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Sooo when are you gonna bring those 3 girls back from the beginning cus that tall girl is the best girl... DEATH BY SNU SNU! I'm gonna rate this high cus I love stories that focus on production classes soo ima ignore all other problems this has
great plot. unlike other novels, the mc doesn't become cocky after receiving power or any kind of achievement. He stays humble and learn as time goes by
I'm giving this novel an overall 4 because for it to deserve a 5 it would require at least Solo Leveling or The Beginning After the End quality. There are a few grammar flaws which are excusable since the writer is not a native speaker, but a little care goes a long way so I would advise a full revision. About the plot, it's your basic weak to strong isekai trope, but it's got merits. It's engaging and keeps you interested. Worth reading.
Great story and character development. Its sad that the novel is not being updated in this site. Hopefully there’s a chance that they will continue updating this novel.
The theme is grinding, both the content and reading this novel feels like grinding. The word count is high but the amount of action is low. The MC require no plot armor, since he takes little to no risk, which makes his story quite boring. It is like instead of watching 007 on the field, you get to watch Q works. No risk, no excitement, just work. Also, too much tell and little show. Every single decision is fully vetted out in this format: Problem => option A, B, C,... fully explained => MC choose something. I suggest author try this format: Problem => MC choose something => his choice explained. That way, you have less filter and this feels less like a grind.
Disappointing. A lot of forced plots. Mc is a wimp. Can't even impose strict rules to the people around him, that's why his brother learned his identity by that blue haired idiot. I immediately dropped the story after that. I was already annoyed by Helci
Things are going well, but I don't know what will happen next. There is hope for it to grow better, don't end up dying in the middle of the story and get bored like some fiction books.
Aunque e estado mirando esta historia por bastante tiempo lo e echo por scribblehub y no en esta pagina pero en lo que ami respecta esta es realmente una buena novela.Incluso podria donarte dinero si tubiera [img=coins][img=coins][img=exp]
super good novel you should 100% check this out and if you don't think there is enough chapters there are more on another sight.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
so, no update anymore?... i want more.. really good novel... where will be update? i hope this novel continue.. anybody there?.. i need a news
very good character creation interesting world it does lack a bit in the story but good enough that i have read this far i can honestly say this is one of the better ones that i have read as it is different than an normal isekai
Very good story but the updates are killing it. The writer need to make them more frequent/ this will lead to more power stones. I hope you continue the story.
its pretty good ............................................................................................ .............................. so you should read it
hello author. really like the story so far....but please make more frequent updates. also please don't introduce any harem. A lot of girls can like him but he should like only one!
So far it's a excelent story. The author is quite cohesive in his writing and there aren't many (At least I can't recall any so far) grammar error. I hope the releases are stable, but there are too few chapters to judge that. On the overall, a excellent novel!
Too few chapters for know how good the story is , but has a great start . An standart early plot , but very consistent without giving the MC a to great trauma ou making him too op. An author that worth try to ready by his other story
when will be update? need more.. so far, i give 3star first.. need more chapter to be able to judge.. keep a good work.. i hope it become a good novel
good but lacks update. Also please don't turn it into harem. I can see hints with the whole polygamy thing introduced at the beginning . Hope updates come faster.
great story. starting out well. Please don't turn it into a harem nonsense . I mean a lot of girl can like the MC but he should just stick to one. Besides it makes it more interesting seeing jealous women turned down.
I kind of like the story so far. Hopefully author you don't make him fall in love with "the princess", or the most beautiful girl on the planet or any such nonesence. Honestly it feels like most of the MCs of rebirth stories are a bunch of looser guys who were frustrated and just end up with the girl who likes them because they happen to be OP. Quite materialistic. Keep up the good work.
You know the drill... My try on writing a western-style LitRPG, hope you will enjoy it. I'd advise reading this either on RR or SH instead as those sites allow the use of tables. It kind of looks worse on WN.
Incredible, the only problem is romance which I hate, other than that it's incredible. Another problem is that he starts to trust others, that's annoying. He's regressing in terms of personality.
