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anyone know if this was on some other website where it still exists? ..................................................................
Homophobic assh0le ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
at the beginning it was good but starting with mc suddenly accepting women left and right then it becomes unbearable. he accepts relationship like after a month or two, it is not supposed to be like "I accept your ideology or idea then falls in love." the relationship part is unbearable because of how casually he accepts women. like he got several girlfriends already why have some more, he should have restraints or at least not be this careless in choosing someone you love. he has like 5 girlfriends and yet he still wants more. he should think what his girlfriends would feel. overall, it is bad because of how he gets his girlfriends, i can understand if it is how long they have been together or how they fall in love with each other because of their personality but not cliche scenarios like the damsel in distress or love at first sight or an action that made the female fall in love.
Great writing, great story, great everything. Great is too small it's God's creation itself. But sadly you are not continuing it. I beg of you! Please continue! I love this novel! Please....... I. Beg you............ Please.......
don't waste your time on this shit. It is total crap and Mc is no OP but complete retarded. Author is making random world mission and that's when it goes downhill.
too be honest when the first review said turn gays into straight so was definitely interested, No offence to the fau people by the way, but I am looking forward to the story thanks for the chapters
Nice story.... more new world..... Nice story.... more new world..... Nice story.... more new world..... Nice story.... more new world..... Nice story.... more new world.....
toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooop
i dont know why the author put a lot of extra character,.. .lol, and its getting boring .. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] ..
Keep going 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
This story is good. Like, really, really good. The writing quality is excellent, the chapters are long enough to enjoy, and the powers of the mc are well balanced. But I got two complaints. Need more chapters!! Also, please make more Naruto scenes! Like, seriously, I haven’t seen or heard of the orange head in, like, fifty or so chapters!
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Yeah I can't take this... everything just mixes and this turns out to be a complete pile of dog****....................................................
Bruh this is **** all the guy does is get bullied by the fucking system trash. ·™³²¤87555444444 jcfffccftvvgygvffffffcggvvgvgggcdfvcghhy
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Experience experience experience echter niet dat ik de volgende gegevens van het jaar dat ik de volgende Is a great place to work for and it is a great place to work and to enjoy the opportunity to work with you and
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It's awesome, and I wish there was more for me to read. Hopefully this book will make it to 300 chapters or more. Another thing I hope to see is him going to the worlds of Tokyo Ghoul, Fairy tail, HunterXHunter, and DBZ
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Amazing novel!...when I first read the first 2 chapter some time ago i dropped thinking it wasn't good but boy was I wrong...back then I was only focused on certain fanfics that is why I wasn't interested on this one but I was wrong this novel is really really good! MC is op af hahaha I love it. And also, brilliant idea of introducing the OMNITRIX as ability taker by DNA...it was brilliant. I'm loving. MC travels to other wolrds on missions and takes abilities from that world! Truly awsome...Must read it Guys! You'll like it a lot!!
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Está demasiado buena esta novela. Seguí como lo estas haciendo mal que te queda exelente😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Kudos on the early chapters but then in went downhill fast cause of world travel and other poor choices you made :( this is the highest rating I can give
Reveal Spoiler Me encanta tu novela Man. Seguí así. Gracias por el capitulo😆😆😆...😚😚💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏👶
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It could have been very amazing. The first few chapters up to the part he got his watch was great, but after that, everything feels rushed. The MC would enter different worlds for a few episodes, it's nice and all at the first 2 worlds because he mainly went there before those world's actual plot started and just got power-ups and all, but starting from his chuunin exams, and the highschool of the dead world made it a trainwreck. Numerous characters from various series appeared one after another, cross-overs everywhere, but that's not the bad part. It's the fact that everything was rushed, the interactions, the development, and worse of all, the flow of the story was destroyed. There's no more story, just a confusing wish fulfilment. It would be fine if the characters were fleshed out and properly integrated, but they were just appeared in the story for the sake of appearing. It never done any one of them any justice.
what was the cultivation world that he went into.....................I can't remember .................. . .. ............... .......
anyone know if this was on some other website where it still exists? ..................................................................
