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- Stability of Updates
- Story Development
- Character Design
- World Background
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Writing Quality improves relatively quickly and becomes more expressive. Update stability is outstanding, two chapters a day so far. Story development is stable, a bit fast paced, but nominal. Character design, descriptions could need a bit more sprucing, even though it wasn't until recently anyone more was introduced, but overall they're good. The system has a distinct personality and is highly interactive, and world background hasn't really been shared just yet. Hoping for more!
< Shamelessly slapping five stars on my own product. > < Hope you don't mind. > < Leave me some good grub.. I mean yeah... Food would do! > < But really, leave me something constructive! >
it was a great story and a equally great mc but it stopped to short I wish their was more chapters.
Writing Quality improves relatively quickly and becomes more expressive. Update stability is outstanding, two chapters a day so far. Story development is stable, a bit fast paced, but nominal. Character design, descriptions could need a bit more sprucing, even though it wasn't until recently anyone more was introduced, but overall they're good. The system has a distinct personality and is highly interactive, and world background hasn't really been shared just yet. Hoping for more!
< Shamelessly slapping five stars on my own product. > < Hope you don't mind. > < Leave me some good grub.. I mean yeah... Food would do! > < But really, leave me something constructive! >
it was a great story and a equally great mc but it stopped to short I wish their was more chapters.