Ultimate Herrsher in DxD

LV 3

Salmon_El_Solomon

This is not to insult or offend anyone, this is my opinion. I honestly don't know what I was expecting when I started reading this, but I must say that I ended up disappointed. many totally unnecessary time jumps, the "plot" advances very quickly, the power levels are a disaster, more than anything the powers of the characters, the clear example is in the rating game chapters, the MC having difficulties with someone who He only attacks with fire, one of his powers being the embodiment of the concept of fire... Another thing is the severe nerf that both the MC and his friends have, who are herrschers, incarnations of concepts, beings capable of destroying countries - continents from birth... according to the power level of dxd they would be seredñs from maximum Satan to super demons or god kings like Zeus, amatersu

LV 4

Helia_King

I like the it and all it needs is for the grammar to be worked on

LV 4

lolhehe101

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍it good. grammar need some work at the start but it really good.

LV 3

Pika_sama

I think it's pretty good, I hope it doesn't fall off and continues. [img=önerilen][img=önerilen][img=önerilen][img=güncelleme][img=güncelleme][img=güncelleme][img=güncelleme][img=güncelleme][img=güncelleme][img=güncelleme][img=güncelleme]

LV 1

Elemise

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LV 2

Stanie_Thomas

I have come to greatly enjoyed this 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 2

consequence

I've never played honkai impact.So I was thinking I won't understand anything but I was wrong it's good.thats's it just wanted to say don't drop it

LV 15

Kreuz

great idea. but the plot is progressing abruptly, and grammar needs some work. 🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧

LV 4

Yuri_in_HAREM_is_X

yuei in HAREM???????????????????

LV 2

InfinityWolfS2

Não vou mentir dizendo que é muito ruim, por que não é. A novel estava boa "pelo menos para mim" por volta do capitulo 53, quando começa a luta depois disso foi simplesmente pura besteira. Não me importei muito porque o Ator(a) disse que escreve só por diversão então não espere nada sério daqui. Inimigos tendo UP de poder super aleatória foi oque mais me chateou. Dito isso desejo uma boa sorte para o autor(a), e desejo que leve sua novel para onde você deseja, até mais. Qualidade de escrita (5) Estabilidade de atualizações(5) Desenvolvimento de histórias(3) Design de personagem(2) Fundo Mundia(3)

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Daoist23ptOr

This fanfic is very good, unfortunately the grammar is still not good, but I still like it.......................... ...........................😁

LV 3

Episode_18

i like your two project, everything is good, just keep working for the better grammar [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 12

Kono_Dio_na

need to get better at your grammar and spelling mistakes.

LV 6

Siegfrized

Honkai Story, well Honkai Element i mean in DXD. Here 5 Star, but for now let read it and see how it goes. ................................................

LV 3

LunaKindred

Not the best, but one of the enjoyable fics I've read. You just need to add rita, dudu, sirin hov, kiana, mei, and bronya, and that would be perfect

LV 3

Luis_Contreras_248

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LV 12

Teraten

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JEVIL_devil13

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