A sword that is rumored to betray its master. What tragedy will the next successor confront? An overwhelming submission to fate or the dawn of a new tale?
First of all you seem like newbie. The way you write makes u bad writer, there are a lot of other word choices that will make the story more suitable.
The way the nightmare was described seemed a bit odd. For better writing you must read a lot. Take your time to write a good stuff.
Good luck.
First of all you seem like newbie. The way you write makes u bad writer, there are a lot of other word choices that will make the story more suitable. The way the nightmare was described seemed a bit odd. For better writing you must read a lot. Take your time to write a good stuff. Good luck.