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Why did you delete the chapters even If you dropped it, I liked coming and and rereading the story when I couldn’t find something else to read.
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Question! Why is there an NTR tag? I give you an another five star if you answer this
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This book is just not my cup of tea. Like everything written here totally goes against my views and ideologies. This is not even deserve the romance tag this is just pure lust and rape, like who the fack rapes a whole village after saving them. To make matter worse he just basically mind controls some the girls even going as far as fighting his own father just to make HIS OWN mothers as his women. Sigh..... This thing is basically a compilation of everything I dont like.
its just like the novel "strongest unlimited unknown supreme being" suggesy you guys to read this😍😀😘😊....................................ty
The writing quality is poor to be honest. I can look past that because maybe English isn't their best language but it is still pretty bad. Entirely wrong words and things which completely breaks immersion due to you having to figure out what word is supposed to be there. Story development started off different and then the author did a complete over haul of the character with no explanation where you would think that it was an entirely different character. The character started with low morales and essentially rapped an entire town of woman and it is never mentioned again while the character went and started acting shy around girls like he just didn't rape multiple people and manipulate things for his own gains. His character itself is inconsistent and when I first started reading about him I immediately put him in the "Yun Che" category. If you want to read something to kill some time then this has a lot of chapter to do that but take it with a grain of salt since its not the best or the worst. (It pretty low but not garbage tier.)
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The story starts well, good development, but then it turns to a worse ... 10-year-old MC is the biggest "stallion", but then he regrets everything and does nothing else. He never bothered to mention it but his father becomes the ultimate villain and he wants to make his 2 mothers his women "conveniently". From chapter 40 onwards it falls even further, MC who has been abused all his life (to the point of being without emotions) suddenly becomes furious for the smallest things, with S-class power he almost destroys the world, but conveniently it is prevented and nerfed in an extremely "easy" way ... I wonder if he used SSS class or fights against the strongest
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it was good while it lasted I guess overall it was good start up and also I feel like it could get better as there are normally some slow parts in a book
i cant explain why but i just like this fan-fic novel i like how the mc is op but its a shame that the author droped this NICE
I thought this book was good and I think those who gave bad reviews it just didn’t suit their tastes if in the future you can get back in to this story i think it would continue to be good.
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Reveal Spoiler I always give 5/5 but there are some really cringe scenes and some plot holes. Some scenes(Like Ichigo Vasto Lord vs MC) don't make sense but the overall story is a work of art. All in all this can be used to gain experience later when you write Fluff and Romance Scenes
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what the **** what kind of start is that! i hold myself from stopping reading and later on the plot kinda wiggles and sometimes i realise its similar to some of stories that i read
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I'm mostly going to be talking about the MC. So in my eyes, MC is mostly a overpowered guy who is kind and gentle to his friends and lovers, but is incredibly evil and brutal to his enemies. His backstory is incredibly similar to Vahn's, but he's not nearly as nice as him. He does have some flaws though. He raped several women near the beginning of the novel, and he thinks about NTRing his father as well. He does become a better person later on, but he still takes any women he wants, regardless of whether or not they love other men in the original manga. Tgis is mostly a wish fulfillment story, so it doesn't really matter, but he's probably the most evil out of all MC'S I've seen so far. If I had to rate him on the moral scale, I would say he's Chaotic Good. The story is good and the characters besides MC do have actual development. So I think this is a good story, and I would definitely recommend reading it.
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My biggest complaint with this novel is that it ended abruptly. I also wish that it had focused a bit more on the women conquering instead of other things. Overall it was enjoyable and fairly easy to read.
Read this if you are fan of raping, because it seems author is fanatic of it. I managed to read this **** to 10 chapter and MC already raped like 100 girls, not to mention mind control and using slave magic on innocent woman and then claiming he loves her, like wtf?
Well it was fun while it last good luck on your on story. Hope you come back and continue this story after you feel better see ya author +++
Could you please upload the chapters again, even if it is dropped it was a great novel that I and a lot more would love to reread again
Why did you delete the chapters even If you dropped it, I liked coming and and rereading the story when I couldn’t find something else to read.
