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I honestly started reading this book randomly and i am so glad i found it the world background is one of my favorite parts with the different lives that they lived and their self awareness this book is honestly a favorite of mine i just wish the updates would be more consistent
The translation is awful. The author needs an editor. I’m only on chapter 39 so I don’t know if the translation gets better or worse. The pacing of this story is very slow. I just read 2 chapters devoted to them eating. There was another chapter devoted to the MC and ML sitting on a couch saying nothing to each other. Just a lot inner monologue. The author breaks the 4th wall a lot. There’s a lot of random info dump. Going back to the chapter about them eating: the characters are served food. The MC asks the waiter about the rice and we get an infodump about spiritual food, the different levels, and other things. There are a lot of info dumps. I don’t know if this gets better in later chapters. Over all, it’s a decent story. It’s not the best nor is it the worse. Something to the pass time while waiting for your favorite novels to update.
Author, when are you going to update. I really want to know, waiting is killing me. (〒﹏〒) I want more. Please update more. I will support you but please don't keep procastinating.
Novel maravilhosa até o momento, ainda estou no começo da novel mas até então me agradou e me surpreendeu bastante <3 Author querido quando você irá continuar com a novel ? eu ainda nem acabei de ler o que tem mas já to completamente ansioso espero de coração que tenha mais historia <3
I like the storyline and the characters it's just it is hard to read as there are a lot of mistakes like missing words... I just think you should get an editor. Well other than that keep up the work also is this translated or is this your original work? Just want to know. Great work!
First please let me apologize 🙏🙏🙏 to the author!!! 😓😓😓 I'm so very sorry!!! I love the way you introduce the novel in your synapses. It really made me very intrigued I was also warned that it would be a slow paced story so I though " yeah! no worries, I can do slow." but what what I was not prepared is that the story is to slow to the point of crawling, 50 chapters later they are still somewhere outside, still trying to get to the Sect. OMG! I tried my best! I really tried my best to endure but I really can't. I was also in a point that I skipped a lot of paragraph just to make my reading faster but still!😭😭😭 I just had to give up! I'm really sorry! Really! really! Sorry! I will be dropping this story! I'm really traumatized by how the pace is going.🥺🤧🤧
It was very excellent as it portrays different range of characters and the world background was highly imaginative. 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1
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Author can you please continue this story as well, (pretty please) 🥺 I beg you. if its needed as well i will kneel to beg 🙇♀️🙏, I just love this story and it looks like its just the first volume. (PRETTY PLEASE) 😭 i want to continue the novel.
Just started reading and I really love this. I’m usually not fond of wuxia novels.p, however this one is really good. Love how it starts off without MC meeting the ML the first 2 chapters. Nor of any of them kissing face at first sight. I feel this will be a slow burn, which i love.
Autor i love so much, i keep rereading it over and over i hope author relese more chapter soon 👍👍👍👍👍😆😆😆😆😆😁😁😁😁 so ecited. (☞ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)☞(๑•̀ㅁ•́ฅ✧
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This novel just keeps getting better and better!!! At chapter 60 now, and I am pleased to report that the novel reads alot more fluently and easily now, there are alot less mistakes and it doesn't interfere with comprehension. We've recently been introduced to a supporting ML can't wait to see how they interact from here!!!
Such a good novel!!! Intriguing plot and MC backstory, cute side couples which help to tide us over until the main couple grows affection for each other! Overall a really solid story! My only critique would be that some minor editing be done, which is underway, as it would be advantageous because sometimes there are improperly used pronouns or words/phrases that don't make sense in it. Minor issue but it doesn't get in the way of reading this great book!!!
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i love this book! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖
i just love this book. from how the characters is build up. how the author describe every scene is just perfect. ❤️💓💗💖❤️💓💗💖❤️💓💗💖❤️💓💗💖❤️💓💗💖❤️💓💗💖❤️💓💖💖
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Muito bom, é muito interessante heid ler e ver se ficarei satisfeita. Tendon em contains que li o sinopse e achei bastante satisfatorio agora verei o conteido
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I like the story and the plot, but there are to many details and descriptions. I would perfer if the descriptions would be reveald gradualy as the story develops. Sometimes author uses almost all chapter for descriptions. I know that author see those decriptions important and I think that too, but its hard to rememmber everything. It makes my head spin so I skiped those parts of the storry. Anyway, Story is great and I recomend it to give it a try and read it. You will not be disapointed. 😍
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I love the story and the relationship between the ml and mc it's sweet, I can't wait for them to get to the sect, though that part where they all have the 'stones' I was shocked.
This story has a nice pace to it. The first few chapters have been updated to correct grammatical errors, but most of it is just an initial translation - so the sentences can be strange. That being said, it is does not detract from the story too much. I am enjoying the characters as well as the world. The author gives enough background information so you can follow along with the technical aspects. I also like that you get tidbits of the other characters' thought processes.
Estou ansiosa por mais,a história está ficando mais emocionante fazendo com queiramos mais. Não demore muito. Quero ver como vai o pequeno Song é como seus poderes vai se desenvolver.
