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Tryst Under The War [BL, Omegaverse,Action]
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Rius is an inexperienced dominant omega if not more dominant than a normal dominant omega who is strangled by the marriage that was arranged but to his knowledge he doesn't even know who is his arranged partner yet he meets an alpha who along the way fell in love with him.
On his way to the stadium he is brought to the Phantasmal Realm in an accident by the light jellies and fought a goddess who is unknown to him, after surviving the battle he reunited with the alpha whom he newly met with the unforeseen future coming to them, can they change the fates design?
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the writings are really detailed and very exciting, even the fight gives pure chills and the characters are really interesting. i would give this work 5 stars as it's genre is one of my favorites. do keep up the good work dear author!
In summary of my 20 comments for your 20 chapters, I love the story even though some scenarios are cliche you still succeed to twist it and writing something unexpected and original. The words are chosen well, and used well, as the emotions that each character has I can feel it and the design I can imagine it. But again, the spacing, the use of commas, the spelling (just a little bit), and the capitalization of i. Lastly, I have a recommendation for you or a tip maybe. you used deep or not too simple English words or not common to some or many readers, you also use some mythological entities out there, and many more. Therefore, I suggest you used to try to make a dictionary-like or when the chapter will end, on the last past you will put certain words and for example: Uriel- is the blah blah blah Rah- is the blah blah blah Husky- blah blah blah Enigma- blah blah blah And also try to add the words or the race you created in this novel, I forgot the name of the enemy they are fighting like the one starting with a, 4.4 this is my review for your novel "Tryst Under The War" with 20 chapters for now.
This Story is quite interesting~ The genres are my fav. I'm sooo excited to read the future chapters. Keep up the good work, lovely author. I hope the mc succeeds my imagination ❤️
mhuaw!🥀 This is a master piece and a chiefs kiss!! I really loved the novel and i really hope the author makes more chapters! you should definitely read it!! give it a read♡