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I just started this novel so I don't have a sober opinion, but I have a lot of expectations that it will be very good................................. ........................................................ ........................................................ .....................
In Love with this novel 🙂💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
i love the book. I like the personality of the characters, it makes them less flat and it's easy to get attached to them. The only thing that I do not like is that sometimes they seem to go around in conversations without reaching the point in question (something that irritates me a lot personally when a person does that to me)
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please don't drop the story it's one of the best one piece fan flicks there is interesting story characters and good development please reconsider dropping it because I think it would be a great fresh new story on the one piece universe please reconsider
I have been really enjoying reading this story so far! Freya is an awesome character and I really looking forward to reading more about her and her crews adventures in the future!
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like the mc character but plz do not use the word{killing} use the word {defet} insted to make the story more freindly coz i see the mc craw are like the strawhat and the strawhat do not kill
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PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE please do not.....drop i love this story... ...
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I always imagining Marine from Hololive reincarnated to One Piece, become a pirate and everytime She go to ship fight, there will be Ahoy song on the background.. or she would do a concert every time she want to fight.. but, well... this is close enough I think?.....
▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆☆ - not realy 5☆. but i will give 5☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆☆☆ - interesting start. ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆☆☆ - cute design and a verry interesting personality ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆☆ - one piece
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Bom demais, os personagens são top e a história é muito boa e vai ter yuri ainda por cima então merece 5 estrelas ............................
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I’m really enjoying the story so far! Its really interesting and funny to read how the chracters interact with one another. The Mc has an out going personality, and isnt one to shy away from confrontation. If anything they might love it, throwing out curses to destroy her opponents! Theres yuri too, and thats always a plus in my book. I hope to see more of this and I think the author is doing a fantastic job if handling all of this and learning about English at the same time! But overall I’d say this book is definitely something thats worth trying!
I love it. An MC who is not totally OP at the beginning I can’t wait for next chapters.
this looks really fun till now i enjoyed it, the writing quality is good there aren't many mistakes, the Mc is super fun and the nuns omg😂 they all look special, i can't wait for the story to progress more and for freya to make her own crew, anyway i'm bad at writing reviews so just read it u'll like it. i just jope that it won't get dropped like so many fanfics out there
Я ещё не читал но почемуто хочу потдержать это произведение мне я как могу сказать зодёт а афтор наверное кротой чувак со своими вкусам ну кароче я читать (да это мой комент на русском) I haven't read it yet, but for some reason I want to hold this work for aftor, I'm as offended as I can tell, and the author is probably a cool dude with his own tastes, anyway, I'm reading
I haven't read it yet but as there is little female protagonist in one piece I already give 5 stars. obs: yuri if you have romance please 
Tá começando e destruindo!!! Ficou top demais, ansioso para os próximos capítulos. Brabo demais, brabo demais, brabo demais e brabo demais.!
Nice start! Gotta admit, was a little worried about the characterization because of the swearing and how you decided to present the mc in the first chapter but wow~ it's been quality content since then author, keep the good work and don't drop this! I want to see what shenanigans our little pirate creates in her journey.
I just started this novel so I don't have a sober opinion, but I have a lot of expectations that it will be very good................................. ........................................................ ........................................................ .....................
In Love with this novel 🙂💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
i love the book. I like the personality of the characters, it makes them less flat and it's easy to get attached to them. The only thing that I do not like is that sometimes they seem to go around in conversations without reaching the point in question (something that irritates me a lot personally when a person does that to me)
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please don't drop the story it's one of the best one piece fan flicks there is interesting story characters and good development please reconsider dropping it because I think it would be a great fresh new story on the one piece universe please reconsider
I have been really enjoying reading this story so far! Freya is an awesome character and I really looking forward to reading more about her and her crews adventures in the future!
-love the story -love the story -love the story -love the story -love the story -love the story -love the story -love the story -love the story -love the story -love the story -love the story -love the story
like the mc character but plz do not use the word{killing} use the word {defet} insted to make the story more freindly coz i see the mc craw are like the strawhat and the strawhat do not kill
Worth to read .............,......................................................,.......................................................,............................................
PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE please do not.....drop i love this story... ...
Nice .... . . ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ...... ...... ...... .......... ....... ............................
I always imagining Marine from Hololive reincarnated to One Piece, become a pirate and everytime She go to ship fight, there will be Ahoy song on the background.. or she would do a concert every time she want to fight.. but, well... this is close enough I think?.....
▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆☆ - not realy 5☆. but i will give 5☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆☆☆ - interesting start. ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆☆☆ - cute design and a verry interesting personality ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆☆ - one piece
fun read..[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Bom demais, os personagens são top e a história é muito boa e vai ter yuri ainda por cima então merece 5 estrelas ............................
[{Really enjoyed}] [{Really enjoyed}] [{Really enjoyed}] [{Really enjoyed}] [{Really enjoyed}] [{Really enjoyed}] [{Really enjoyed}] [{Really enjoyed}] [{Really enjoyed}] [{Really enjoyed}] [{Really enjoyed}] [{Really enjoyed}] [{Really enjoyed}] [{Really enjoyed}] [{Really enjoyed}] [{Really enjoyed}] [{Really enjoyed}] [{Really enjoyed}] [{Really enjoyed}] [{Really enjoyed}] [{Really enjoyed}] [{Really enjoyed}] [{Really enjoyed}] [{Really enjoyed}] [{Really enjoyed}] [{Really enjoyed}] [{Really enjoyed}] [{Really enjoyed}] [{Really enjoyed}] [{Really enjoyed}] [{Really enjoyed}] [{Really enjoyed}]
I’m really enjoying the story so far! Its really interesting and funny to read how the chracters interact with one another. The Mc has an out going personality, and isnt one to shy away from confrontation. If anything they might love it, throwing out curses to destroy her opponents! Theres yuri too, and thats always a plus in my book. I hope to see more of this and I think the author is doing a fantastic job if handling all of this and learning about English at the same time! But overall I’d say this book is definitely something thats worth trying!
I love it. An MC who is not totally OP at the beginning I can’t wait for next chapters.
this looks really fun till now i enjoyed it, the writing quality is good there aren't many mistakes, the Mc is super fun and the nuns omg😂 they all look special, i can't wait for the story to progress more and for freya to make her own crew, anyway i'm bad at writing reviews so just read it u'll like it. i just jope that it won't get dropped like so many fanfics out there
Я ещё не читал но почемуто хочу потдержать это произведение мне я как могу сказать зодёт а афтор наверное кротой чувак со своими вкусам ну кароче я читать (да это мой комент на русском) I haven't read it yet, but for some reason I want to hold this work for aftor, I'm as offended as I can tell, and the author is probably a cool dude with his own tastes, anyway, I'm reading
I haven't read it yet but as there is little female protagonist in one piece I already give 5 stars. obs: yuri if you have romance please 
Tá começando e destruindo!!! Ficou top demais, ansioso para os próximos capítulos. Brabo demais, brabo demais, brabo demais e brabo demais.!
Nice start! Gotta admit, was a little worried about the characterization because of the swearing and how you decided to present the mc in the first chapter but wow~ it's been quality content since then author, keep the good work and don't drop this! I want to see what shenanigans our little pirate creates in her journey.
Bololo