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When I Saw You

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Author: My_Day

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This is a short story and when I say short, I mean real short.

It's a short story about loving a girl from afar.

I know, the synopsis are boring, but you can only say so much in a short story before giving everything away.

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My_Day

Interesting story I have here......*cough cough*. This is a story about a one sided love and I'd say it's portraid beautifully. And though the chapters are as short as the book itself, I truly enjoyed (writing) it.

5yr
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Marsie_1234

This story is interesting cause of the author's approach in the plot and the filler chapter was actually my favorite part. Though it was only a monologue, the chapter was very interesting as it showed the reality in our society and it revealed the hypocrisy of the adults.

6yr
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randomtrash

Its okay. Good job author. Can't wait for moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...............................

6yr
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lovechim

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2yr
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komal_Choudhary

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2yr
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Vandana_Choudhary

๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’ฎ๐Ÿ’™

2yr
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joonieslove513

๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿค๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ๐Ÿ’๐ŸคŽ

2yr
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Kriti2107

really good story! short story with impact. i have to say flow of story was not great but end was heart touching... even though it was sad one...

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gloomy

It's a nice, complicated little story...... Auther expressed so much through this short story...... In most of the stories u would find a happy ending always and sometimes u get bored by it... It's like u already know what's gonna happen in the end..... But this one is different.... Although ending is sad but in a way it's not..... Now probably I have confused u๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚.... But it's a nice story.... U shold definitely give it a try

5yr
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Minette_AJ

A beautiful reality hit short story which makes us to travel in fastasy with the touch of magical poetic lines...I really liked the part where the descriptions of the lake side and the party....The way of writing... Really!! No words....wow....I really loved it!!

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