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The character's are great! You're writing is already amazing, too. Needs some work on transitioning scenes and POVs. The vocabulary level is also high. I don't know if that's a good thing or a bad thing. I think some editing from a fresh eye will do wonders for the story. Keep it up!!!
The character's are great! You're writing is already amazing, too. Needs some work on transitioning scenes and POVs. The vocabulary level is also high. I don't know if that's a good thing or a bad thing. I think some editing from a fresh eye will do wonders for the story. Keep it up!!!