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Question! Why is there an NTR tag? I give you an another five star if you answer this
Ttthe same time I don't have ah phone number is not working and I will be there at the same time I don't have ah phone number is not working and I will be there at the same time
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This book is just not my cup of tea. Like everything written here totally goes against my views and ideologies. This is not even deserve the romance tag this is just pure lust and rape, like who the fack rapes a whole village after saving them. To make matter worse he just basically mind controls some the girls even going as far as fighting his own father just to make HIS OWN mothers as his women. Sigh..... This thing is basically a compilation of everything I dont like.
its just like the novel "strongest unlimited unknown supreme being" suggesy you guys to read this😍😀😘😊....................................ty
The writing quality is poor to be honest. I can look past that because maybe English isn't their best language but it is still pretty bad. Entirely wrong words and things which completely breaks immersion due to you having to figure out what word is supposed to be there. Story development started off different and then the author did a complete over haul of the character with no explanation where you would think that it was an entirely different character. The character started with low morales and essentially rapped an entire town of woman and it is never mentioned again while the character went and started acting shy around girls like he just didn't rape multiple people and manipulate things for his own gains. His character itself is inconsistent and when I first started reading about him I immediately put him in the "Yun Che" category. If you want to read something to kill some time then this has a lot of chapter to do that but take it with a grain of salt since its not the best or the worst. (It pretty low but not garbage tier.)
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The story starts well, good development, but then it turns to a worse ... 10-year-old MC is the biggest "stallion", but then he regrets everything and does nothing else. He never bothered to mention it but his father becomes the ultimate villain and he wants to make his 2 mothers his women "conveniently". From chapter 40 onwards it falls even further, MC who has been abused all his life (to the point of being without emotions) suddenly becomes furious for the smallest things, with S-class power he almost destroys the world, but conveniently it is prevented and nerfed in an extremely "easy" way ... I wonder if he used SSS class or fights against the strongest
Reveal Spoiler it was good while it lasted I guess overall it was good start up and also I feel like it could get better as there are normally some slow parts in a book
i cant explain why but i just like this fan-fic novel i like how the mc is op but its a shame that the author droped this NICE
I thought this book was good and I think those who gave bad reviews it just didn’t suit their tastes if in the future you can get back in to this story i think it would continue to be good.
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Reveal Spoiler I always give 5/5 but there are some really cringe scenes and some plot holes. Some scenes(Like Ichigo Vasto Lord vs MC) don't make sense but the overall story is a work of art. All in all this can be used to gain experience later when you write Fluff and Romance Scenes
Reveal Spoiler what the **** what kind of start is that! i hold myself from stopping reading and later on the plot kinda wiggles and sometimes i realise its similar to some of stories that i read
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I'm mostly going to be talking about the MC. So in my eyes, MC is mostly a overpowered guy who is kind and gentle to his friends and lovers, but is incredibly evil and brutal to his enemies. His backstory is incredibly similar to Vahn's, but he's not nearly as nice as him. He does have some flaws though. He raped several women near the beginning of the novel, and he thinks about NTRing his father as well. He does become a better person later on, but he still takes any women he wants, regardless of whether or not they love other men in the original manga. Tgis is mostly a wish fulfillment story, so it doesn't really matter, but he's probably the most evil out of all MC'S I've seen so far. If I had to rate him on the moral scale, I would say he's Chaotic Good. The story is good and the characters besides MC do have actual development. So I think this is a good story, and I would definitely recommend reading it.
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My biggest complaint with this novel is that it ended abruptly. I also wish that it had focused a bit more on the women conquering instead of other things. Overall it was enjoyable and fairly easy to read.
Read this if you are fan of raping, because it seems author is fanatic of it. I managed to read this **** to 10 chapter and MC already raped like 100 girls, not to mention mind control and using slave magic on innocent woman and then claiming he loves her, like wtf?
Well it was fun while it last good luck on your on story. Hope you come back and continue this story after you feel better see ya author +++
Could you please upload the chapters again, even if it is dropped it was a great novel that I and a lot more would love to reread again