds to read past chapter 40. (Pray for me.) It really has depicted the life of a footballer so well, especially the rise from DR congo into the rosenborg academy. Even then the MC's life was shown so transparently and his growth was steady rather than being at messi's level from the beginning. Lovely I recommend
the author done a very good job with football details and stuff. but, he seems to forget that the mc is actually a person but not Robot. common man, his girlfriend has Miscarriage but mc seems not even remember about it the next day, and he goes to play game. the guy got second life after dying alone, but only thinks about football and nothing else, I mean I know it a sport novel, but common, at least let him live some good moments of life other than training and stuff. overall it's Hard for me to pick after authors recent hitus, author should improve on charectar designing and building, because there is no way a person who died and came back to life will behave like the mc you're currently writing.
Well written story aimed at sporting enthusiasts using the common trope of reliving a life marred by regrets with a system that rewards effort and achievement with the athletic improvement needed to become the Greatest of All Time. This story is notable more for the execution than the idea, but is no less entertaining for that.