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meh your usual trash were the mc is a complete idiot who thinks with his D but thats what I expected to be honest idk why this keep recommend to me it pure trash
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hallow thor, I come from Indonesia, honestly I really like your fanfic novel, which I think is interesting and good, and every word is funny, and I hope this novel will continue unlike other novels that stop in the middle of the road.. and I have a suggestion. .. it would be nice to skip a few years of thor so that I can quickly enter/go to another world
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Its just not that good, i mean yes one cheap shot from me is mentioning the grammar is bad when he did so himself, but even other than that the mc is kinda just meh
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No mencionare sobre la calidad de escritura por que es irrelevante. Tampoco comentare sobre la estabilidad de actualización. El desarrollo de la historia es basura, lleva todo muy adelantado, hay muchos saltos del tiempo, es demasiado op y es algo estupido por que no especifica lo que obtiene, como teletransportarse y toda la weva, almenos explica como la consiguió. El diseño de personaje es horrible dice que no le importa sus padres cuando piensa en ellos para convertirse en super sayajin y el fondo del mundo es patetico. No sabe casi nada de dragon ball, y cambio el sexo de los personajes. Es completamente asqueroso Ahora por mi comentario espero que borre mi critica como lo hace todo autor debil y superficial
Too much gender-bending. Rushed. Read through early chaps but dropped it when the gender-bending thingy came up. P.S:Pls stop spamming 5-star reviews that just say <emoji>
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I'm rating this based on the prolog. now what do I want to say? your language...is directed at us right there. most don't like that. that pretty much all I have to say.
Bro put gender bender tag please....some of us don’t really like that kinda stuff....it was all good up until that point for me but good read tho.
Honestly, I’m devastated. I have no words to describe this nonsense. The is no book - this is psychological torture. Author would turn a vegetable into a woman and then gladly copulate with it. This is not to mention the utter absence of a plot; it didn’t get lost somewhere - it never existed. The characters are pathetic, the story is even worse and to top it off, people actually like it.
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meh your usual trash were the mc is a complete idiot who thinks with his D but thats what I expected to be honest idk why this keep recommend to me it pure trash
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hallow thor, I come from Indonesia, honestly I really like your fanfic novel, which I think is interesting and good, and every word is funny, and I hope this novel will continue unlike other novels that stop in the middle of the road.. and I have a suggestion. .. it would be nice to skip a few years of thor so that I can quickly enter/go to another world
Good novel .................................................................. .................................................................. .................................................................. ..................................................................
more chapters please. */////********--------**************-*************-*-*-*-*-**************-*-*-*-*-***********-*-*-*/-*-*-*-*************************************************-
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Its just not that good, i mean yes one cheap shot from me is mentioning the grammar is bad when he did so himself, but even other than that the mc is kinda just meh
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No mencionare sobre la calidad de escritura por que es irrelevante. Tampoco comentare sobre la estabilidad de actualización. El desarrollo de la historia es basura, lleva todo muy adelantado, hay muchos saltos del tiempo, es demasiado op y es algo estupido por que no especifica lo que obtiene, como teletransportarse y toda la weva, almenos explica como la consiguió. El diseño de personaje es horrible dice que no le importa sus padres cuando piensa en ellos para convertirse en super sayajin y el fondo del mundo es patetico. No sabe casi nada de dragon ball, y cambio el sexo de los personajes. Es completamente asqueroso Ahora por mi comentario espero que borre mi critica como lo hace todo autor debil y superficial
Too much gender-bending. Rushed. Read through early chaps but dropped it when the gender-bending thingy came up. P.S:Pls stop spamming 5-star reviews that just say <emoji>
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I'm rating this based on the prolog. now what do I want to say? your language...is directed at us right there. most don't like that. that pretty much all I have to say.
Bro put gender bender tag please....some of us don’t really like that kinda stuff....it was all good up until that point for me but good read tho.
Honestly, I’m devastated. I have no words to describe this nonsense. The is no book - this is psychological torture. Author would turn a vegetable into a woman and then gladly copulate with it. This is not to mention the utter absence of a plot; it didn’t get lost somewhere - it never existed. The characters are pathetic, the story is even worse and to top it off, people actually like it.