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Ninja_Pigg

Its not horrible but the stories pace is kinda all over the place and a lot of missing descriptions perhaps it gets better later certainly hope so has good potential But 30 chapters i find it to be enough to have completly lost my interest.

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Spirit_Wolf1

Love it, love it, love it. One you get use to the time skips its a great read. I hope the author keeps it up and doesn't drop. Could see it having potential.

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babaschrimps

I loved the story until Chapter 91.. but then 92 destroys the whole world building and the story itself.. I didnt read further than 93 so the story could become good again, but the world the author created until 91 cannot be saved...

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The_gaming_Cat

The story was amazing.it had great characters and a great plot. I hope you enjoy it as much as I did. See yea.hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhfdfg&hhhhhhhhhvddtyh CD ryh

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4bidienkingdom

Vampire should more brutal, human just life stock, anyway thank you for novel.

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ca_l
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A novel I really recommend even though the start's pace is a little slow once you are hooked up you keep reading (honestly having to wait each day for the free 3FP was pure torture but well here I am). More seriously the setting is great, the characters are just hella funny in my opinion but what's great is that you can really get attached to them. I look forward to the next chapters 😊

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Blabermouth

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ayayaya
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the writing causes me cancer. the grammar and sentencing is wrong as wrong can be. this makes the story nearly unreadable. I haven't read too much further but as fur as I can see, even if it is decent, it is still incorrigible.

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HadesChampion

Kinda disappointing. Mc is a beta and underwhelming, story is plain confusing. Feel no enjoyment from this . Shame

4yr
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Jack_Priper

Not two shabby. Perhaps my English sucks. In any case, this doesn't flow naturally through my mind like some of the other stories I read. And I lost interest real quick

4yr
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Dragon_Master_5304

All it needs is a good editor and I can assure this story will be awesome.

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Ancient_

I just hope he behaves like a blood thirsty vampire. Not one that wants to coexist with humans. Like ndhduhdhdbd ehebe ehe rge rgrue e rydrdscggd

4yr
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KingBing96

I’ve really enjoyed this story and can’t wait to see how this story further develops down the road. Honestly could have never guessed the direction the story has taken which makes it that much better.

4yr
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sandersjosh70

So far, I enjoy the story but the writing can be hard to follow at times. Character aren’t fleshed-out and the world seems to be lacking a lot of details. Grammar could be better. Will update rating if writing improves.

4yr
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23dark

If u have time it's a worth while read really good and entertaining novel it starts off slow but bam it just goes it's a easy and worth while read

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YikesItsAmbrose

Haven't gotten that far but the author is making edits which shows they are dedicated to the story building and the time behind it. I hope it lives up to my expectations lol

4yr
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davidthornton406

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23dark

I freaking love this novel it is one of the most interesting ones I found in a long time love it Mr author keep on doing a amazing job and I'll give you all my stones :)

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Ninja_Pigg

Its not horrible but the stories pace is kinda all over the place and a lot of missing descriptions perhaps it gets better later certainly hope so has good potential But 30 chapters i find it to be enough to have completly lost my interest.

3yr
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Aida_Brown

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3yr
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ShaNnia

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.

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kenstory

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Spirit_Wolf1

Love it, love it, love it. One you get use to the time skips its a great read. I hope the author keeps it up and doesn't drop. Could see it having potential.

3yr
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babaschrimps

I loved the story until Chapter 91.. but then 92 destroys the whole world building and the story itself.. I didnt read further than 93 so the story could become good again, but the world the author created until 91 cannot be saved...

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3yr
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The_gaming_Cat

The story was amazing.it had great characters and a great plot. I hope you enjoy it as much as I did. See yea.hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhfdfg&hhhhhhhhhvddtyh CD ryh

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3yr
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4bidienkingdom

Vampire should more brutal, human just life stock, anyway thank you for novel.

3yr
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Evelyn_Etim

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ca_l
LV 13 Badge

A novel I really recommend even though the start's pace is a little slow once you are hooked up you keep reading (honestly having to wait each day for the free 3FP was pure torture but well here I am). More seriously the setting is great, the characters are just hella funny in my opinion but what's great is that you can really get attached to them. I look forward to the next chapters 😊

3yr
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FireLord3218

This is a amazing book j. Jr he j c rcjnjrncjr. He hh. Hf. Hh Hhhhhhh. H rh. H h h h h h h h h h h h b h h h b b b h h h b h h h h

3yr
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Blabermouth

Pretty Good novel..! Pretty Good novel..! Pretty Good novel..! Pretty Good novel..! Pretty Good novel..! Pretty Good novel..! Pretty Good novel..!

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ayayaya
LV 15 Badge

the writing causes me cancer. the grammar and sentencing is wrong as wrong can be. this makes the story nearly unreadable. I haven't read too much further but as fur as I can see, even if it is decent, it is still incorrigible.

3yr
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HadesChampion

Kinda disappointing. Mc is a beta and underwhelming, story is plain confusing. Feel no enjoyment from this . Shame

4yr
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Jack_Priper

Not two shabby. Perhaps my English sucks. In any case, this doesn't flow naturally through my mind like some of the other stories I read. And I lost interest real quick

4yr
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Dragon_Master_5304

All it needs is a good editor and I can assure this story will be awesome.

4yr
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Ancient_

I just hope he behaves like a blood thirsty vampire. Not one that wants to coexist with humans. Like ndhduhdhdbd ehebe ehe rge rgrue e rydrdscggd

4yr
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KingBing96

I’ve really enjoyed this story and can’t wait to see how this story further develops down the road. Honestly could have never guessed the direction the story has taken which makes it that much better.

4yr
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sandersjosh70

So far, I enjoy the story but the writing can be hard to follow at times. Character aren’t fleshed-out and the world seems to be lacking a lot of details. Grammar could be better. Will update rating if writing improves.

4yr
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23dark

If u have time it's a worth while read really good and entertaining novel it starts off slow but bam it just goes it's a easy and worth while read

4yr
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YikesItsAmbrose

Haven't gotten that far but the author is making edits which shows they are dedicated to the story building and the time behind it. I hope it lives up to my expectations lol

4yr
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davidthornton406

undead sexy ness. ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

4yr
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23dark

I freaking love this novel it is one of the most interesting ones I found in a long time love it Mr author keep on doing a amazing job and I'll give you all my stones :)

4yr
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