Love this. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Title: The Path of the Sword Suitable age: 18+ Genre: Eastern Fantasy Content: Yaio, *** between men, romance, adventure and friendship. Chapters: +100 Hello, people here is the author, this is my second BL story, I sincerely hope you like it. These two weeks I will dedicate myself exclusively to this story because I want to win the prize, then it will be daily posts. Support me and go read the other BL story! Xoxo
I honestly started reading this book randomly and i am so glad i found it the world background is one of my favorite parts with the different lives that they lived and their self awareness this book is honestly a favorite of mine i just wish the updates would be more consistent
The translation is awful. The author needs an editor. I’m only on chapter 39 so I don’t know if the translation gets better or worse. The pacing of this story is very slow. I just read 2 chapters devoted to them eating. There was another chapter devoted to the MC and ML sitting on a couch saying nothing to each other. Just a lot inner monologue. The author breaks the 4th wall a lot. There’s a lot of random info dump. Going back to the chapter about them eating: the characters are served food. The MC asks the waiter about the rice and we get an infodump about spiritual food, the different levels, and other things. There are a lot of info dumps. I don’t know if this gets better in later chapters. Over all, it’s a decent story. It’s not the best nor is it the worse. Something to the pass time while waiting for your favorite novels to update.
Author, when are you going to update. I really want to know, waiting is killing me. (〒﹏〒) I want more. Please update more. I will support you but please don't keep procastinating.
Novel maravilhosa até o momento, ainda estou no começo da novel mas até então me agradou e me surpreendeu bastante <3 Author querido quando você irá continuar com a novel ? eu ainda nem acabei de ler o que tem mas já to completamente ansioso espero de coração que tenha mais historia <3
I like the storyline and the characters it's just it is hard to read as there are a lot of mistakes like missing words... I just think you should get an editor. Well other than that keep up the work also is this translated or is this your original work? Just want to know. Great work!
First please let me apologize 🙏🙏🙏 to the author!!! 😓😓😓 I'm so very sorry!!! I love the way you introduce the novel in your synapses. It really made me very intrigued I was also warned that it would be a slow paced story so I though " yeah! no worries, I can do slow." but what what I was not prepared is that the story is to slow to the point of crawling, 50 chapters later they are still somewhere outside, still trying to get to the Sect. OMG! I tried my best! I really tried my best to endure but I really can't. I was also in a point that I skipped a lot of paragraph just to make my reading faster but still!😭😭😭 I just had to give up! I'm really sorry! Really! really! Sorry! I will be dropping this story! I'm really traumatized by how the pace is going.🥺🤧🤧
It was very excellent as it portrays different range of characters and the world background was highly imaginative. 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1
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Author can you please continue this story as well, (pretty please) 🥺 I beg you. if its needed as well i will kneel to beg 🙇♀️🙏, I just love this story and it looks like its just the first volume. (PRETTY PLEASE) 😭 i want to continue the novel.
Just started reading and I really love this. I’m usually not fond of wuxia novels.p, however this one is really good. Love how it starts off without MC meeting the ML the first 2 chapters. Nor of any of them kissing face at first sight. I feel this will be a slow burn, which i love.
Autor i love so much, i keep rereading it over and over i hope author relese more chapter soon 👍👍👍👍👍😆😆😆😆😆😁😁😁😁 so ecited. (☞ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)☞(๑•̀ㅁ•́ฅ✧
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This novel just keeps getting better and better!!! At chapter 60 now, and I am pleased to report that the novel reads alot more fluently and easily now, there are alot less mistakes and it doesn't interfere with comprehension. We've recently been introduced to a supporting ML can't wait to see how they interact from here!!!
Such a good novel!!! Intriguing plot and MC backstory, cute side couples which help to tide us over until the main couple grows affection for each other! Overall a really solid story! My only critique would be that some minor editing be done, which is underway, as it would be advantageous because sometimes there are improperly used pronouns or words/phrases that don't make sense in it. Minor issue but it doesn't get in the way of reading this great book!!!
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i just love this book. from how the characters is build up. how the author describe every scene is just perfect. ❤️💓💗💖❤️💓💗💖❤️💓💗💖❤️💓💗💖❤️💓💗💖❤️💓💗💖❤️💓💖💖
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Muito bom, é muito interessante heid ler e ver se ficarei satisfeita. Tendon em contains que li o sinopse e achei bastante satisfatorio agora verei o conteido
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I like the story and the plot, but there are to many details and descriptions. I would perfer if the descriptions would be reveald gradualy as the story develops. Sometimes author uses almost all chapter for descriptions. I know that author see those decriptions important and I think that too, but its hard to rememmber everything. It makes my head spin so I skiped those parts of the storry. Anyway, Story is great and I recomend it to give it a try and read it. You will not be disapointed. 😍
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I love the story and the relationship between the ml and mc it's sweet, I can't wait for them to get to the sect, though that part where they all have the 'stones' I was shocked.
This story has a nice pace to it. The first few chapters have been updated to correct grammatical errors, but most of it is just an initial translation - so the sentences can be strange. That being said, it is does not detract from the story too much. I am enjoying the characters as well as the world. The author gives enough background information so you can follow along with the technical aspects. I also like that you get tidbits of the other characters' thought processes.
Estou ansiosa por mais,a história está ficando mais emocionante fazendo com queiramos mais. Não demore muito. Quero ver como vai o pequeno Song é como seus poderes vai se desenvolver.
Love this. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Title: The Path of the Sword Suitable age: 18+ Genre: Eastern Fantasy Content: Yaio, *** between men, romance, adventure and friendship. Chapters: +100 Hello, people here is the author, this is my second BL story, I sincerely hope you like it. These two weeks I will dedicate myself exclusively to this story because I want to win the prize, then it will be daily posts. Support me and go read the other BL story! Xoxo