Reviews of Undone - An Undead LitRPG Series by JacobCavalida - Webnovel

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8Eight

This is shockingly well written It’s only 8 chapters in so saying much about characters and world is a bit eh Story development is interesting However I do wish the character would ask some more questions, and check what is undead system can do Character and world is fine, a bit barebones but again 8 chapters

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Pluto_Is_Planet

This is one heck of a good story so far i really enjoy how well written and how the story is going so far. .

4yr
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Shruikan2211

By the time I writing this, this story has 13 chapters so far. The writing quality is outstanding and I would even say on par with regular books you would find in stores. As for the story, of course with only 13 chapters there is not a whole lot to discuss about, but still one can see a certain direction the author is going. Character development and World building is all there and its only just getting started. I’m very satisfied with what the author is doing so far and trust him to keep up this very well-paced story. He keeps updating on a daily basis, so also nothing to “complain” here. So in the end I would definitely recommend this story for everyone and encourage to at least try the first Chapters.

4yr
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zd4zaaa

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3yr
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jonas0017

Why are there just

4yr
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Snoodle_Booper

Don't mind be just trying to get this novel get rated well (I love non human mcs they're always more interesting than the normal human ones storywise)

4yr
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InnerVoice

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CLOUD_A

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8Eight

This is shockingly well written It’s only 8 chapters in so saying much about characters and world is a bit eh Story development is interesting However I do wish the character would ask some more questions, and check what is undead system can do Character and world is fine, a bit barebones but again 8 chapters

4yr
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Pluto_Is_Planet

This is one heck of a good story so far i really enjoy how well written and how the story is going so far. .

4yr
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Shruikan2211

By the time I writing this, this story has 13 chapters so far. The writing quality is outstanding and I would even say on par with regular books you would find in stores. As for the story, of course with only 13 chapters there is not a whole lot to discuss about, but still one can see a certain direction the author is going. Character development and World building is all there and its only just getting started. I’m very satisfied with what the author is doing so far and trust him to keep up this very well-paced story. He keeps updating on a daily basis, so also nothing to “complain” here. So in the end I would definitely recommend this story for everyone and encourage to at least try the first Chapters.

4yr
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zd4zaaa

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

3yr
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jonas0017

Why are there just

4yr
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Snoodle_Booper

Don't mind be just trying to get this novel get rated well (I love non human mcs they're always more interesting than the normal human ones storywise)

4yr
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InnerVoice

That picture gives me the chills That picture gives me the chills That picture gives me the chills That picture gives me the chills That picture gives me the chills That picture gives me the chills That picture gives me the chills That picture gives me the chills That picture gives me the chills That picture gives me the chills That picture gives me the chills That picture gives me the chills That picture gives me the chills That picture gives me the chills That picture gives me the chills

4yr
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CLOUD_A

Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice

4yr
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