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The Third Great Ninja War.
A monstrous genius from Kirigakure, Yuki Yoru, emerges in a blaze of glory—defeating the Yellow Flash, slaying Shisui the Body Flicker, overpowering the Three Legendary Sannin, and crushing Konohagakure!
"In terms of status and position, I am the Clan Head of the Yuki Clan, and Chief of the ANBU! In terms of contributions, I led Kirigakure to destroy Konoha, seizing untold resources and riches! Third Mizukage, you must be senile—to pass your title to Yagura instead of me?!"
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Write a reviewtranslation is wild. if you have to brain melt read it (you will get brain cancer in 10 chapters)
I think the story isnt that good. Personally there are too many chinese element that just ruin the inmersion. Everybody behaves as if they are in some chinese cultivation novel... its just weird and unsettling. Overall 2.2 stars, with the Writing Quality and Update Stability being good enough to push the score above 2 stars.
At first everything goes well, but after that it's complete nonsense. 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎🐀𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠽𣠀
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The plot armor of the MC is thicker than naruto's. my take if you want to read about a teenager getting ridiculously powerful and deciding the world order you can read it.
This is my assessment when reading up to ch 30. 1. I quite like the story, but there is one thing that confuses me: why was Dui only rewarded with 100 thousand for his life?
First of all the grammar is not that good, character names are changed every few chapters and the Bleach technique names are all over the place. As for the story itself, it started nice, but somehow midway the MC started rapping women for Kekkei Genkai children. Also the MC started creating other Shinigami like himself and revived people left and right. (True revival, not using the Impure Reincarnation Technique) Anyway I lost interest when I got to chapter 111 and dropped it.
Well, I read up to chapter 100 and Shishui Uchiha is already being used as a CRA, the construction of kingdoms is too vague, you have to figure out the key points on your own (warning, they don't explain). Obviously the DARK label is missing, a part that I dislike and they don't explain is when I kidnap Pakura and I want to believe that it is for blood analysis and a test subject, not an incubator, which is not a genre that I like and of course I hate (if you have read the pakura thing you will understand what I say) in short, everything feels too vague without any depth and almost no depth in any aspect. This is my personal opinion, I hope it has been useful to you 🧐😮💨😒
Reveal SpoilerJin TL thanks for the this novel... Even if in some places their are some mistakes wear Yoru are called Night, fast checking myself Yoru translation from JP, I get it... About fanfiction, it is good, MC just bulldoze some of Konoha's main character, and I liked that type of chaos were you don't know who will die next...
i really like it enough blood and a main char that is not a good guy wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow [img=update][img=Loving it][img=update]
Pretty decent translation. Hopefully it will keep updating! It is quite enjoyable, overall. Does anyone have a link to where I can read the RAW version?
I have to say, your writing hooked me from the first line. There’s such atmosphere in every scene, it’s got that perfect comic flow without even trying. I’m a comic artist who brings stories to life through commissions, and yours sparked a ton of visual ideas. If you ever consider adapting it, I’d love to chat about possibilities. You’re welcome to reach out through Instagram (@eve_verse_) or Discord (bennett_lol).
change the title, to make mist stronger to make konoha and mist stronger,, he takes subordinate from konoha and every time they try to side with konoha for no reason,,, MC know that Obito is trying or harming his interest but like every chinese MC he swats his schemes like fly and he acts like sage that he knows everything and everything under his control, but in reality he knows nothing and doing nothing, it'll be better to take mei to take charge of mist and he do his thing,, totally waste my 4 hrs.
Really like this story. It’s unlike any other that I’ve ever read in the Naruto universe. This is the first story I’ve read where favorite characters in the Naruto universe are not spared. It is nice to read a story that isn’t revolving around the leaf village. Also, it’s nice to read a story around different shinobi village,that doesn’t have this love affair with the leaf village.
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