Sooo when are you gonna bring those 3 girls back from the beginning cus that tall girl is the best girl... DEATH BY SNU SNU! I'm gonna rate this high cus I love stories that focus on production classes soo ima ignore all other problems this has
great plot. unlike other novels, the mc doesn't become cocky after receiving power or any kind of achievement. He stays humble and learn as time goes by
I'm giving this novel an overall 4 because for it to deserve a 5 it would require at least Solo Leveling or The Beginning After the End quality. There are a few grammar flaws which are excusable since the writer is not a native speaker, but a little care goes a long way so I would advise a full revision. About the plot, it's your basic weak to strong isekai trope, but it's got merits. It's engaging and keeps you interested. Worth reading.
Great story and character development. Its sad that the novel is not being updated in this site. Hopefully there’s a chance that they will continue updating this novel.
The theme is grinding, both the content and reading this novel feels like grinding. The word count is high but the amount of action is low. The MC require no plot armor, since he takes little to no risk, which makes his story quite boring. It is like instead of watching 007 on the field, you get to watch Q works. No risk, no excitement, just work. Also, too much tell and little show. Every single decision is fully vetted out in this format: Problem => option A, B, C,... fully explained => MC choose something. I suggest author try this format: Problem => MC choose something => his choice explained. That way, you have less filter and this feels less like a grind.
Disappointing. A lot of forced plots. Mc is a wimp. Can't even impose strict rules to the people around him, that's why his brother learned his identity by that blue haired idiot. I immediately dropped the story after that. I was already annoyed by Helci
Things are going well, but I don't know what will happen next. There is hope for it to grow better, don't end up dying in the middle of the story and get bored like some fiction books.
Aunque e estado mirando esta historia por bastante tiempo lo e echo por scribblehub y no en esta pagina pero en lo que ami respecta esta es realmente una buena novela.Incluso podria donarte dinero si tubiera [img=coins][img=coins][img=exp]
super good novel you should 100% check this out and if you don't think there is enough chapters there are more on another sight.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
so, no update anymore?... i want more.. really good novel... where will be update? i hope this novel continue.. anybody there?.. i need a news
very good character creation interesting world it does lack a bit in the story but good enough that i have read this far i can honestly say this is one of the better ones that i have read as it is different than an normal isekai
Very good story but the updates are killing it. The writer need to make them more frequent/ this will lead to more power stones. I hope you continue the story.
its pretty good ............................................................................................ .............................. so you should read it
hello author. really like the story so far....but please make more frequent updates. also please don't introduce any harem. A lot of girls can like him but he should like only one!
So far it's a excelent story. The author is quite cohesive in his writing and there aren't many (At least I can't recall any so far) grammar error. I hope the releases are stable, but there are too few chapters to judge that. On the overall, a excellent novel!
Too few chapters for know how good the story is , but has a great start . An standart early plot , but very consistent without giving the MC a to great trauma ou making him too op. An author that worth try to ready by his other story
when will be update? need more.. so far, i give 3star first.. need more chapter to be able to judge.. keep a good work.. i hope it become a good novel
good but lacks update. Also please don't turn it into harem. I can see hints with the whole polygamy thing introduced at the beginning . Hope updates come faster.
great story. starting out well. Please don't turn it into a harem nonsense . I mean a lot of girl can like the MC but he should just stick to one. Besides it makes it more interesting seeing jealous women turned down.
I kind of like the story so far. Hopefully author you don't make him fall in love with "the princess", or the most beautiful girl on the planet or any such nonesence. Honestly it feels like most of the MCs of rebirth stories are a bunch of looser guys who were frustrated and just end up with the girl who likes them because they happen to be OP. Quite materialistic. Keep up the good work.
You know the drill... My try on writing a western-style LitRPG, hope you will enjoy it. I'd advise reading this either on RR or SH instead as those sites allow the use of tables. It kind of looks worse on WN.
Incredible, the only problem is romance which I hate, other than that it's incredible. Another problem is that he starts to trust others, that's annoying. He's regressing in terms of personality.