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The story somewhat interesting, it has a potential the only problem is the writing format no paragraphs i think author need to edit it ..... My Advice:Put Spacing Put Spacing Put Spacing Put Spacing Put Spacing Put Spacing Put Spacing Put Spacing Put Spacing Put Spacing Put Spacing
Reading this gave me a minor headache. Whoever wrote this needs to take english classes. The actual story was basic but passable and the characters got little to no development.