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If i can give negative rating, I will give -10. If you think your wrong then read chapter 34. I feel bad for High school dxd anime author change whole character setting like if someone potrate as bad then he showed as good and like good to bad. I feel like author has some mental problems π.
I'm gonna go out on a limb and say that this writer is very new. And possibly very young. You can tell by the immature way the writing is done. The dialogue is very repeated and in such a way that it becomes annoying. You could also tell by the name of the main character that the author is young. The name is very immature. And the way. You introduce yourself is very, very immature. It's a play on James Bond without the cool factor because of the very Cringe name. That immaturish writing along with the underdeveloplot. Sees a novel that is more a list of things that happens. The emotions of the characters. Whether it's love or anger, or any type of relationships feel very weak. Everything feels muted in the story. The system is playing too big of a part. If it was just there to give him powers and make him the strongest that would have been awesome, but the system keeps being used again and again without him developing any relationships with the characters in the world. I mean, he doesn't even live in the world he lives in the dimensional gap, further removing him from the world he lives in.
Stupid MC even though he is supposed to be an old man in his human life. Author should just delete and start over with him as a 10 year old cause thatβs how he acts. As soon as he sees great red after he reincarnated he screams at it to get its attention but has not figured out anything about his power, system, or anything at all. When great red asks him what he is he answers that he asks the system cause he hasnβt figured it out yet. Also just starts buying food with the system point he started with as a gift from a creator god and he is a primordial so he does not need to eat. So many pointless things the author is doing and acting like a grown man that has lost his wife and has grand children would act after getting reincarnated. Also totally forgets about his human wife he wanted to be with at first and just starts acting like the goddess in the system has been his wife the whole time.
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People be complaining about the MC and his personality but begin to forget that due to his bloodline he would start changing. Yes there are some wild changes to characters but you must remember that this is a fanfic and isnβt meant to stay true to the books or animes.
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I loved the book but u keep saying uve written new books, where r they and how do we read them??
hello i hope that you keep writing i love the stories you give and i hope "sana" that you will keep writing because I really love this stories especially the mc silver I'm waiting for the next chapter I will wait for it
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour Β½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs Β½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
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One word NTR for the sake of same story in fair tail because system says soβ¦ op mc character that cant even protect his wife and sleeps years while they sufferβ¦
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well, story was interesting at the starting... I haven't read much, just starting 20 chapters... but... MC is just too careless and dumb.... and the OP MC doesn't need so many OP things just at the starting of the story... i know that it's just my problem that I don't like OP MCs who are dumb and don't know how to use their power properly... but still it could have better π ... plz do tell me if the story gets better (without forcibly nerfing the powers of MC)
It's awesome the story itself is addicting and i especially like the fairytail world interactions and one piece world. i hope the coming chapters are awesome too
amazingly done i love that it has a harem but not overly focused on it and focusing on the adventure more its rare to see and its funny too all i got to say is nice
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Un Mc muy tonto y op pero mal muy mal. ......................................................................................................................
I really like the story but the realese chapter not so much i hope vsgwgwhjwqiajwbwbfwgwgshduduuxjsjnwbwbbwvgehdhidisuxg2b1nnqjisisysuwjwjbw
Alright I gave this 5 stars for many reasons one being that it's good. Before I go I'd like to, Y'know, say something. I don't understand the hate towards this novel. So what if the MC is stupidly OP? It's how the author wanted it to be. To be honest this is one of the best fanfic I've read that has a stupidly OP MC like c'mon? Have you ever read some dragon ball fanfics? Like no hate to the authors I'm sure they worked hard or something like that but when their MC's are so OP that they don't even know what to do with them, it's honestly frustrating. But this, man the author doesn't give MC all the screen time like other fanfics which is what I like. Also what's there to hate about the original plot with the godly father-in-law. If you don't understand it, it's pretty simple. Basically the mc had already lived a life in the Supreme Realm I think it's called but he had died at the hands of those bad guys mentioned at the start and was reincarnated into the mortal realm but after he died he was brought back at a trashy excuse to reincarnate. Hopefully I said what some people didn't get.. or maybe I said something people already know.
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH you are backkkk.. I'm so glad that you are back from your hiatus.. huhuhuhu I have longed for the new chapters.. PLS post more chapters.. I really wanna see how this story ends and also since its pandemic and all, we don't know what will the future will hold. I hope for you good health and safety AUTHOR SAMA!! <3
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I haven't read it yet and I am expecting a filipino biased heavy patriosm since that is the case for chinese and korean novel. ............... .
If i can give negative rating, I will give -10. If you think your wrong then read chapter 34. I feel bad for High school dxd anime author change whole character setting like if someone potrate as bad then he showed as good and like good to bad. I feel like author has some mental problems π.
I'm gonna go out on a limb and say that this writer is very new. And possibly very young. You can tell by the immature way the writing is done. The dialogue is very repeated and in such a way that it becomes annoying. You could also tell by the name of the main character that the author is young. The name is very immature. And the way. You introduce yourself is very, very immature. It's a play on James Bond without the cool factor because of the very Cringe name. That immaturish writing along with the underdeveloplot. Sees a novel that is more a list of things that happens. The emotions of the characters. Whether it's love or anger, or any type of relationships feel very weak. Everything feels muted in the story. The system is playing too big of a part. If it was just there to give him powers and make him the strongest that would have been awesome, but the system keeps being used again and again without him developing any relationships with the characters in the world. I mean, he doesn't even live in the world he lives in the dimensional gap, further removing him from the world he lives in.
