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though the English needs work... the characters are well portrayed, you can truly feel there emotion, and the pace of the story is not fast nor slow, just right... **. overall I like the story
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I am on chapter 54 at the moment. So far this has been amazing. I love everything about it. The character development is awesome. The detail and everything in it has captivated me. [img=update][img=update]
Then author, release the chapters there for poor people like me, blessed be your author to allow our reading in your book. Amen I will be leaving 5 stars for a bribe attempt
the book is really good i havent read enough of it to really make a decision but i actually think that i will enjoy this the beggining confused me a bit but it still grabbed my attention
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this is such a good book so far making you want to read it more and more everyday with out stopping I can't wait to keep reading it everyday
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i would like to say i really enjoyed your book and if you every decide to make another one im sure it'll be just as good and i recommend this book to most readers
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Story is very hard to read at least early for me, it's a combination of questionable grammar and sentence structure, weird pacing and unexplained concepts. It felt really hard to immerse myself when I had to reread several paragraphs a chapter to try and understand what's going on and still end up asking "what's this? What's that? When was that explained?" the premise itself is very interesting and has potential for world building and maybe it gets better later but I couldn't force myself to push through it. In all this is in desperate need of an editor.
Writing is ok, story is messy and confusing, some dialouge is cringy especially the nightmare guy though I think he's supposed to be like that, the update speed is fast though
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This book is insane 🤣 great story about man with his past reincarnation in his body and item creation system. His easy control losing is great and sense of humor is perfect.
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well well...another work of brother Paranoid, what can I say, if you have already read his previous works then in this novel you will get surprised because author improved quite a lot ,for example you can see he is using more new vocabularies ( and it seems he also calmd down his fetishes too😅 ) and grammars are also better but sometimes still you can find some misspelled words or repeated ones... the story is cliche at the start but it will turn into a interesting plot, for a fantasy story it's good... the romance part is also satisfying and is not rushed...but at the beginning you will think MC has some mental problems but don't think too much about it...😅 and for the harem part, I can't say much now since MC has 1 wife till now and another woman who is in love with him too till chapter 59, but author said it will not be a big harem ... so give this novel a try you will not get disappointed 👍🏻 . . . Update stability: 7/10 Writing quality: 7/10 Characters: 8/10 World background: 9/10 Romance: 7.5/10 Author interaction with readers: 10/10
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I am the author of Versus Reincarnations novel. So if there are any questions, then feel free to ask me here. Other than that, I can only hope the new readers would at least read first ten initial chapters to judge the book. I am giving myself 5.0 starts because I am hypocrite by the way ;)
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though the English needs work... the characters are well portrayed, you can truly feel there emotion, and the pace of the story is not fast nor slow, just right... **. overall I like the story
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I am on chapter 54 at the moment. So far this has been amazing. I love everything about it. The character development is awesome. The detail and everything in it has captivated me. [img=update][img=update]
Then author, release the chapters there for poor people like me, blessed be your author to allow our reading in your book. Amen I will be leaving 5 stars for a bribe attempt
the book is really good i havent read enough of it to really make a decision but i actually think that i will enjoy this the beggining confused me a bit but it still grabbed my attention
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this is such a good book so far making you want to read it more and more everyday with out stopping I can't wait to keep reading it everyday
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i would like to say i really enjoyed your book and if you every decide to make another one im sure it'll be just as good and i recommend this book to most readers
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Story is very hard to read at least early for me, it's a combination of questionable grammar and sentence structure, weird pacing and unexplained concepts. It felt really hard to immerse myself when I had to reread several paragraphs a chapter to try and understand what's going on and still end up asking "what's this? What's that? When was that explained?" the premise itself is very interesting and has potential for world building and maybe it gets better later but I couldn't force myself to push through it. In all this is in desperate need of an editor.
Writing is ok, story is messy and confusing, some dialouge is cringy especially the nightmare guy though I think he's supposed to be like that, the update speed is fast though
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this novel doesn't deserve to be rank 200+, this novel doesn't deserve to be rank 200+, this novel doesn't deserve to be rank 200+, important thing need to be said thrice
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This book is insane 🤣 great story about man with his past reincarnation in his body and item creation system. His easy control losing is great and sense of humor is perfect.
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well well...another work of brother Paranoid, what can I say, if you have already read his previous works then in this novel you will get surprised because author improved quite a lot ,for example you can see he is using more new vocabularies ( and it seems he also calmd down his fetishes too😅 ) and grammars are also better but sometimes still you can find some misspelled words or repeated ones... the story is cliche at the start but it will turn into a interesting plot, for a fantasy story it's good... the romance part is also satisfying and is not rushed...but at the beginning you will think MC has some mental problems but don't think too much about it...😅 and for the harem part, I can't say much now since MC has 1 wife till now and another woman who is in love with him too till chapter 59, but author said it will not be a big harem ... so give this novel a try you will not get disappointed 👍🏻 . . . Update stability: 7/10 Writing quality: 7/10 Characters: 8/10 World background: 9/10 Romance: 7.5/10 Author interaction with readers: 10/10
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I am the author of Versus Reincarnations novel. So if there are any questions, then feel free to ask me here. Other than that, I can only hope the new readers would at least read first ten initial chapters to judge the book. I am giving myself 5.0 starts because I am hypocrite by the way ;)