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Write a reviewI'm at chapter 15 at the time of writing this. The stroy is looking great and promising, i can't say much about the mc because he is still a child and will go through character development throughout the novel, but the writing itself is detailed and well written, the magic and warrior systems are simple and easy to understand and the goal is clear. Overall, a good novel with great potential, and I'm looking forward to the next chapters
Still in the beginning but looks very promising. I personally always like stories of healers as I think they have great potential and are often set as side characters.....letβs see how this will go.
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Even on the last chapter posted we still dont know who the character is ,,and I dont mean his name or his clan ,,but who is he as a person ,,psychology, emotionally what drives him,,what's his purpose,,at this point he could be anyone from the story ,,and there is nothing special about him that make him the mc ,,the background story's and scenarios are overwhelmingly build,,we dont get to enjoy the process at all and he just level up two disciplines and a trade without explaining anything about how he did it or what he learn and how that will impact his story..y tried to keep reading hoping for improvement but it's not happening..sorry author..I really wanted to like your story but it didn't work
Reveal Spoilerfirst off i am a new reader on wn but have read a bunch of translations in general this book reminds me a lot of coiling dragon and unsure if the author wanted it to be this way but i also think this is a good comparison because the best part about coiling dragon was its ability to be a slower moving story without it being a bad one i hope that the author keeps this great pacing but also keeps dishing out many daily chapters so that even if the story is this slow that i will not drop
thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
So far great! Donβt drop this novel Iβm liking it very much. The speed at its progressing is perfect. If possible tho I would like to have our mc become one that keeps his family with him threw his journey. Also donβt start the romance too late so that we see his children and clan grow with him. I DONT WANT A CHILD MC THAT IS OP AND CAN KILL ANYONE AND EVERYTHING. It sounds like the people in this novel have long lives once they reach certain levels so I would like it if our mc makes the most out of each level not jumping from one to another in a matter of months.
It seems like alot of the reviews are from either bot's or alt accounts so i will be here giving an honest review. The story has a slow start but that might just be me. it is well written though which is a plus. The concept is okay but because it's wiitten well it's better then most stories out htere. Im afraid the author will drop this story though liek he has nearly every story he has written. This is the last chance i will follow a story of his. If he drops this then there is no point following him
Knowing the author very well, this novel is nothing short of a great story waiting to unfold. Although I've only read the first few chapters, I can say without a doubt that quality and excitement go hand in hand when you're reading this novel. I highly recommend it.
(Note: This review is for Chapter 1~2.) From what I've read so far, I like the flow of the story and how it's being written so far. I've read a plethora of genres so I'm not new to this theme, but I think it's great that the author was able to keep the pacing or the release of information somewhere around the middle. I mention this because making it too complex outright will make beginners lose interest, and making it far too simple would obviously drive the more experienced readers away. The pacing is good overall (there were some parts that got a little slow for me but I'm sure it'll be fine for most). I'd like to know more about what happens next when I get the time to read some more. It seems quite promising. Great job!
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keep up the good work author unsure if you just dropped all your chapters but please continue this crazy release schedule so i can keep reading! recommend to everyone
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Reveal SpoilerDamn broski this book is a great saturday gift with 15 chapters in the span of like a hour?!?? Damn broski this book is a great saturday gift with 15 chapters in the span of like a hour?!?? Damn broski this book is a great saturday gift with 15 chapters in the span of like a hour?!??
glad to see you are doing well tadpole and releasing more content even if you dropped your novel from the contest! 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140
When an author mass releases 15 chapters, you sort of have to go out of your way to try the novel out. Yoohohoho! When an author mass releases 15 chapters, you sort of have to go out of your way to try the novel out. Yoohohoho!
Reveal SpoilerMy shameless review. This story is about a Healer named Lance who follows both the path of a warrior/swordsman as well as a mystic. I hope that everyone who gives this a read, can leave feedback whether good or bad. I plan on releasing 1 chapter/day consistently and may choose to release more chapters per day depending on amount of stones. :D -The Sleeping Tadpole
A great author knows the wonders of stocking chapters, it's just the first release but we've already been given fifteen chapters to read and enjoy. I think that we can expect stable and consistent updates. On top of that, reading the initial chapters made me enjoy this world of Lance. I personally enjoy more Western stories than Eastern Wuxia or Xianxia but this story caught my attention and has kept it. A solid main character in an enrapturing world. Certainly a treat to readers here. Looking forward for the rest of the story. Great work!