Stupid MC even though he is supposed to be an old man in his human life. Author should just delete and start over with him as a 10 year old cause thatβs how he acts. As soon as he sees great red after he reincarnated he screams at it to get its attention but has not figured out anything about his power, system, or anything at all. When great red asks him what he is he answers that he asks the system cause he hasnβt figured it out yet. Also just starts buying food with the system point he started with as a gift from a creator god and he is a primordial so he does not need to eat. So many pointless things the author is doing and acting like a grown man that has lost his wife and has grand children would act after getting reincarnated. Also totally forgets about his human wife he wanted to be with at first and just starts acting like the goddess in the system has been his wife the whole time.
Reveal Spoiler ΡΡΠ°Π²Π»Ρ 3 ΠΈΠ· 10,Π΅ΡΠ»ΠΈ Ρ ΠΎΡΠΈΡΠ΅ ΠΏΠΎΠΏΠΎΡΡΠΈΡΡ ΡΠ΅ Π½Π°ΡΡΡΠΎΠ΅Π½ΠΈΠ΅ ΡΠΎ ΡΠΌΠΎΡΡΠΈΡΠ΅ πππ. Π°Π²ΡΠΎΡΡ ΠΏΠΎΠΆΠ°Π»ΡΡΡΠ° ΠΊΠΎΠ³Π΄Π° ΠΏΠΈΡΠΈΡΠ΅ ΡΠ°ΠΊΠΈΠ΅ ΡΠ°Π½ΡΠΈΠΊΠΈ ΠΈΠ»ΠΈ ΡΠ°Π½ΠΎΠ±Ρ ΡΠΎ ΠΏΠΈΡΠΈΡΠ΅ Π² ΠΆΠ°Π½ΠΈΡΠ°Ρ Π³Π³ ΡΡΠΏΠΎΠΉ ΠΈ Π½Π΅ Π² ΡΡΠ³ΠΈ Π° ΠΏΡΠ΅ΠΌΠΎ Π² ΠΆΠ°Π½ΡΠ΅ ΠΏΠΎΡΠΎΠΌΡΡΡΠΎ Π·Π΄Π΅ΡΠΈ Π²ΡΠ΅ ΠΏΠΎΡΡΡΠΎΠ΅Π½ΠΎ Π½Π° ΡΡΠΏΠΈΠ·ΠΌΠ΅ Π³Π³
Reveal Spoiler People be complaining about the MC and his personality but begin to forget that due to his bloodline he would start changing. Yes there are some wild changes to characters but you must remember that this is a fanfic and isnβt meant to stay true to the books or animes.
Reveal Spoiler I loved the book but u keep saying uve written new books, where r they and how do we read them??
hello i hope that you keep writing i love the stories you give and i hope "sana" that you will keep writing because I really love this stories especially the mc silver I'm waiting for the next chapter I will wait for it
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour Β½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs Β½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
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As a true webnoveler I must maintain the balance. Since there is tons of good reviews with no reason as to why they gave such a review so I shall give one too without putting the reason why I gave such a low rating.
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One word NTR for the sake of same story in fair tail because system says soβ¦ op mc character that cant even protect his wife and sleeps years while they sufferβ¦
bit.ly/3LyRF1N ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
well, story was interesting at the starting... I haven't read much, just starting 20 chapters... but... MC is just too careless and dumb.... and the OP MC doesn't need so many OP things just at the starting of the story... i know that it's just my problem that I don't like OP MCs who are dumb and don't know how to use their power properly... but still it could have better π ... plz do tell me if the story gets better (without forcibly nerfing the powers of MC)
It's awesome the story itself is addicting and i especially like the fairytail world interactions and one piece world. i hope the coming chapters are awesome too
amazingly done i love that it has a harem but not overly focused on it and focusing on the adventure more its rare to see and its funny too all i got to say is nice
Continue it plsss[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
jajajaj MC is big stupid, beta and CUCK. #NTR [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Un Mc muy tonto y op pero mal muy mal. ......................................................................................................................
I really like the story but the realese chapter not so much i hope vsgwgwhjwqiajwbwbfwgwgshduduuxjsjnwbwbbwvgehdhidisuxg2b1nnqjisisysuwjwjbw
Alright I gave this 5 stars for many reasons one being that it's good. Before I go I'd like to, Y'know, say something. I don't understand the hate towards this novel. So what if the MC is stupidly OP? It's how the author wanted it to be. To be honest this is one of the best fanfic I've read that has a stupidly OP MC like c'mon? Have you ever read some dragon ball fanfics? Like no hate to the authors I'm sure they worked hard or something like that but when their MC's are so OP that they don't even know what to do with them, it's honestly frustrating. But this, man the author doesn't give MC all the screen time like other fanfics which is what I like. Also what's there to hate about the original plot with the godly father-in-law. If you don't understand it, it's pretty simple. Basically the mc had already lived a life in the Supreme Realm I think it's called but he had died at the hands of those bad guys mentioned at the start and was reincarnated into the mortal realm but after he died he was brought back at a trashy excuse to reincarnate. Hopefully I said what some people didn't get.. or maybe I said something people already know.
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH you are backkkk.. I'm so glad that you are back from your hiatus.. huhuhuhu I have longed for the new chapters.. PLS post more chapters.. I really wanna see how this story ends and also since its pandemic and all, we don't know what will the future will hold. I hope for you good health and safety AUTHOR SAMA!! <3
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I haven't read it yet and I am expecting a filipino biased heavy patriosm since that is the case for chinese and korean novel. ............... .
stop the bull shet and update this book sooner than hurry