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Даю 5 ★ за то что круто!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
is this drop? if it is then it is sad and a pity dor a good piece of fanfic to be dropped. i just that it will be continued... Well it is really good and hope tsunade and evangeline are in his harem even if just a small harem of 2-5 women... please continue thank uou
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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I won't give you all 5 stars might wanna fix some of that grammar and also update for the stability........................................................
PLEASE UPDATE SOMETIME SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Nice work. I would prefer if you update more ... UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATE REQUIRED
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I just want to give this story a 5 star It is cliche, but if u gave this story a low rate because of that reason than its more cliche than anything i mean u know everyone have their own taste like me i like the good mc and my brother he loves the rutheless mc And if u dont like the cliche story than i have an example In my country there's so many rutheless mc story, so many that until to the point that rutheless mc story get called a cliche and a mainstream story The point is you can't give an execuse 'its cliche the mc is so kind and always help people' to some story that u want to give a low rating.
It is a very good fic, but unnecessarily similar to the dimensional chat group siscon. To make matters worse the MC is excessively op, so it is relatively safe to say that this fic will be dropped sooner or later. It is incredibly rare for a fic op mc to be completed, even top 10 fics like Soul Land 3: Legend of the Jade Emperor have been dropped due to the mc becoming overly op and the author having no way to develop the book further. (sorry for any error i used google translator)
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I feel the quality of your writing is perfect like the others so it is easy to read but please speed up the update because the novel is good and also has personal opinions, add the option to invite people by paying a number of system pioin
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more is needed author san this is fantastic [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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well from where to start, for me the story not yet reach where i can judge it entirely so i'm gonna say that fro starter is quite good and hope u can make more interesting. Additionally about our mc well how to say is quite a king person yeah lol..and please i know this is gonna be an OP MC so hope and more hope u can make good story out of it...since the mc is OP send to the most ******** world such as Toriko world to fight 8 king or something or HxH to fight meruem... Suggestion : he has fucking 1 billion point dude...just buy him instant mastery already
update . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .???
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The Character designs surely need some work. I find characters stuttering via texts and very unnatural reactions. The narration was decent, but surely it can improve as it seems like somehow it wasn't explained clearly. Characters suddenly knowing everything like that was very uncalled for, their reactions don't add up. As for the plot itself, it wasn't exactly my cup of tea, but that'll be my own preference and I won't state it hereHere, Update stability is well... obviously since it's on a break so 3.
Даю 5 ★ за то что круто!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
is this drop? if it is then it is sad and a pity dor a good piece of fanfic to be dropped. i just that it will be continued... Well it is really good and hope tsunade and evangeline are in his harem even if just a small harem of 2-5 women... please continue thank uou
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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I won't give you all 5 stars might wanna fix some of that grammar and also update for the stability........................................................
PLEASE UPDATE SOMETIME SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Nice work. I would prefer if you update more ... UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATE REQUIRED
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Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem?
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I just want to give this story a 5 star It is cliche, but if u gave this story a low rate because of that reason than its more cliche than anything i mean u know everyone have their own taste like me i like the good mc and my brother he loves the rutheless mc And if u dont like the cliche story than i have an example In my country there's so many rutheless mc story, so many that until to the point that rutheless mc story get called a cliche and a mainstream story The point is you can't give an execuse 'its cliche the mc is so kind and always help people' to some story that u want to give a low rating.
It is a very good fic, but unnecessarily similar to the dimensional chat group siscon. To make matters worse the MC is excessively op, so it is relatively safe to say that this fic will be dropped sooner or later. It is incredibly rare for a fic op mc to be completed, even top 10 fics like Soul Land 3: Legend of the Jade Emperor have been dropped due to the mc becoming overly op and the author having no way to develop the book further. (sorry for any error i used google translator)
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I feel the quality of your writing is perfect like the others so it is easy to read but please speed up the update because the novel is good and also has personal opinions, add the option to invite people by paying a number of system pioin
Is this Harem?Is this Harem?Is this Harem?Is this HaremIs this Harem??Is this Harem?Is this Harem?Is this Harem?Is this Harem?Is this Harem?
more is needed author san this is fantastic [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Reveal Spoiler this is awesome more chapter needed [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
well from where to start, for me the story not yet reach where i can judge it entirely so i'm gonna say that fro starter is quite good and hope u can make more interesting. Additionally about our mc well how to say is quite a king person yeah lol..and please i know this is gonna be an OP MC so hope and more hope u can make good story out of it...since the mc is OP send to the most ******** world such as Toriko world to fight 8 king or something or HxH to fight meruem... Suggestion : he has fucking 1 billion point dude...just buy him instant mastery already
update . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .???
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The Character designs surely need some work. I find characters stuttering via texts and very unnatural reactions. The narration was decent, but surely it can improve as it seems like somehow it wasn't explained clearly. Characters suddenly knowing everything like that was very uncalled for, their reactions don't add up. As for the plot itself, it wasn't exactly my cup of tea, but that'll be my own preference and I won't state it hereHere, Update stability is well... obviously since it's on a break so 3.