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really enjoy the story so far. only issue is that its been almost 9 months since the last update and there is no word on if its been dropped/ put on hiatus. either more needs to be made or an update on the status of the fanfic needs to be made. too many good fanfics have been left in purgatory and i dont want this to be one of them
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nice story nice plot development nice romance route . . . . . . . . . . . exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
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Amazing fanfic! absolutly hope this gets picked up again! absolutely loved the read, thank you for the masterpiece. Please continue writing ππ
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The author is a genius. Doesn't let the other girls miss out. The clone does not do penetration but does do devouring. It just makes me cringe at how MC's cuck themselves. This allows for equal treatment. You're a genius.
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AOT world.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.
This fan fic is so good take likesπππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
what i can say is...well done dude i like ur story and plot and some twisted event especially rito and saruyama. What i can say, beside good job and hope u can post more chapter and hope after to love ru u go to the other world which more action i guess i mean like shonen world like naruto or one piece since a lot of pokemon there...hahahahaha BTW good job and i hope more chapter to come cioa
I think you should temporarily remove the genre and for parental controls for the Power Stone to appear again[img=recommend] Keep the spirit I like it[img=recommend] Keep the spirit I like it[img=recommend]
keep the good work author!!!!!!. I liked the story so far!!!! ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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I haven't read it yet and I just have one question for the author or any readers, is the mc a simp, or like does he become whipped, cause if he does I don't wanna waste my time on this
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really enjoy the story so far. only issue is that its been almost 9 months since the last update and there is no word on if its been dropped/ put on hiatus. either more needs to be made or an update on the status of the fanfic needs to be made. too many good fanfics have been left in purgatory and i dont want this to be one of them
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nice story nice plot development nice romance route . . . . . . . . . . . exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
Is this dropped? .................................................................................β¦.β¦β¦β¦... . . . . .
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Amazing fanfic! absolutly hope this gets picked up again! absolutely loved the read, thank you for the masterpiece. Please continue writing ππ
Π‘ΡΡΡΠΌΠΈΠ²ΡΠ²Π³ΠΎΠ³Π²Π³ΡΠ²ΡΠ²ΡΠ²Π½ΡΠ²ΡΠ²ΡΡΠ½ΡΡΡΡΡΡΠ½ΡΠ½ΡΠ½ΡΡΡΡΠ½ΡΠ½Π½Π²Π½Π²Π½ΡΠ²ΡΠ²Π½Π½Π²ΡΠ²Π½Π½ΡΠ½Π²Π½Π½Π²ΡΠ²ΡΡΡΡΠ²ΡΡΠ²ΡΠ²ΡΠ°ΡΡΡΠ²ΡΡΠ²ΡΠ²ΡΡΠ²ΡΠ²ΠΎΠ²ΡΠΎΠ²ΠΎΠ² Π°ΠΎΠ²ΠΎΠ²ΠΎΠΎΡΡΡΠ²ΠΎΠ²ΠΎΠΎΠ²ΡΠ²ΡΠ²ΠΎΡΠΎΠ²ΡΠ²ΡΡΠ²ΡΡΠ²ΡΠ²ΠΎΡΠ²ΡΠ²ΡΡΠ²ΡΠ²ΠΎΡΠ²ΡΠ²ΡΠ²ΡΡΠ²ΡΠ²ΡΠ²Π½Π²ΡΡΠ²ΡΡΠΈΠΎΠ²ΠΎΡΠΎΠΈΠΏΠ°ΠΎΠ² Π²ΡΡΠ²ΡΠ²ΡΡΡΡΡΠ°ΠΎΠΎΠ²ΠΈΠ²ΡΠΎΡΡΠ°Π²ΡΠ²ΡΠ³ΡΡΡΡ
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pls comback Author ........................................................ .......................................................................
Keep going Author ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππβΊοΈβΊοΈπβΊοΈ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
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The author is a genius. Doesn't let the other girls miss out. The clone does not do penetration but does do devouring. It just makes me cringe at how MC's cuck themselves. This allows for equal treatment. You're a genius.
Reveal Spoiler AOT world.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.
This fan fic is so good take likesπππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
what i can say is...well done dude i like ur story and plot and some twisted event especially rito and saruyama. What i can say, beside good job and hope u can post more chapter and hope after to love ru u go to the other world which more action i guess i mean like shonen world like naruto or one piece since a lot of pokemon there...hahahahaha BTW good job and i hope more chapter to come cioa
I think you should temporarily remove the genre and for parental controls for the Power Stone to appear again[img=recommend] Keep the spirit I like it[img=recommend] Keep the spirit I like it[img=recommend]
keep the good work author!!!!!!. I liked the story so far!!!! ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.
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interesing. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I haven't read it yet and I just have one question for the author or any readers, is the mc a simp, or like does he become whipped, cause if he does I don't wanna waste my time on this
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if the author is still alive please update or say that your dropping the story