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I enjoyed the authors use of description to describe the scenes and people in the story. It very much gave them life and helped me to see this in my head.
This work got potential and so was the author. I can say that this work will be attractive to high-schoolers out there. With the creativity and passion of the author, this will surely become great as she matures as an author. Hope it will become big in the future. Keep it up 👍 Practice your craft more and I know you will do great!
Really vivid storytelling, interesting plot. The story is rapidly building momentum at a thoughtful pace. Can't wait to see how it further develops!
Great writing if I've ever seen one. Love the book, the writing, and the characters. it's so sad how people leave once things get hard. I can't wait to see how the whole story plans out, will there be revenge or love.❤️❤️❤️
The is one of the most vivid books I read in a while She gave to every single character But I had one at the tip of my finger,so much life in sarah
Great start, I don't wanna be a spoiler but I just don't like the way he treats her, I won't say the names lol, I want you guys to check this book out first lol, the author really did some magic here great work, a few edits needed ❤️ I recommend this book.......
WQ: 3/5 Reason: There are some parts of the chapters where the conversation was awkward to read. Punctuations were missing and the author kinda used a lot of commas instead of periods. I suggest to read the chapter out loud on your own to spot any grammar mistakes or use Grammarly for free. SoU: 5/5 Reason: The updates were stable. SD: 4/5 Reason: There r some chapters where I can't help but think that this chapter is perfect to be in another chapter rather than the current one. The development of the story is indeed slow, but it was a great pace for such a novel like this. CD: 4/5 Reason: I, as a reader, was having problem pointing out which one is who with the characters. I couldn't even imagine what they look like and was only using the basis of the cover for them. WB: 3/5 Reason: WB is all over the place. You can tell by the first chapter. I hope the author will fix it. Overall: 3.8/5 Reason: The novel is brilliant. It has a good plot and the novel sounds like it could star-studded novel. Just a little of edits here and there and this novel would achieve great heights. Kudos to the author for writing such a good story! Keep up the good work!
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Great story development. I really enjoyed the turns it took and the imagery the author creates with their writing. Though the grammar and writing could use some work in the beginning, it gets better. It would be a great read for anyone after editing it through once.
I can see potential in this novel as I was reading it, it's like I can imagine it in my head.
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the story is twisted with a potential , love your writing style . heemnie is suffering in her life with her brother ezra but they are strong enough fight . i like her strong attitude. keep writing. i enjoyed reading .
The pacing of the story is quite good. The paths of each charaters diverge then intersect directly in a singular flow/path. However, there are times where this aforementioned path is too direct which takes out the excitement on the plot. For example, FC wants to do this, and thus that very same scenario indeed happens on the next scene. The lack of unconventional obstacles that the FC had to improvise through denies us of the chance to see how she reacts at extra factors that she had not considered beforehand. Having said that, a direct plot line is still an effective approach to build up tension quickly and progress the story smoothly.
Hi guys, thank you all so much for the reviews I appreciate it😚😚. I will focus in making the novel a great one, Will work harder in developing the story 😊💯
Nice story development, good writing style and grammar usage, you can enjoy this book with all of yer hart. I think, this book will be a very good romance book OwO