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The Time I Became A Demon Hunter With A Violin (GrangerxLesleyxGusion)
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Hope? There is no hope only despair Choas everywhere i wish i could hear the sound of the violin The Greatest Sonata
This is the back story of Granger how he became the Greatest Demon Hunter
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I am sorry for bad grammar and pls support me i dont have many acc like others so im all alone help me reach top 3 pls (140 characters hahahahahaha)
MLBB player here wow hahahha this story is cute so i rate it 5 mlbb is life Ae lang malakas hahahhaha cute naman ng mama nila hahahha patawa naman sir
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After accusing me falsely, here you are, dwindling. This is karma. Seriously, just improve your own work without bringing down the other authors. Don't be salty you're on the 2nd page. Sayonara.
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Its good but lacks grammar hhahhahahahahahahahahahahaahahahahhaahhahahahahaahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahhahahahahaahhaahhah
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I'll be outright blunt. This story is trash. There are other more amazing works that deserve its rank. If you want quality content then vote for Begin | Fanny or better yet MLBB:LOVE UNTOLD. They deserve to rise to higher spot rather than works like this.
Well, I'll just be blunt with my review…the story idea is pretty great, but the grammar isn't that appealing, especially to those who like reading and used to see proper grammar(you could still improve that, your writing style is fine as well). Another problem is that inconsistence of the characters you used. Example in a dialogue in your story, with their attitude in the actual game, I don't think they would say the words in the dialogue or stutter(especially characters who's confidence is portrayed strongly). Anyways, just fix that inconsistency and grammar. I do know very well that you're a Filipino, but maybe ask a friend or fellow who's good at English to proofread your story before you upload(and if you couldn't, acquire a dictionary to expand your vocabulary in the story, this is to make it look less plain and bland). In your story, your way of displaying what kind of story you want to tell is good, only that it's pretty vague with the errors. Well then, good luck with your story.