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It's original and good to read if you want a op mc + youtuber type of fanfic but the story is rushed which really makes me sad because it could've been so good if it wasn't so rushed there is no talking between the protagonist and antagonist just instantly cuts to the capturing the antagonist part it's bad that it got dropped because it was good
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It’s not good. Promise me to not read this cuz it’ll just go down the hill after like 20 chapters………………The straw hats stats are dumb and unexpected………New World bounty hunters comes in to hunt them in PARADISE even when their bounties aren’t even high enough to get attention………. They killed all of them, especially someone known as the ‘Snake Hands’ who use a sea stone glove with his snake like martial art to attack his enemies, and for defense he has obs haki that’ll let him see 2 sec in the future yet he got killed by the Mc cuz the Mc has 10 sec in the future obs haki…….. luffy kills people……. They still have Going Merry yet they can already kill bounty hunters from New World….. again the stats for the Straw Hats are dumb, most of them have A and S with luffy being s+ in SECOND GEAR!
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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One of my first fanfics that I read...... Still goated for me................................................................................
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THIS MUST BE MORE AWESOME IF NAMI ARE ALSO ONE OF HIS WOMAN RIGHT? WHY LEFT A WOMAN WHO LIKE YOUR DICK? NAMI ALREADY ADMITTED THAT SHE LIKED DAN SO JUST GIVE NAMI TO HIM HAHAHHAHHA
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The author is very creative...Youtuber > Transfered to One Piece World > Phone > Create Vlog > Upload the Video > Buy a Skills......I like it keep up the good work and please don't drop this
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This Fanfic is really not like the other One piece fanfics out there. Love the Story...... ...................................................Just read the book worth the time.
It's a great story, keep up the great work author-san I highly recommend it ...........................................................................................
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I wrote this fanfic just for fun on my phone. I never ask for donation or receiving any money from this. Since i'm not a native english speaker, you will find many grammar mistakes in this fanfic. Hope you enjoy to read this fanfic. Also don't force me or tell me to fix the grammar since i don't have time and i wrote this only in my free time. Thanks...
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It's original and good to read if you want a op mc + youtuber type of fanfic but the story is rushed which really makes me sad because it could've been so good if it wasn't so rushed there is no talking between the protagonist and antagonist just instantly cuts to the capturing the antagonist part it's bad that it got dropped because it was good
pls continue this work its amazing i love it . ... .. ... ... .. .. l.. ... ..dddnhxjxiccdjfncjdjdjdjdjxjxjxjxjxjxxjdjdbdbdhdjdjfjfjcfjcjfngngjgjggjgjgjgjfjff
It’s not good. Promise me to not read this cuz it’ll just go down the hill after like 20 chapters………………The straw hats stats are dumb and unexpected………New World bounty hunters comes in to hunt them in PARADISE even when their bounties aren’t even high enough to get attention………. They killed all of them, especially someone known as the ‘Snake Hands’ who use a sea stone glove with his snake like martial art to attack his enemies, and for defense he has obs haki that’ll let him see 2 sec in the future yet he got killed by the Mc cuz the Mc has 10 sec in the future obs haki…….. luffy kills people……. They still have Going Merry yet they can already kill bounty hunters from New World….. again the stats for the Straw Hats are dumb, most of them have A and S with luffy being s+ in SECOND GEAR!
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Best writing and romance book! I like when Dan is powerful I hope he would beat fat te[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]ach
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
more pls..........,.........................[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
One of my first fanfics that I read...... Still goated for me................................................................................
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Good xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx xxx
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THIS MUST BE MORE AWESOME IF NAMI ARE ALSO ONE OF HIS WOMAN RIGHT? WHY LEFT A WOMAN WHO LIKE YOUR DICK? NAMI ALREADY ADMITTED THAT SHE LIKED DAN SO JUST GIVE NAMI TO HIM HAHAHHAHHA
Good novel men keep it up Good novel men keep it up Good novel men keep it up Good novel men keep it up Good novel men keep it up Good novel men keep it up
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please publish more chapters please publish more chapters please publish more chapters please publish more chapters please publish more chapters
would have been better if release rate was increased😆😡👮😈🐱🐶😴👟👞👞👞👟👟😃🐱👞😇🐶🐩😈👟🐱💄🏠🔝🏠👞🏠👞🏠🐶🐱🐶🐱👞👟👞🏠🐶🐱😈🐱🐶🏠👞🏠👞🐱🐶🐱🐶
The author is very creative...Youtuber > Transfered to One Piece World > Phone > Create Vlog > Upload the Video > Buy a Skills......I like it keep up the good work and please don't drop this
Nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nicenice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice
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its great**************************************††#******%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%^^^^^^^^÷\$÷\`∆uzususjIsksisisososisisisssisisisisizisis
This Fanfic is really not like the other One piece fanfics out there. Love the Story...... ...................................................Just read the book worth the time.
It's a great story, keep up the great work author-san I highly recommend it ...........................................................................................
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I wrote this fanfic just for fun on my phone. I never ask for donation or receiving any money from this. Since i'm not a native english speaker, you will find many grammar mistakes in this fanfic. Hope you enjoy to read this fanfic. Also don't force me or tell me to fix the grammar since i don't have time and i wrote this only in my free time. Thanks...