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Worst fanfic I've ever read :) BETA MC ✅ BRAINLESS ✅ USELESS OP ✅ AND MANY MORE.... atleast u should not make mc like generic beta japanese mc, bruhh this is fanfic... I hope you can learn more and make fanfic as it should be a fanfiction, im sorry to give you worst review, but im honest person 🙏
Author, you took harem pokemon too seriously, as the introduction warns. It's a cool story for those who like this style, I'm not going to lie that I have no idea how many women he has, there are times when I don't know which woman he's talking about and I go to the conjudes page to clear my doubts, but thank you for the light novel. When you write a novel that has a smaller harem like a maximum of 3 or 4 women, I will definitely read it. Thanks
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I really dont understand people with their rating skills and ideas. So far, this story seem to be more like a wish fulfilment story with this utterly disgusting harem thing added to it. Collecting women like pokemon. Its like he just wants to do it with any women that moves. I can ignore the grammatical errors but the pokemon harem thing is just a deal breaker for me. Had this been a harem with only 5 women max, it would've been a better story. The story wasted so many chapters for just the harem part that without it could've progressed the story so much.
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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I hope you continue updating this novel. My favourite Novel and good job with the sol as it gives a different Feel. Also anyone know similar novels.
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you focus too much on describing him cultivating it is very annoying I think that's it . .
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By the way author?? Who is that girl on the latest Cover? I didn't read Apotheosis manga in the 500+ chapter i just don't want to haha i want to read it after they got to the God lands.
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Worst fanfic I've ever read :) BETA MC ✅ BRAINLESS ✅ USELESS OP ✅ AND MANY MORE.... atleast u should not make mc like generic beta japanese mc, bruhh this is fanfic... I hope you can learn more and make fanfic as it should be a fanfiction, im sorry to give you worst review, but im honest person 🙏
Author, you took harem pokemon too seriously, as the introduction warns. It's a cool story for those who like this style, I'm not going to lie that I have no idea how many women he has, there are times when I don't know which woman he's talking about and I go to the conjudes page to clear my doubts, but thank you for the light novel. When you write a novel that has a smaller harem like a maximum of 3 or 4 women, I will definitely read it. Thanks
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Reveal Spoiler I really dont understand people with their rating skills and ideas. So far, this story seem to be more like a wish fulfilment story with this utterly disgusting harem thing added to it. Collecting women like pokemon. Its like he just wants to do it with any women that moves. I can ignore the grammatical errors but the pokemon harem thing is just a deal breaker for me. Had this been a harem with only 5 women max, it would've been a better story. The story wasted so many chapters for just the harem part that without it could've progressed the story so much.
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what's the name of your pokemon ff, cant find it.what's the name of your pokemon ff, cant find it.what's the name of your pokemon ff, cant find it.
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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Trash , because: - MC beta 💩 - Mc OP but stupid - Cultivation 💩💩💩💩💩💩💩 - Chinese style. - Author virgin / caste [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
I hope you continue updating this novel. My favourite Novel and good job with the sol as it gives a different Feel. Also anyone know similar novels.
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you focus too much on describing him cultivating it is very annoying I think that's it . .
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By the way author?? Who is that girl on the latest Cover? I didn't read Apotheosis manga in the 500+ chapter i just don't want to haha i want to read it after they got to the God lands.
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