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Write a reviewI hope you'll pick this up again sometime! 😀 It's a good start: nice introduction method for the characters, interesting action, some world building, without too much data at once. I like that they have both science and mana, as it gives your characters and story more options. There are a few typos, but otherwise, the wording and grammar are well done. I would give a higher rating, but since this novel is on hold, there are no updates.
I hope you'll pick this up again sometime! 😀 It's a good start: nice introduction method for the characters, interesting action, some world building, without too much data at once. I like that they have both science and mana, as it gives your characters and story more options. There are a few typos, but otherwise, the wording and grammar are well done. I would give a higher rating, but since this novel is on hold, there are no updates.