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Belum dibaca senang z liat gambarnya😅😅😅ntar klo udah d baca ae komen lg....suka gk suka tetap ae support 5 bintang👍🏻semoga penulis sukses slalu🙏🏻
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cerita nya mengalir dengan nyata😉😉😊😉😊😉😊😉 tapi udah di tunggu lama kok malah nggak bisa d buka????? 😢😢😢😢, aq kan jadi penasaran akut😆😄😆😄😄
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Ceritanya bagus sayang kosakata atau istilah yang dipakai tidak pas, jadi berasa machine. Misal Qi diganti prana atau tenaga dalam. Lalu cultivation diganti dengan bersemedi, kemudia teknik beladiri diganti dengan ilmu/jurus kanuragan
Cerita sangat bagus, karakter tokoh utama dan pendukung sangat kuat. Pengembangan cerita agak terlalu cepat, overall sangat bagus untuk di nikmati... Two thumbs for author....
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This is the copy of The patch of the lustful demon that the author is missing ... there is on the webnovel there until chapter 267.......................................
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Menurut penilaian ane nih novel terbilang vulgar yah, terlepas dari itu, sebelih ceritanya bagus si tokoh utama penuh ambisius. Overall okelah buat dibaca
Ceritanya seru Penggambaran latar belakang waktu dan dunia silat juga bagus Penokohan juga bagus........ Jurus yang digunakan cukup bervariasi
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Belum dibaca senang z liat gambarnya😅😅😅ntar klo udah d baca ae komen lg....suka gk suka tetap ae support 5 bintang👍🏻semoga penulis sukses slalu🙏🏻
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cerita nya mengalir dengan nyata😉😉😊😉😊😉😊😉 tapi udah di tunggu lama kok malah nggak bisa d buka????? 😢😢😢😢, aq kan jadi penasaran akut😆😄😆😄😄
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Ceritanya bagus sayang kosakata atau istilah yang dipakai tidak pas, jadi berasa machine. Misal Qi diganti prana atau tenaga dalam. Lalu cultivation diganti dengan bersemedi, kemudia teknik beladiri diganti dengan ilmu/jurus kanuragan
Cerita sangat bagus, karakter tokoh utama dan pendukung sangat kuat. Pengembangan cerita agak terlalu cepat, overall sangat bagus untuk di nikmati... Two thumbs for author....
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This is the copy of The patch of the lustful demon that the author is missing ... there is on the webnovel there until chapter 267.......................................
Sangat kereeeeeeeeeeennnnnnnnnnnn baannngggeeetttt mmmaaannnttttap pppoolllllllll Semakin di tingkatkan ... .................................
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Ceritanya seru Penggambaran latar belakang waktu dan dunia silat juga bagus Penokohan juga bagus........ Jurus yang digunakan cukup bervariasi
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