Homophobic assh0le ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
at the beginning it was good but starting with mc suddenly accepting women left and right then it becomes unbearable. he accepts relationship like after a month or two, it is not supposed to be like "I accept your ideology or idea then falls in love." the relationship part is unbearable because of how casually he accepts women. like he got several girlfriends already why have some more, he should have restraints or at least not be this careless in choosing someone you love. he has like 5 girlfriends and yet he still wants more. he should think what his girlfriends would feel. overall, it is bad because of how he gets his girlfriends, i can understand if it is how long they have been together or how they fall in love with each other because of their personality but not cliche scenarios like the damsel in distress or love at first sight or an action that made the female fall in love.
Great writing, great story, great everything. Great is too small it's God's creation itself. But sadly you are not continuing it. I beg of you! Please continue! I love this novel! Please....... I. Beg you............ Please.......
don't waste your time on this shit. It is total crap and Mc is no OP but complete retarded. Author is making random world mission and that's when it goes downhill.
too be honest when the first review said turn gays into straight so was definitely interested, No offence to the fau people by the way, but I am looking forward to the story thanks for the chapters
Nice story.... more new world..... Nice story.... more new world..... Nice story.... more new world..... Nice story.... more new world..... Nice story.... more new world.....
toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooop
i dont know why the author put a lot of extra character,.. .lol, and its getting boring .. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] ..
Keep going 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
This story is good. Like, really, really good. The writing quality is excellent, the chapters are long enough to enjoy, and the powers of the mc are well balanced. But I got two complaints. Need more chapters!! Also, please make more Naruto scenes! Like, seriously, I haven’t seen or heard of the orange head in, like, fifty or so chapters!
Reveal Spoiler Yeah I can't take this... everything just mixes and this turns out to be a complete pile of dog****....................................................
Bruh this is **** all the guy does is get bullied by the fucking system trash. ·™³²¤87555444444 jcfffccftvvgygvffffffcggvvgvgggcdfvcghhy
Super 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
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Experience experience experience echter niet dat ik de volgende gegevens van het jaar dat ik de volgende Is a great place to work for and it is a great place to work and to enjoy the opportunity to work with you and
............................ more ............................ more ............................ more ............................ more ............................ more ............................ more ............................ more ............................ more ............................ more
It's awesome, and I wish there was more for me to read. Hopefully this book will make it to 300 chapters or more. Another thing I hope to see is him going to the worlds of Tokyo Ghoul, Fairy tail, HunterXHunter, and DBZ
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Amazing novel!...when I first read the first 2 chapter some time ago i dropped thinking it wasn't good but boy was I wrong...back then I was only focused on certain fanfics that is why I wasn't interested on this one but I was wrong this novel is really really good! MC is op af hahaha I love it. And also, brilliant idea of introducing the OMNITRIX as ability taker by DNA...it was brilliant. I'm loving. MC travels to other wolrds on missions and takes abilities from that world! Truly awsome...Must read it Guys! You'll like it a lot!!
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Está demasiado buena esta novela. Seguí como lo estas haciendo mal que te queda exelente😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Kudos on the early chapters but then in went downhill fast cause of world travel and other poor choices you made :( this is the highest rating I can give
Reveal Spoiler Me encanta tu novela Man. Seguí así. Gracias por el capitulo😆😆😆...😚😚💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏👶
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It could have been very amazing. The first few chapters up to the part he got his watch was great, but after that, everything feels rushed. The MC would enter different worlds for a few episodes, it's nice and all at the first 2 worlds because he mainly went there before those world's actual plot started and just got power-ups and all, but starting from his chuunin exams, and the highschool of the dead world made it a trainwreck. Numerous characters from various series appeared one after another, cross-overs everywhere, but that's not the bad part. It's the fact that everything was rushed, the interactions, the development, and worse of all, the flow of the story was destroyed. There's no more story, just a confusing wish fulfilment. It would be fine if the characters were fleshed out and properly integrated, but they were just appeared in the story for the sake of appearing. It never done any one of them any justice.
what was the cultivation world that he went into.....................I can't remember .................. . .. ............... .......