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When Nate Winter returns to Forks after the death of his parents, all he expects is rain, silence, and the routine of a town that has forgotten how to speak out loud. But over cups of tea, old journals, and whispered conversations, he begins to uncover secrets buried deeper than the fog that covers the forest.
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Honestly surprised that I enjoyed the slow burn of this story’s development but it’s really good so far and the Mc is given a detailed background and brings a new challenge for the the hidden world of the supernatural with pure intelligence and author really makes every character feel alive and even though some complain about the choice of the mc’s romantic interest which becomes obvious pretty soon I think it’s set up fairly well and works with the mc’s attitude and upbringing the only complaint is some of the gender swaps in the beginning but it’s a small issue tht gets better after like chap 20 or so and isn’t that big a deal. Great read so far though and can’t wait to see more of this story!
First, like 40 chapters have pronoun problems with every sentence and is horrifically either written by A.I. or grammar checked by it. Takes about 55 chapters for the novel to actually begin. The first 54 are just the MC obsessing over Edward and licking the toes of Bella being her personal orbiter. The love interest (Alice) is a Temu version of her actual character and this is thus far the only novel to make me dislike her; the protagonist has more chemistry with literally every character other than her, including the men. Also, the overpowered and romance tag. Overpowered: The MC is a normal human pseudo-intellectual who thinks he's the shit but would get insta-gibbed by even the weakest Vampire/Shifter in Twilight. The only feats he has thus far is knocking out a high schooler and beating down 4 grown men. Romance: Up to chapter 60, literally none; not even a romantic gesture.
not sure how to feel about this if, MC thinks alot and more of it is just monologing and what is with the AI text? like the chpater im on now is all mixed up with ("..") and (–) for talking, its very confusing
first off this is a fanfic so the author is the God. However the tags are misleading tbh. its listed as overpowered when the MC is a useless human who thinks he is the smartest person in the room (which is not ). The Mc prides in his ability to be calm, observant and the ability to analyze a person and the author is hyping this up now heres the problem he is a human so when shit goes south he is dead and right now he is only protected with the plot armor and 50 chapters in theres no power up no signs of being overpored (according to tags). calls out others for being hypocritical when he himself is the biggest hypocrite of them all. now relationship wise i just think that twilight romance itself is braindead like bella is all beauty no brain just pure teen adrenaline selfishness. and the MC just cuddles bella while being treated like shit so idk. so i guess this novel is not for me 50+ chapters in with no powers detected and the MCs ego growing as huge as possible
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Overpowered tag is kinda to much. #slowmo ........................................ ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... HO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RBHO3WPF44UYL665RB
I'm confused by your writing style or specifically the way you write your dialogues it keeps changing. Can you stick to the most common style? ` ` for thoughts, " " for the actual. please?
I just don't understand the hype with this ff.... after 65 chapters, nothing really happened besides bits of slice of life. If you removed the main character, it wouldn't change anything from the original story at all. Tags are confusing as well... I had a bit of hope when they found a "mystery knife" in his room, but after all this time, no mention of it ever again
I read up to chapter 51 and honestly it’s quite surprising how Alice is the love interest considering she’s got no chemistry with the main character compared to Bella of all people and there’s also the situation Alice and Jasper have that makes it seem as if the story is going to have a love triangle. Also the main character seems to switch up personalities at random since he can go from being calm to arrogant out of nowhere lol (There’s a lot of simp shit with Alice too even though the author said it was only for ONE chapter it keeps happening)
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main character is engaging and very interesting; pace neither slow nor too rushed; original and exciting plot development... overall: an excellent story!
it's very clearly either AI written or AI assisted writing so much that it almost makes no difference.
. Damn, that's normal. I'm glad I read past chapters 10-15. You were just getting going. The first 15+ chapters are overly complicated with turns of phrase. I don't know how to describe it properly... when you read something like that, it's just too much. This is ... Like a long formula, how to write the number "pi" beyond the 2nd decimal place, complicated, beautiful and absolutely unnecessary. But I like your development of the story, this perspective is refreshing. I'm waiting to see how it goes further.
so sad author using click baits and bot comments to boost his fanfic popularity and many users are to stupid to realize the author's diabolical schemes
Hey author Great story💯🫶🏽😌, Great quality 🤌🏽🤌🏽and writing is Fabulous 🤌🏽🤌🏽, far more better than the low quality cliche shit twilight Fanfic that already exists in this Platform. Good Job author you have my support and my Stones for you. Keep write these high quality chapter I will be waiting for them to read.
(I don't speak English, sorry if it's illegible)Honestly, I really like the relationship between the characters slowly but surely, not suddenly like many other fanfics where in the second chapter they are already declaring eternal love,I also like that the protagonist makes mistakes like any normal person, that he is not a perfect being as other stories often fail to be, But what I like most is that the author listens to the advice in the comments and improves as the story progresses.
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I really think you're dragging the story out too much, which made me dislike it, adding other minor but present things. Writing Quality: 5 Updating: 5 Story Development: 2 Character Design: 2 Background: 0 I hope the story goes well for you, bro. After all, I see you're putting effort into it.
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Honestly, the Twilight movies always felt like a parody of teen drama. Across all of them, the only real “action” was growling and showing fangs. Nothing ever really happened. This fanfic fixes that—and more. It actually made me think about what Twilight could have been if the story had been handled properly. This version gives us a solid plot, well-developed characters, and a main character who isn’t brainless or overpowered. He makes mistakes, learns, and grows from them, which makes him way more relatable. Even the OC characters—like his grandmother—feel like they have real presence. She doesn’t have tons of scenes, but you can tell there’s a deeper story behind her. She clearly knows more than she lets on, and I really hope the next volume sheds some light on her past. Overall, a really well-written fanfic that takes the original concept and does something genuinely good with it. Definitely worth reading.
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