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Bryan stone's died while watching One piece movie stampede
then meet a god, god gave him five wishes
now reborn as Alexander walker.
now watch him as he transvers world's.
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now don't be hard on me this is my very first fan fic
there may be a lot of mistakes, but I am improving my writing skills, and also this is just for fun for me so don't complain
first wold: My hero academia
second world: ?
third world:?
forth world:?
fifth world:?
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Author _Platinum_
I'll be honest it could be good like yes it's wish fulfillment but it could be okay but with the amount of plot holes and confusion you can't read it. Like he gets a system okay he start a tutorial but then bam buys things using point we don't know how he got and then after he names the system he uses quest items we also don't know tf he got so in all it boils down to 1. yes good grammar with a few spelling mistakes here and there but then there are flip flopped sentences and just whole missing pieces like what quest he did or how he got things 2. stability is good for a person doing this for fun so nothing to really say 3. S.D Well here is where those missing parts really effect as it's hard to develop anything when were stuck trying to find out how he got this or that or even what he did. 4.C.D ehh it's okay I mean it's what I expected from a novel that gives five wishes just your basic wish fulfillment mc 5. W.B well this is just already planned out as the author used mha as the world so not really anything to say.
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