Synopsis
"Little Lass ah, look at master, don't master face look so handsome?"
"Xinghui ah, become my disciple."
"Little ball, let me cook for you!"
Xinghui stared at the three adult people in front of her, and her eyes drifted to the sky.
What sin she did in the past to meet these weird people, ah?!
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This story has promise. I am captivated by the ease at which the world is painted out to be. The english is understandable, but I wish the grammar could be reviewed. I advise using ******r words. The emotions of the character comes across so easily, it almost made me cry. Added to my collection. Keep it up!
I am not the best person to review romance fiction. The quality is ok but I recommend using Grammarly or some online corrector to make it better. The story is at the beginning of development. I don't know but I took it for something lighthearted and not serious hahaha. I will come back after some time and update the review if needed. Good luck!
An interesting story with a lot of potential! Romance and comedy its the mix of genres that I like the most. If you share my tastes then I recommend you to try this story! The writing quality its reasonable in a beginner and the stability of updates is spectacular. World background seems solid, there is a lot of secondary characters and they are getting developed nicely. However, the main character strike me as too pasive and could use a little bit of tweaking. Hopefully as the story moves forward she is going to evolve and become more lively. Overall a really good story that I am gonna add to my collection!