I'm at chapter 15 at the time of writing this. The stroy is looking great and promising, i can't say much about the mc because he is still a child and will go through character development throughout the novel, but the writing itself is detailed and well written, the magic and warrior systems are simple and easy to understand and the goal is clear. Overall, a good novel with great potential, and I'm looking forward to the next chapters
Still in the beginning but looks very promising. I personally always like stories of healers as I think they have great potential and are often set as side characters.....letβs see how this will go.
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Even on the last chapter posted we still dont know who the character is ,,and I dont mean his name or his clan ,,but who is he as a person ,,psychology, emotionally what drives him,,what's his purpose,,at this point he could be anyone from the story ,,and there is nothing special about him that make him the mc ,,the background story's and scenarios are overwhelmingly build,,we dont get to enjoy the process at all and he just level up two disciplines and a trade without explaining anything about how he did it or what he learn and how that will impact his story..y tried to keep reading hoping for improvement but it's not happening..sorry author..I really wanted to like your story but it didn't work
Reveal Spoilerfirst off i am a new reader on wn but have read a bunch of translations in general this book reminds me a lot of coiling dragon and unsure if the author wanted it to be this way but i also think this is a good comparison because the best part about coiling dragon was its ability to be a slower moving story without it being a bad one i hope that the author keeps this great pacing but also keeps dishing out many daily chapters so that even if the story is this slow that i will not drop
thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
So far great! Donβt drop this novel Iβm liking it very much. The speed at its progressing is perfect. If possible tho I would like to have our mc become one that keeps his family with him threw his journey. Also donβt start the romance too late so that we see his children and clan grow with him. I DONT WANT A CHILD MC THAT IS OP AND CAN KILL ANYONE AND EVERYTHING. It sounds like the people in this novel have long lives once they reach certain levels so I would like it if our mc makes the most out of each level not jumping from one to another in a matter of months.
It seems like alot of the reviews are from either bot's or alt accounts so i will be here giving an honest review. The story has a slow start but that might just be me. it is well written though which is a plus. The concept is okay but because it's wiitten well it's better then most stories out htere. Im afraid the author will drop this story though liek he has nearly every story he has written. This is the last chance i will follow a story of his. If he drops this then there is no point following him
Knowing the author very well, this novel is nothing short of a great story waiting to unfold. Although I've only read the first few chapters, I can say without a doubt that quality and excitement go hand in hand when you're reading this novel. I highly recommend it.
(Note: This review is for Chapter 1~2.) From what I've read so far, I like the flow of the story and how it's being written so far. I've read a plethora of genres so I'm not new to this theme, but I think it's great that the author was able to keep the pacing or the release of information somewhere around the middle. I mention this because making it too complex outright will make beginners lose interest, and making it far too simple would obviously drive the more experienced readers away. The pacing is good overall (there were some parts that got a little slow for me but I'm sure it'll be fine for most). I'd like to know more about what happens next when I get the time to read some more. It seems quite promising. Great job!
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keep up the good work author unsure if you just dropped all your chapters but please continue this crazy release schedule so i can keep reading! recommend to everyone
Reveal Spoilergood 2 see u did nt quit webnovel good 2 see u did nt quit webnovel good 2 see u did nt quit webnovel good 2 see u did nt quit webnovel good 2 see u did nt quit webnovel good 2 see u did nt quit webnovel good 2 see u did nt quit webnovel good 2 see u did nt quit webnovel good 2 see u did nt quit webnovel
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Reveal SpoilerDamn broski this book is a great saturday gift with 15 chapters in the span of like a hour?!?? Damn broski this book is a great saturday gift with 15 chapters in the span of like a hour?!?? Damn broski this book is a great saturday gift with 15 chapters in the span of like a hour?!??
glad to see you are doing well tadpole and releasing more content even if you dropped your novel from the contest! 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140
When an author mass releases 15 chapters, you sort of have to go out of your way to try the novel out. Yoohohoho! When an author mass releases 15 chapters, you sort of have to go out of your way to try the novel out. Yoohohoho!
Reveal SpoilerMy shameless review. This story is about a Healer named Lance who follows both the path of a warrior/swordsman as well as a mystic. I hope that everyone who gives this a read, can leave feedback whether good or bad. I plan on releasing 1 chapter/day consistently and may choose to release more chapters per day depending on amount of stones. :D -The Sleeping Tadpole
A great author knows the wonders of stocking chapters, it's just the first release but we've already been given fifteen chapters to read and enjoy. I think that we can expect stable and consistent updates. On top of that, reading the initial chapters made me enjoy this world of Lance. I personally enjoy more Western stories than Eastern Wuxia or Xianxia but this story caught my attention and has kept it. A solid main character in an enrapturing world. Certainly a treat to readers here. Looking forward for the rest of the story. Great work!