The Sunshine of Hogwarts, Snape

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ezz_mohamed

i wasn't planning on reading this but i just want to say Snape and sunshine at the same sentence feels and should be illegal

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Frederic_Desouza

It's off to a bad start, there's a reason Harry is left with people as horrible as the Dursleys! -3 stars for not knowing such an important detail.

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robert_wylie

ai slop. also 'ghost severus' really man? what sort of dogshit generator did you use to write this fanfic, not even free ai plans are this bad

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BouncyKnight

Haven't read all the chapters out. Read until 24 chapters. Each one has been nothing less than a banger. Loved everyting until now. If it's a translation the quality is awesome. If it's an original, the story is mindblowing, nice job Mr. Author! Will keep posting new reviews as I read further.

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jieunahi

lowkey this kind of ate, it’s good so far. the kidnapping arc was interesting but also 😭 so long like.. BUT ITS GOOD 👍

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asaade9999

passable but detective and kidnapping arc is boring, waste of time and its quite prolonged that its get boring and pretty skippable because they just a filler

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Harlls

I'm liking it so far, it's a fanfiction so it's natural for there to be a lot of changes, but this representation of Severus Snape is very good to see, and the story is very interesting so far, I hope to see what it will be like when his classes start

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RedLip2800

I love the part where the original Severus Snape remains a ghost, the interaction with Harry and MC Snape as well.

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Mr_Qunah

Die bisherigen Kapitel gefallen mir sehr gut. Es sind aber noch zu wenige, um mir eine umfassendere Meinung zu bilden.

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lazy_blanket_cat

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Shadow_walking

This is a story I really enjoyed reading. I congratulate the author for giving us such a beautiful story. I'm really curious to see Snape teach at Hogwarts in the future. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapters. I hope it doesn't end incomplete.

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Guillermo_Coruna

It's an above average fanfiction, which is the only thing we can ask for an author writing for free. Firstly, the ideas and plots I find really good. They're well done, coherent, and above all, engaging. However, it does seem a bit "rushed" for me. It hasn't even been two months since Snape was transmigrated into, and you've already broken canon in thousands of pieces. Introducing Lockhart, Lupin, Voldemort's shade (partly), etc. I do acknowledge that it is well done, with good details and a good story development, but... you've basically broken plots through year 1-7 now. Barty's somehow escaped (when in canon he was saved by Peter), which is a MAJOR point which doesn't fit in well for me. You could have at least explained it by WRITING MORE CONTEXT. For example, a great idea: Snape does something ministry-related (or solves a problem) before the start of all this. The basis of this, another one of Dumbles's tests. Before meeting Harry, I mean. Could be framed as Dumbles testing him first with a problem and then with the Harry situation- then, you could explain how, due to Snape's solving of that problem (unlike canon), Barty Crouch was more tired due to extra work. This caused butterfly effect, allowing Barty junior to relapse out of the imperio curse and in turn imperio some aurors, wrapping everything neatly. Something like this would cover one of your major plotholes, and still be in phase with your story, style, and plot idea. Also, keep in mind that since you rushed years 1-3 in a few months, and thus completely destroyed years 4-7 through the horcrux hunting and public actions thing (plus butterfly effect), you'll have to somehow include more plots at Hogwarts. Unless there's going to be a normal hogwarts? but then, it'd seem too rushed, with no Hogwarts adventures. Harry's still only 9, at this pace, when he's eleven, Voldie will be 100% dead. Short story, no hogwarts drama or teaching = a bit boring. There are some minor gramatical or phrasing errors throughout the fanfiction, but they are not MAJOR nor do they contitute a serious blow to the quality of the book, as overall, the quality is quite good. Not perfect, mind you, but this is a fanfic so what did you all people expect. Great work, great style, great book, totally recommended. I do think that you could have written (or write) a better Harry-Draco love angle (or one at all). I mean, they constantly butt heads but secretly almost seem to like each other and consider each other friends. Draco's just overbearing and for obvious reasons won't admit it (he doesn't even know Harry's Harry Potter in any case, just thinks he's a random half-blood with mysterious pro-muggle parents). While Harry considers Draco his first true "friend" After all, while he DID meet Luna and Hermione.... Luna is too weird, he just met once, is a girl, and one year younger. Hermione, meanwhile, he met for less than half an hour, after which they were both captured by werewolves (not really friend inducing). Hermione's also more mature, different, AND a girl. Draco is actually the only kid harry has connected with. He might have compared him mentally to Dudley at first, but now, he just sees a pitiful kid whose scared and ignorant. Someone who is clearly arrogant by nurture, and who has clearly never had a real loyal friend before. In short, I think they could become either best friends, lovers, or best friends/friends appearing lovers. As in, the author using comedy and missinterpreted scenes that could lead to readers or bystanders interpreting it as romance or in an (unknown) status (as in, not sure if they really like each other and fight like Lily-James situation, or if they DO actually not love each other or something). I also find hard to believe that Harry, an abused child (at least mentally), friendless, wouldn't jump at the chance of having a friend. Even then, the fact that he not only fights with Draco, but is comfortable enough to tease him, be teased by him, play with him, have fun with him, etc, shows that he genuinally thinks of him as a friend, or at least cares for him. I'm sure it's a stretch saying "they love each other" as they're just nine at this time, BUT, you could still phrase it with intrigue, or set the layout for their future interaction at Hogwarts (between each other and with others)

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Zinion

Its actually a well written novel which is rare for Fanfiction. I feel like its going to drag for awhile, its annoying in its on way though, I am already up to 118 and barley a month has passed and I am assuming this is going to go all the way through the 7 years at Hogwarts.... but who knows it seems like the MC is planning to solve everything before then so the Story might finish before 1991 even comes around. Overall so far its a good novel, but to much is happening in such a short time, so though its got a lot of content, its dragging on from one point to the other with barley any time for proper world building. I would still recommend others reading it, but don't assume anything from the books will be a focus, well not in the time line your use to at all.

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The_WritingSystem

Well, it’s certainly a good read, but I couldn’t quite digest the story. I’ve read many fanfics and thus know quite a bit about Professor Snape. Sometimes he is portrayed as absolutely vile and a bully, sometimes as a tragic figure who repents, or even as a kind man who hides his true character well. But in this story, Snape’s overall character feels completely changed, and it’s noticeable to everyone. As for people believing it—sorry, but I find that nearly impossible. Or maybe I’m just wrong. Still, it’s a new path to enjoy.

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Nigiliya_Line

Simply love it. I'm on the chapter 104. Still little is known about the MC himself, but the way he navigates Snape's life is brilliant. Whenever you stop to wonder, what his next step would be, the fate would decided it for him. But it's the MC, who will look at this step, smile and take it masterfully. Still wondering, if there is a place for any romance in this story.

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Slrrrp

Vampire arc started irritating, but iIgrew to like it. I know this is a translation, but hopefully the quality stays the same